Update
Hello everybody! I sincerely apologies for the lack of updates for the past 2 or so moths that had passed. No this fic isn't dead just on hold AND a major BTS work on my part. Busy with personal life so I essentially haven't updated 2nd Cursed Order. Now that things have slowed down I hope I get back into the groove of things and my mojo.
Thanks to the help of the reviewers, it got me thinking to evaluate my notes on the story and well... A LOT of brainstorming ensued. Planned about 4 arcs before Yuuta and Rikka steps into Antarctica and begin Grand order. And looking over the plots and stories... I feel like I put on Yuuta is on a fetch quest for Ritsuka XD. As I update the story you'll get what I mean.
Also another thing I need to add, I won't be delving into the politics of the Clock Tower and the other two Organisations of the Mage's Association. I had around 10k worths of words all written down and ran into a writers block. A friend suggested to me fic to get inspiration on how politics would essentially work in Nasuverse since JJK was also very big on bureaucratic system in its story.
Suffice to say... I got depressed and scrapped the entire thing. Compared mine to their works on the policies of the Clock Tower, its the same as HUNGRY HIPPOS to Monopoly. So yeah... a couple days of sulking on my part. For those curious which fic it was (Fate Hammer Time by Tedtherabbit) Really good series to which you guys and gals should go check out.
So... for now Im just in the process of writing the next chapter. This fic is not dead just on hold.
The next part is just for answering the past reviewers so just bits and pieces of information you can retain or forget.
Maruuchiha0: Okay yeah I may have underestimated his parameters a bit. BUT! I forgot to add in the fact that C-Ranked servant lvl is his Average. Nerfing Yuuta Okkustu? Pff! Don't worry Maruu, what is clearly presented in the Sendai Colony fight is that even when Yuuta is outnumbered, he isn't weak. So if I had list his achievements and present in servant parameter from it would be:
+Strength: C (Possibly higher) Examples - Effortlessly flingling back 2 tonnes car,
+Endurance: A (Example: Tanked a Granite Blast from Ryuu that obliterated entire buildings. Tanked further Ice missile that cracked the sky and multiple small blasts to his hands.)
+Agility: B+ (Example: Again extremely faster than Ryuu Granite Blast and capable of dodging multiple beams unscathed.)
+Mana: A+ (Example: I mean need I really elaborate?)
+Luck: C (Don't know how to quantify this. XP)
+Noble Phantasm: C-B (Basically his repertoire of abilities would often equalise most battles with his myriads of cursed techniques and other fun powers he will be acquiring. The list of what he can do is essentially:
= Reverse Cursed Techniques
= Domain Amplification + Simple Domains
= Mimicry
= RIKKA and True Form
= Domain Expansion: Dance of the Penitent Sinners
And well… he isn't even in his prime. Just like how Gojo before his death was strong, he was still considered an existence everyone was wary of. After Toji killed him, he became something everyone truly feared.
So don't worry this is going to be a long haul and by the time Yuuta breaks his chain, will he truly be… 'free'.
… Also yeah kind of agree with you with that last one, but hey I'll TRY to keep it consistent.
Thanks for the help Maruuchiha0!
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Guest: Yeah no. Fanfiction website seemed to have a bug during the time other works were also updated. The reviews seemed to be back though so Hurrah! So yeah I have seen what Yuuta has displayed in both 'Night Parade of a Hundred Demons' and the Sendai Colony clash. And yeah he has an impressive showing of capabilities in both works.
I'll take full responsibility for making that statement, because I forgot to add in the fact that Yuuta would be on AVERAGE a C Ranked servant. I think that the polished parameters are good for Maruuchiha0?
Also Nerfing the 'second only to Gojo Satoru'? Nope! Never intended to do that. What I'm worried about is making him too Overpowered when he breaks his chains. Physical parameters are at a so-so level, because when he puts on the ring shit STARTS to go whack.
For Strength, Endurance and Agility parameters could easily be enhanced by the following: Blood manipulation - Flowing Red Scale: Stack, Projection sorcery, and many other abilities Yuuta would soon acquire.
Oh and don't forget about his Domain Expansion: Dance of the Penitent Sinners. (Author's note: I'll be adding this to the fic so please give me thoughts about this fanmade Domain.)
And well, here are the adjustments! Hope it's at least close to his scaling! Thanks for the criticism Guest! (Also if possible could you create a nickname for yourself? Makes things easier to communicate with you)
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Not a Meme: Thanks for the point Notameme, Yeah… usually people like to rocket their characters into the settings. I wanted to try a different approach and make Yuuta cause some chaos in the Nasuverse for a few chapters before we get to Chaldea. Also in my planning, I realised that Yuuta is currently doing fetch quests for Ritsuka XD. Poor errand boy.
Whelp had to go back to the drawing board for it and take a step back to see the broader picture of the entire thing. Suffice to say, I was able to work some things out. So it was a positive for me.
Also if you want differences between both MC's, Here you go: Ritsuka is a strategist, while Yuuta is the vanguard. And don't worry, Ritsuka will be training with Yuuta.
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Reader: Thanks for the insight Reader! Yeah I welcome the critisicm and thankful for you defending on my behalf. Thanks for the compliments it really means a lot!
Yeah... that C stat was mainly on my part. XD I really should start and said that "Averagely, Yuuta is C all around". In terms of servant placement Yuuta is in a Niche spot with his physical parameters. When he starts using his Cursed Technique its a whole another story. (Also is it okay if you place in a nickname so I could respond directly to you?)
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Talonsytche: Thanks for the comments about their relationship! I try to keep their dynamic as natural as possible, trying not to force things out between the group and Yuuta.
Yeah I know. Thats why I like Jojo and JJK as a series when it comes to their battles. (SPOILERS FOR PART 8 OF JOJOLION)
On the surface the fight between Soft & Wet and Vitamin C is a clearcut battle between the abilities of these two. One PLUNDERS while the other SOFTENS. However in the true fight Vitamin C is always on the upper hand due to strategic placements, prep time and knowledge about his opponents.
As for Fate... well most of the time I'M going to reading into each servants NP and skills for each servants. (Funtime~) As for Yuuta's relationship with the servants... lets just say that Yuuta wasn't the person to extend his hand in friendship. That's why I have two protagnists for this story. Each one to highlight the differences and similarities for Yuuta and Ristuka. And no need to worry about Rikka, she'll be getting her spotlight.
Yes. Yes Ritsuka will be using both Magic Ciruits and Cursed Energy. Don't worry about it~ I was able to to find 3 Ways for a person to get cursed energy.
1) Is for the person to ingest a cursed object. This has been proven multiple times as an example of Yuji Itadori, Hajime Kashimo, Ryu Ishigori & Takako Uro. The problem of this, is that the vessel must be extremely gifted either physically or spiritually otherwise the object will possess them.
2) Is to readjust your brain for cursed techniques. Can be seen with Junpei Yoshino & Tsumiki Fushiguro. As they were people who started out with no cursed energy at all but was able to obtain it after a period of time. The problem is with this method, they have to be experimented on at an early age so they familiarise with the energy.
Option 1 & 2 were all ways the Kenjaku was able to bestow non-Jujutsu sorcerors to obtain the powers of Cursed Energy.
3) And lastly my option. This was taken from HXH (A JJK inspiration). "Initiation" as the term is called. Where (it is achieved by forcing the aura nodes to open via an influx of aura, such by having someone who is already able to control their aura channel a light burst of aura into your own body.)
Basically its on similar ways to unlock cursed energy.
Also WHAT?! Where?! Is it possible to tell me where to search it? I want an Accurate representation on Zelretch!