I call those "feeling" stories, I get sooo into these feelings that I
just write,and it's not till after that I realize I could have added
this..or included that..taken that part out...

Dave didn't die.:-) sorry I didn't clarify that. The storyline was
that he was a cutter, he cut into his skin when he felt bad,and he
kept it a secret for along time.Often,people who are abused will do,
as a silent cry for help.

His last cut was soo deep that Jing Mei saw the blood.But he's still
alive, just in treatment, I guess.