Preamble.
Provisional preliminary note:
"Chapters from 1 to 14 in a heavy process of revision, adjustment and small rewriting until this message is discarded"
Author's Note #1: Clarification.
Hello, before you start reading I would like to share with you that English is not my mother tongue nor the language with which I perform in my daily work.
Author's Note #2: Format Disclaimer.
Previously, there was a longer explanation here, but in order to keep it short, easy and concise, as the great priest Saitama preaches in his gospel to his disciples, this section has been redone.
Dialogues:
Many of you may be used to a format like this:
"Kingu," said Okamaitachi, lying on the couch, stroking herself and partially covering herself with sheets. "Draw me as one of your beloved waifus."
In the following story, a format like this will be handled:
—Kingu —Said Okamaitachi, lying on the couch, stroking herself and partially covering herself with sheets—. Draw me as one of your beloved waifus.
Non-Indirect internal dialogues:
Many of you may be used to a format like this:
'No matter how hard I try, I can't get the full potential out of all these powers!' Fubuki thought in frustration, exhausted after her intensive private training practice. 'If only I had the same amount of abominable aura as my sister...'
Or maybe like this:
No matter how hard I try, I can't get the full potential out of all these powers! Fubuki thought in frustration, exhausted after her intensive private training practice. If only I had the same amount of abominable aura as my sister...
In the following story, a format like this will be handled:
«No matter how hard I try, I can't get the full potential out of all these powers!» Fubuki thought in frustration, exhausted after her intensive private training practice. «If only I had the same amount of abominable aura as my sister...».
Note:
I know this format may seem awkward and strange, but it is the one that has best allowed me to proceed with this story to date. If in the future there will be adjustments, that remains to be seen.
As for you, dear reader, in the same way that people from all over the world adapt to read the stories in the English format, I invite you to give this format a try.
If before or after that, you find it demotivating, thank you for your time in any case. And if you decide to continue, thank you very much anyway, and I hope you find an interesting story as far as I can.
Author's Note #3: Thank you.
Many thanks to all the readers who enjoy reading this story. Whether they follow, favorite or are silent readers who prefer not to speak out; is quite appreciated.
Also, I want to leave thanks to those who have left a comment:
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To everyone who has left multiple comments:
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And to all the mysterious "Guest" immersed in the world of anonymity.
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Last edit (13/Oct/2022)
