This is my first story on something like this, so I'm sorry if it's not that good.
Also this story will have lemons, gore and torture so if you can't handle that stuff then please do not read this, I don't want my readers to get sick. But if your fine with that then keep reading. Oh and before I forget, Naruto is going to be twisted as fuck and will have a harem.
Harem: Anko, tsunade, Ino, Hinata, Tsume and Tayuya because I think they are hot as fuck and I might add on to it, so if you want anyone leave me a message
Oh and I don't own Naruto...although I wish I did
"Demon/Jutsu" speaking
'Demon' thinking
"Speaking"
'Thinking'
Anyways let's get this story going!
Rengoku was walking down the streets of Konoha, it was his first time there and he was enjoying the show of lights in the sky. The fireworks had red, white and orange.
After walking for about 10 minutes trying find a place where he could eat, and if he got lucky a place that would sever sweet potato's. Fortunately for him he found a place just in front of a ramen stand called Ramen Ichiraku. As Rengoku walked into the small shop, he looked over to the waitress at the front desk and ask for a table so he could order some food. After the waitress sat him down he ordered right away as soon as he saw what they had. Sweet potatoes.
When Rengoku's food got to him he started to eat, with every bite he would shout UMAI. Making the customers of the store give him weird looks. Sadly for Rengoku he wouldn't able to finish his food as he heard a mob of people chanting "THE DEMONS LIFE ENDS TODAY!" Rengoku looked up wounding what was happening, he got up and paid for his meal and left the store to start tailing the mob to find out what was happening and to make sure that they would be okay.
After 5 minutes of hearing different things about a so called demon child Rengoku started to think that all this people where marching to their deaths. Because they didn't have the right weapon to kill a demon. They then arrived at a run down apartment building. But as soon as Rengoku was about to act he saw people start to drag out a young blond kid form the old building. When he look down at the people holding the onto the kid, he could see cuts and bruises and they didn't heal right away like a demons would. Rengoku's mind instantly knew that this kid was not a demon. He jump on to a building to get a better look to see if he could get the kid out of there with out the mod knowing that he was the one to save the kid, after he surveyed the area, he got down from the building was and ran with inhuman speeds and grabbed the kid before the mob could do drag him away.
The mob was shock when the demon brat just disappeared out of nowhere with a flash of red and orange.
Rengoku had ran far from the spot that he was at and ended up in a forest, Rengoku had made sure to hold on to the kid to make sure that he wouldn't fall from how fast he was going. After making sure the kids was fine. The kid was fine and somehow the cuts and bruises were gone with out a trace. Although the kid was passed out from how fast he started to go. Rengoku gave a small chuckle and sat him down gently to make sure he didn't harm the boy anymore then he already was.
After 20 minutes the young blonde started to move showing he was waking up, the young blonde head moved his head up and started to look around not seeing the mob, but as soon as he relieved that he was alone, in the first he got scared. All he remembered was getting dragged out of his home and a flash of red and orange came out of nowhere, then his vision fading to black. Rengoku seeing that the blonde was freaking out decided to speak up but not with his usual loud voice because he didn't want to scare the kid anymore then he already was.
"Clam down, your safe now. No one can hurt you now" Rengoku said with a clam voice making the kid's stiff shoulders relax a bit, Rengoku decided to speak up again. "My name is Rengoku the flame Hashire, what is your name?" And with that said Rengoku waited to hear the kid's response and after a minute the young blonde spoke. "My name is Naruto" the now known Naruto said in a very shy fashion after all this person just saved him. Naruto was about to speak when Rengoku ask him a question, "Why were those people dragging you out of your house" Rengoku said with a serious tone in his voice, Naruto just look at the ground with a sad expression before speaking, "I don't know" Naruto sniffled before speaking again "they beat me everyday but it's a lot worse during my birthday day, they usually torture me during my birthday. So thank you for saving me from that" After Naruto said that he look at Rengoku look at him and ask another question. "What happened to all you cuts and bruises?" And Naruto answered right away. "I have always been able to heal very fast, but that just makes the beatings worse" but as soon as Naruto said that, Rengoku started to produce so much killing intent that all the ninja and the hokage could feel it.
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The third hokage or Hiruzen Sarutobi was in a damn Council meeting because the Civilian side called one and said it was important but so far it was not. "This are all issues that could have been discussed during the monthly meetings, why are we here" said Hiruzen, all of the Shinobi side agreed with Hiruzen on this. The Civilian side didn't say anything. Making Hiruzen and all the Shinobi think that somethings going on and they didn't know it. Hiruzen started to speak with a low voice and a little killing intent making all the Civilians sweat. "What did you do?" This made all the Civilians get scared because they know that right now the demon brat was being killed or going through hell. Sadly for the Civilian side Hiruzen knew that something is happening to Naruto.
"What. Did. You" Hiruzen shouted before he was cut off by a killing intent that was low kage Level. This made Everyone tense up a bit. It then stop, scaring the living shit out of the Civilians. It made the Shinobi side and Hiruzen know that something was wrong now.
Hiruzen look at the Civilians And said something that would scare them to death. "If that was Naruto and if he is hurt or was hurt. Im going to kill you one by one." And one of the people on the Shinobi said named Tsume Inuzuke said something to them as well. "If Naruto is hurt I'm going to let my dogs rip your balls and breast off" and with that Hiruzen and the Shinobi's left.
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As Rengoku let his killing intent out, he stopped because he saw the young boy on the ground crying. At this moment Rengoku knew that he would help this boy become something getter then him. Rengoku then grabbed the boy into a hug and told him something that would change him for the better. "If you are feeling disheartened, that you are somehow not enough, set your heart ablaze. Dry your eyes and look ahead."
This made Naruto stop crying and made him look up. He made eye contact with Rengoku and ask him something. "Will you train me?" And with that said the fire in Naruto's heart stared to burn a bright flame. Rengoku started to smile, A very big smile and with that he said yes. This made Naruto cry again. But not tears of sadness but tears of joy and happiness. And Naruto just hugged Rengoku harder then before.
And this was the scene that the Hokage and the Shonbi Side saw, two blondes hugging, but one had red tips in his hair and had a robe that had flames all along the bottom.
The Hokage smiled when he saw this, but he knew that this person was dangerous, his aura was a raging flame that would protect what he thought was precious to him, and he knew that this new man thought Naruto was precious. he then looked at Naruto and his eyes widened when he saw what was happening. Naruto's aura was like a raging flame as well but something was different, it was more sinister, more dangerous. Then it happened. Naruto's aura turned in to a nine tail fox grinning like mad. But the next thing made everyone expect Rengoku and Tsume scared for their life. Naruto's power went through the roof, it was like the fox got out but it was stronger so much stronger. Rengoku look surprised at first but then his eyes showed a bright flame of determination, because he knew that his new student could learn all of the flame forms and could make new ones. Tsume on the other hand was was getting wetter by the minute from the power output.
And then it stop, because Naruto fell asleep In Rengoku's arms. The Hokage then stepped up to the blonde man with anger in his eyes. "What did you just do to Naruto!" Shouted the old man, Rengoku just look at the old man with confusion. "I didn't do anything, that was him. He's going to make a good student, I believe he can learn all of the forms of flame style and even make new ones" Rengoku said with a burning passion and this made Hiruzen and everyone else got scared expect Tsume who was just horny at hearing this.
Then the Hokage walked up to Rengoku and ask him a question. "I would like to have a word with you in my office if you don't mind" and Rengoku looked up at the new person and just smiled after a minute he spoke up. "No I wouldn't mind but I would like to take my new student with me, after all we don't want the mob finding him" Rengoku said and looked down at the now asleep kid in his lap and arms he then spoke again. "I can tell he will be amazing in the future." And with that Rengoku stood up and put the sleeping blonde on this back. The Hokage looked happy that someone was going to train the young blonde but he felt bad for Naruto's enemy's.
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All around the world people stared to sneeze and felt a shiver run down their back
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But back with the Hokage and Rengoku they were now in the Hokage's office and they were speaking about Naruto's new training. "That's a lot of training for someone so young Rengoku are you sure he's ready for that?" Ask the Hokage with a nervous smile, he knew the young boy is going to go through hell with the training. "I mastered flame breathing when I was 20 but I can tell he can master it in less then ten years" Rengoku said with pride in his voice knowing that Naruto could do it. And with that the Hokage node and spoke again. "Okay I'll trust you, but it's getting late so, Naruto is going to need to wake up early so let us get to bed. Good night Rengoku" Hiruzen spoke and left his office and Rengoku nodded leaving as well.
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Hiruzen walking back into the council room. He saw all of the civilians a sleep and he got a sinister grin. "WAKE UP, OR ILL GUT YOU LIKE A FISH" Hiruzen shouted making everyone wake up, the room started to fill with the stench of piss. This made Hiruzen laugh out loud, and making all the civilians give him a nasty glare. Hiruzen stop laughing and took on a fave that showed no remorse. "Anbu send them to TNI, oh and tell Tsume that her dogs can get a nice snake out of them" and with that the Anbu took the civilians away.
AND THAT IS CHAPTER ONE DONE
I hope you guys enjoyed the first chapter it was fun to make although some of my stuff keep getting deleted but hey that's fine, I think I made it better every time it got deleted.
Alsooo torture ideas I need some. I have some good ideas I just need more. Buut that's it for now
BUUUT I would love some feedback although if your just gonna clown on it fuck off this my first time
