hey chapter 9...can't wait..here s the big thing..will Van go threw with it.......ohh..wait to see whaT Van does.. this a song fic 4 today...I mean not a songifc but deliver me from broken down palace goes good with it and brittney'speass new track opps I did it again number 8..like last kiss or sometihng..goes well too..

Hitomi's competition

Chapter 9: AHH KILL VAN, I HATE WHAT HE'S ABOUT TO DO..DON'T KISS...death...wings of a feather..!

Hitomi was out of Faniella and was sitting on the grass under a tree in the middle of a vally. She was crying softly..

" I have to do something" said Hitomi " but i can't "

Van took Yuka's hand and started to walk down the long aisle..

Hitomi do something, you've got to...said a voice..Hitomi looked around..

" grandmother" said Hitomi..

" Hitomi, go now..Van isn't supposed to wed Yuka, he's to be with you and you know that" said Grandmother..

" what i can I do say don''t kiss that didn't work the last time" said Hitomi..

" Hitomi go before it's to late" said Grandmother..

" what can i do though"

" it will come, just go"

" right" Hitomi ran off.

kei ran faster than every..she was almost there..

Van and Yuka reached the end of the aisle and reached the man...he began..

Trang waited for Hitomi, she saw her running..

" thats it love, run to your love" said Trang..

Hitomi to her it seemed like she was being carried by the wind, she ran faster than every..

" thats it" said Trang she raised her hand and aimed it at the ground..once Hitomi came nearly under it she snapped her hand and the ground split apart..

Hitomi was running and than suddenly the ground gave way.. Hitomi stopped at the edge..She turned and saw a girl..she was standing in the middle of the sky..

" How can she fly, she has no wings" said Hitomi..

" I can not let you get near van" said Trang..

" uh, why are you doing this' said Hitomi..

" my fate.our fate depend on it.." said trang..

" uh, I need to see Van"

" you can only see him if you get cross this cliff, which is not likely" said Trang..

" lets see" said Hitomi backing up and starting to run..she ran as fast as she could and than jumped..

"ahhhhhhhhh" Hitomi fell she caught the edge of the other cliff and started to slipp down. She grabbed onto the grass on the edge and tried to pull herself up..

" Hmm you won't make it in time" said Trang..

" see" said Trang she waved her hand and a image of Van and Yuka appeared..

" Van" said Hitomi..

" you think you can make him stop. why don't you talk to him" said trang..

" how can I " asked Hitomi..

" use your thoughts" said Trang.. " you'll see he doesn't want you" said Trang..

Van said Hitomi threw her thoughts.

Van suddenly heard a voice.
Van, it's Hitomi talk to me threw your thoughts

Hitomi,, what..how are you

Van, please don't marry her..

I will

No it will not work out..she's not for you..I am..

no your wrong

please don't

yeah I am..hitomi i waited and your cards and everything it should me that you aren't for me..

VAN DON't//

" Do you take Van Fanel as your husband" asked the preist..

" I do" said Yuka..

" And You Van Fanel do you take Yuka Dutch as your wife" said the Preist..

Van NO DON'T IT WILL BE DEATH AND.NO DON'T

i'm sorry,, no NO I'M NOT..WATCH AND FEEL LIKE I FELT WHEN I SAW YOU And ALAN KISS ON THT BRIDE HITOMI, YOU'LL SEE THAT THE WORLD DOES'NT SURROUND YOU..

Van..

" I do" Van kissed Yuka and the crowd cheered..

" VAN DONT'' SCREAMED Hitomi..

" haah you see, well i have to go now tata..Hitomi'' trang disappeared.. Hitomi put her head on the grass. Her eyes turned black..

" HITOMI" SCREAMED Kei running out from the forest..

" van" Hitomi whispered..she let go of the grass and fell into the darkness..

' NO HITOMI" SCREAMED kEI..She ran over to the cliff and jumped in after hitomi..

Kei closed her eyes and wings sprouted from her back ripping her shirt a little bit she flapped towards Hitomi..she grabbed Hitomi and held her close.Kei shook her

" Hitomi..ahh" Kei starred into her black eyes..

" oh no.." Kei flapped to the surface. She carried Hitomi and flew into the sky..

" I gotta get help" she said..

2 B' continued..

i would have made it longer but..i'm tired..I just wrote three long chapters not including this one..!