This is Jeanie.
Anna and I seperated. I was left alone with a bunch of wooden snakes crisscrossing across the ceiling and a hidious painting of Snape smirking at me.
It didn't take long for Tom to freak out. Only half a minute after Anna and I went different ways, he came running in the Common Room. I kept still. I hid in the shadows of an abnormally large chair.
Tommy relaxed. He sat on a comfy sofa next to the fireplace.
"It was just a dream, Tommy," he told himself, "and I bet there's NOBODY in your room, and no one's trying to hunt you down..."
I would have chuckled happily at the thought of scaring him like Anna scared him.
To my surprise, he fell asleep in his comfort.
Oh no, what WILL I do, him sleeping is ruining the plan! I thought.
Then, Anna sneaked up next to me, in the darkness cast by the mammoth-sized chair. "Oh no, he's sleeping, isn't he? Well, go wake him up, that's your part of the plan, and don't be scared to speak out stuff that will make him scream." she said.
I grew strong by her encouraging words. I stood up.
"Tom... TOM..." I groaned in a low voice.
He turned in his sleep. I kept calling his name, and he kept tossing, and turning.
Anna was still hiding.
"HEhEhEhehehehe..." I chuckled like an evil ghoul.
"(Yawn) Who goes there?" Tom woke up at last and rubbed his eyes. As if he could actually SEE properly in this darkness.
"We've got you now, Tom..." I spoke.
Whimpers. Was that really Tom WHIMPERING?
"W-what do you want from me?" he said.
"Your DEATH, your disappearance from this world, OUR world, which will soon by ruled by the greatest of all; the Dark Lord..." I spoke.
"AAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!!" Tom screamed.
He ran away from the Common Room, into the north corridor, and out of our sight.
Then I heard Anna clapping.
"Excellent, Jeanie! You're a true actress! You're basically one of us for REAL!" she exclaimed, "That ending was incredible."
"Thanks! And I could hear you threatening Tom in 308... You were cool! I liked that groaning, ghostly, raspy voice... that scared the daylight out of his Prefect mind!" I complimented back.
We slapped high-5s and headed to our Hufflepuff Common Room, where we were waiting for the others to finish him up and come.
That was great! I really want to be one of them, and I'm so happy they like me!

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