hope for something better

by LUC1F3R-117

Cole is presumed dead teams rwby and jnpr are scattered in the wind or breaking from the strain. now of all times, a mysterious woman claiming to be an ally emerges from the shadows. will ciri and Geralt find out who this woman is or is her story the real truth? lives are broken by pain and that creates hatred and weaves a horrid cycle none can easily break from.

14. announcement

I'm rewriting parts of my story, hired an editor to fix my chapters and I'll reposting chapters as they're fixed so not too much is changed but enough of it so it flows like water and not like a person down a flight of stairs.

I hope that you guys understand that I've been writing and posting these on my own and I've done my best but I feel that I've not done enough to be my best.

character handling has been rocky at best so its no wonder I hate my own work but it's not my worst so there's potential for improvement.

my editor is working hard to improve what I've done and what I hope for is to do this chapter by chapter so that it flows better and due to this change, i unfortunately have to repost my story and redo it all from the foundation of this up from there.

if there's anything you guys want done with this I'd appreciate everything you all have to say, no matter what your point of view is really important to me.

thank you for reading and remember, my reddit is open for messaging me, or use the PM on this app all you want...or just write a review..