Ok, well this is just a short little thing I wrote, I am
working on he sequel to "A Place To Belong" (if you haven't read it yet,
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE r/r!!!!!!) but
this little thing just popped into my head one day and begged to be written
lol. This isn't really written for any
two specific characters, I could see it with any two people, as long as one of
them is a guy lol. It's about the pain
of a break up, and it's really short so please r/r I need it!!!!! Thanks!
Loves you all!
"Listen," he said, his voice never
wavering, like a rock in a river that the water has run over so many times that
it becomes smooth and even. He looked
up at me, his eyes clear and calm, like a placid lake. The many colors swirl together and pull me
in. I loved those eyes, so many times
that I had looked into them. Yet even
more, I loved the man behind them. He
bent his head slowly and looked at his hands.
I blessed his fingers. He was so
handsome there, looking towards the ground, absentmindedly biting his lip
gently, those lips that I loved to kiss.
The very lips that usually displayed the smile that I dreamed about, but
there was no smile now. Tall, strong,
brave, sweet, devoted; in a word, perfect.
No one in their wildest dreams could ever hope for anyone more. Yet, as we stood there, how was I to know
that my perfect bliss was about to be shattered?
How was I
to know that he would soon turn and leave, and never return? How was I to know that I only had moments
left in which to love him? How was I to
know that the days in which he would love me in return were over? How was I to know about the searing pain
that would overtake my entire body? How
was I to know that I would feel as though my very soul had been ripped from my
feeble physical being? How was I to
know that I would soon feel as though my core had been engulfed in sweltering
flames that only loving, and being loved in return could quench? How was I to know that if a dagger had been
plunged into the deepest regions of my heart and then drawn out again
mercilessly, it would still pale in comparison to the ache that would soon
overpower my mind? How was I to know
that I was to feel a torture akin to being swallowed alive in tongues of an inferno? How was I to know that I would soon be
gasping to draw breath? How was I to
know that two small words could bring my entire world, the entire life that I
had come to know, love, cherish and protect, how was I to know that two mere
words would bring it all crashing down at my feet? How was I to know that words could wound more than that most
violent of all weapons?
He opened
his mouth. "It's over."
How was I to know that love could be so painful?
kk, what did ya think?
U know what to do now!!! *Cough*
review! *cough* lol thanks!!!