"Star Gazing"
Author: Ladancer7
Disclaimer: You know the drill; I don't own any of it. I wish I did, but I don't.
A/N: okay, so this is pretty much the first story I have ever written out of my own free will. I NEED info back on what I can do to make the story better! Don't be lazy and not review! I need the good, the bad, and the ugly on this one. Please? I will give you a cookie?
I don't know if I will continue, because I am not sure where the story should continue from here. Any ideas on what could happen would be greatly appreciated!
Reviews can be sent to lmax592@yahoo.com
Thanks for reading!
Rory Gilmore climbed out of her battered white jeep and took in the majestic scene around her. She could see mountains in the distance and huge trees all around. Other guys and girls were already having towers of luggage brought up the path that led to the massive three-story building looming ahead. Taking in a deep breath, she turned to her mother.
"Mom, I don't think I can do this!" Rory exclaimed.
"Relax honey!" replied Lorelai Gilmore. "It's only two weeks out of the summer and maybe you can meet some new people here. Just imagine all the fun you will have!"
"Mother! I am going now. Talk to you later!" Rory purposely cut her mother off from acting crazier than she already was.
"Have fun babe!" Lorelai said before hoping into the jeep to head home.
Later on at the Orientation meeting
Rory sat right in the middle of a large room of teenagers like herself. Some she knew from school, others she hadn't ever seen before. As the headmaster of the camp got up to speak, her mind wandered. She took in a sigh of relief when she realized she hadn't seen Tristan DuGrey around yet. Things had been weird between them since she told him she hated him in no uncertain terms. She had then promptly gotten back together with her old boyfriend but had since parted ways yet again only a week ago. This time though, she wasn't sad at all. At least it looked like she didn't have annoying Mr. DuGrey to worry about for two weeks. Now she could focus on making friends for the upcoming school year. Things would be different this time. That would be nice.
"Rory Gilmore?..................Rory Gilmore?" The headmaster in front of the row of chairs tapping his foot impatiently.
"Yes? I mean, present sir!"
"Step in line please. You are assigned to room 111.
"Thank you sir." Rory scrambled to get all of her belongings together. 'Wow! What a great first impression I gave!' She thought sarcastically. 'How could I zone out on the entire meeting like that??? I have no clue what is going on now!' Rory looked up to realize she had been walking for a few minutes and had no idea where she was or was heading to.
A sexy deep male voice interrupted her thoughts in one fluid motion. "Don't worry, Rory Gilmore, I can catch you up on the boring lecture the Head gave us. Wasn't anything earth shattering."
"Hey thanks!" Rory replied. She slowly turned around to gaze into two wonderfully deep crystal blue eyes.
Author: Ladancer7
Disclaimer: You know the drill; I don't own any of it. I wish I did, but I don't.
A/N: okay, so this is pretty much the first story I have ever written out of my own free will. I NEED info back on what I can do to make the story better! Don't be lazy and not review! I need the good, the bad, and the ugly on this one. Please? I will give you a cookie?
I don't know if I will continue, because I am not sure where the story should continue from here. Any ideas on what could happen would be greatly appreciated!
Reviews can be sent to lmax592@yahoo.com
Thanks for reading!
Rory Gilmore climbed out of her battered white jeep and took in the majestic scene around her. She could see mountains in the distance and huge trees all around. Other guys and girls were already having towers of luggage brought up the path that led to the massive three-story building looming ahead. Taking in a deep breath, she turned to her mother.
"Mom, I don't think I can do this!" Rory exclaimed.
"Relax honey!" replied Lorelai Gilmore. "It's only two weeks out of the summer and maybe you can meet some new people here. Just imagine all the fun you will have!"
"Mother! I am going now. Talk to you later!" Rory purposely cut her mother off from acting crazier than she already was.
"Have fun babe!" Lorelai said before hoping into the jeep to head home.
Later on at the Orientation meeting
Rory sat right in the middle of a large room of teenagers like herself. Some she knew from school, others she hadn't ever seen before. As the headmaster of the camp got up to speak, her mind wandered. She took in a sigh of relief when she realized she hadn't seen Tristan DuGrey around yet. Things had been weird between them since she told him she hated him in no uncertain terms. She had then promptly gotten back together with her old boyfriend but had since parted ways yet again only a week ago. This time though, she wasn't sad at all. At least it looked like she didn't have annoying Mr. DuGrey to worry about for two weeks. Now she could focus on making friends for the upcoming school year. Things would be different this time. That would be nice.
"Rory Gilmore?..................Rory Gilmore?" The headmaster in front of the row of chairs tapping his foot impatiently.
"Yes? I mean, present sir!"
"Step in line please. You are assigned to room 111.
"Thank you sir." Rory scrambled to get all of her belongings together. 'Wow! What a great first impression I gave!' She thought sarcastically. 'How could I zone out on the entire meeting like that??? I have no clue what is going on now!' Rory looked up to realize she had been walking for a few minutes and had no idea where she was or was heading to.
A sexy deep male voice interrupted her thoughts in one fluid motion. "Don't worry, Rory Gilmore, I can catch you up on the boring lecture the Head gave us. Wasn't anything earth shattering."
"Hey thanks!" Rory replied. She slowly turned around to gaze into two wonderfully deep crystal blue eyes.