Sadly, another fourteenth page has come, forcing me to open up a new file. (Sigh) Well, here's the final part of my story, I swear. Adios! ^_^
Disclaimer: I don't own the characters, or the settings, or the plots of this story. All real credit goes to the writers of Fox Kids. (God bless 'em)
The Partial Digidestined, Part 4
By takari-critic2001
When I came to, I found myself in the presence of all the Digidestines, Andromon, and a supped-up Angemon at the bottom of Spiral Mountain.
" Angemon? You Digivolved. That's a first." I commented. The Ultimate proclaimed himself to be Magnaangemon. While TK was explaining what happened, someone shouted at us.
" Yoo hoo! Hey guys! Over here!" Mimi shouted as she approached with an army of Digimon. I was brought up to date on their names, while the others listened in on what happened with each other. Well, it's a nice reunion, but we have a Mega on the loose.
Just as I thought that, Piedmon came into view along with who knows how many Champions. He called them Vilemon. Everyone Digivolved to their highest forms if they weren't already in them, and I was already powered-up, so Bring. It. On.
" Full Fledged Fury!" I shouted and zipped through the Vilemon, harvesting them into a convenient small space. Every ally Digimon fired upon the Vilemon, while I caught a Trump Sword aimed at Wargreymon, and started a hand to hand fist fight with Piedmon after knocking away his swords.
" Foolish children. It is impossible for you to win!" Piedmon told himself.
" Shut up and die, clown." I said and landed him one right in the jaw. Magnaangemon flew above the commotion and released his blade.
" Gate of Destiny." The Ultimate said and drew a circle with the blade the transformed into a portal to who knows where. The ally Digimon fired a group shot that propelled the Vilemon unto the portal. Piedmon looked especially worried.
" I'm outta here!" The circus reject said and tried to run. He didn't get far with Wargreymon and Metalgarurumon standing there.
" Ice Wolf Claw!" " Terra Force!" the ground beneath the mime exploded and he drifted towards the gate.
" Now, the Piece De Resistiance. Rage Ray!" I fired a beam that escorted the Mega mayhem into the portal, which closed and dematerialized. I don't believe it. We won.
" We did it!" " Awesome!" " Way to go!" The others congratulated. However, I felt that we weren't done.
" Don't celebrate yet, guys. Feel that?" I asked as a rumbling shook the island.
" Spiral Mountain is disintegrating!" Tai warned. " Watch out!" And with that, the land underneath us vanished. Everyone fell, and the other Digimon and me tried to keep up with their partners.
Suddenly, we stopped falling. " Are we down?" Joe asked.
" Tai, are you alright?" Wargreymon asked.
" This may seem like a stupid question, but how come we're still not falling?" Izzy asked. Just then, his laptop beeped, and he opened it to see Geni's face.
" Greetings. I hope nobody needed a barf bag on the way down."
" It's Geni!"
" So you're the one who brought us down here!" Tai accused.
" What do you want? We already beat the Dark Masters." Matt informed.
" It's true that the evil of the Dark Masters was destroyed, but the source that created that evil still exists." Geni explained.
" Huh?" We all said in unison.
" And that source came from the wall of fire."
" What's that?" Joe asked.
" When I was searching through the dino rooms, I came upon an ancient inscription. It told of a time long ago when a strange being appeared from behind the wall of fire and it was angry. You would be too, if you lived with that kind of humidity. The mere existence of this being warped time and space, and were thrown completely out of whack. It threatened the collapse of the Digital world, and even worse than that, my new wristwatch stopped working. The Digimon knew they didn't have the strength to defeat this being, so the original Digidestined children were summoned from the real world, and together, they defeated the evil."
" What? Then you mean?" Tai said
" There were other kids just like us before we came along?" Joe asked.
" And we were summoned because something else came out from behind the wall of fire, Didn't it? Huh. And that's the real enemy." Sora concluded.
" That's correct, however, but unfortunately, that's the good news. The bad news is it also told of a great darkness that would blanket the Digital World." Geni explained.
" A great darkness? Hmm." Matt wondered.
" Don't look now, but it's pretty dark." Joe pointed out.
" Yeah, we couldn't have figured that one out." I mocked
" So this is the enemy?" Tai asked.
" In a way, yes, but I believe he has a form as well. He- uh oh. I'm out of quarters. Got to go." Geni told us as his image faded.
" No, Geni! Come Back!" Tai yelled.
" Next time I'll use a phone card, I promise! See ya!" The old man said before disappearing.
" Geni! Oh, great, how does he expect us to fight this thing when we don't even know what it is we're looking for?" Tai asked rhetorically.
" Just my luck. The minute I start enjoying my vacation, another being tries to destroy the world." Joe complained.
" I'm sorry, guys, but it looks like we're alone in this one." Izzy explained.
" You think? Some help Geni is. He can't even pay his phone bill." I exclaimed.
" I have a feeling that this one is going to be different than any Digimon we've ever run into before." Izzy theorized further.
" So what? The first group of kids were able to defeat something like this, well then, so will we." Matt said.
" Matt's right, we'll just have to find a way to do it." Sora backed up. Then, a great moan shattered the silence.
" What's that noise?" Kari asked.
" It sounds like a moose." Mimi thought.
" It sounds to me like it's coming from every direction." Said Angewomon.
" Me to, but what does it mean?" Tai wondered.
" I know who you are." The voice said, " You don't have the power to eliminate my sadness."
" What?"
" Who's there?" I demanded. A large polyhedron formed in front of us and claws and arms started to form out of it.
" I bet this has something to do with that Digimon Geni was talking about." Izzy said.
" Either that or it's a giant cube puzzle!" Tai exclaimed. A figure wrapped in cloaks appeared at the top.
" I am the Ultimate evil, complete with hot and cold running water." The Digimon said.
" What on earth is that thing?" Matt asked.
" I am Apocalymon, a mutant Digimon. My Darkness Soul attack transforms my enemies into nothingness. I have the power to turn anything I touch into total darkness. Perhaps I'll start with Earth." Apocalymon explained and laughed. " Are you repulsed by my appearance? Don't be afraid to hurt my feelings, they're already hurt! You see, I was created out of all that was lost in the Digivolving process."
" What do you mean by lost?" Izumi asked.
" Digimon have been Digivolving for years and years now, over and over again. But there were some who weren't up to the challenge and simply disappeared."
" That makes sense. Even on Earth, some creatures became instinct because of the process of evolution. In fact, the Tasmanian Tigerwolf, the-"
" Silence! Who's telling this story anyway, you or me?" Apocalymon interrupted.
" Alright, go ahead." Matt encouraged.
" First, I have a question to ask. Do you believe I am worthy of co-existing with you?" The Digimon asked.
" Well, Yeah. Sure. Why not?" Izzy spoke up.
" Oh really, even though I'm was forged from the pain and misery of all the ill-fated Digimon who vanished while attempting to Digivolve?"
" You're completely composed out of sorrow and grief? How sad for you." Sora sympathized.
" Sure, rub it in. And now Digidestines and Digimon, I have been waited an eternity for this encounter."
" What? What do you mean?" Metalgarurumon asked.
" As I sat in alone in my cold, dark, world, I saw all of you on the other side laughing and having fun in the light. But now it's my turn to shine!" Apocalymon shouted as a surge of energy swept towards us. I jumped in front of Sora and took the blast. Surprisingly, it didn't hurt much.
" Is everyone okay?" Tai asked.
" Yeah, I'm okay." Matt reported.
" I think so." Izzy said.
" Sora?" I asked.
" I'm fine, Sky. Thank you." She replied.
" Not for long. Do you think it's fair that I should live with this agony? Why do you get to laugh when I am forced to cry? Why do you get to enjoy what life has to offer, while I get to choke on its leftovers? Answer me this, why do all of you get the pizza, and I get the crust?" Apocalymon shouted. Man, sucks to be him.
" Ugh! I can't take all these metaphors!" Mimi complained.
" Boy, this guy sure holds a grudge." Izzy said.
" I rule world and plunge into darkness, so I won't be alone in my misery! Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha, wait, what am I laughing at, I'm supposed to be depressed! River of Power!" Apocalymon yelled as Metalseadramon's head formed from a claw and shot at Kari.
" Kari!" Tai yelled as Angewomon took the blast in front of her.
" Angewomon! No!" Kari cried.
" That was Metalseadramon and his classic River of Power. Now, here's Myotismon with his number one hit, Crimson Lightning!" The mutant shouted as a figure of Myotismon was formed and shot at Mimi. Lilymon absorbed the blast.
" Lilymon!"
" Next, Machinedramon and Phantomon! Giga Cannon!" He said and a large beam of energy went towards Sora. Luckily, Garudomon was able to make it there before I could. " Shadow Scythe!" What? I turned and got decked by my old foe's attack. Good thing I was still powered-up. That would have killed me otherwise.
" Inconceivable! He's using the attacks of the evil Digimon we've defeated in the past against us!" Izzy realized.
" Really? I haven't noticed." I said as I got up.
" You mean we have to defeat them all over again? This is the worst reoccurring nightmare I've ever been awake for." Joe exclaimed.
" Hey, we were able to beat them once." Sora encouraged.
" She's right, we did beat them! And we can do it again." Tai exclaimed.
" I'm sure we can do it if we work together as a team." TK said.
" I agree. We've sacrificed to much to give up." Matt reminded.
" Fools, you haven't even begun to witness my power!" Apocalymon said as his claws shot out and captured the Digimon. A claw shot at me, but I was only able to dodge it a few times before it grabbed me.
" Rage R-"
" Reverse Digivolve!" And with that, all our power diminished. " I'll make you understand what it means to be one step closer to extinction!" He released me from inside his claw, and I saw everyone back to their most familiar forms. Even me.
" They're Rookies!" Matt realized.
" He changed them back so easily!" TK announced.
" I'm sorry, TK." Patomon said.
" Oh, its not you're fault, it's his."
" Great, this time we're done for." Kari admitted.
" Better lose that 'tude, Kari." Gatomon warned.
" Just because we're at the rookie level doesn't mean we can't fight." Gabumon said.
" We could Digivolve if we had the energy." Gommamon pointed out.
" That's it! Start from scratch!" Joe exclaimed.
" We have to eat something first…"
" Come to think of it, I am a little hungry." Palmon stated.
" Come on guys, push through it." I told them. " We don't have to have food, we have the power within us."
" Right, we just need your help, guys."
" Everyone get your crests ready!" Tai ordered.
" Death Claw!" Shouted the mutant and a light-speed hand grabbed our crests and destroyed them in front of us, helpless to stop it.
" Our crests and tags!" Tai shouted.
" He broke them all!" TK exclaimed.
" We can't Digivolve without them!" Sora cried.
" I hope you learned your lesson. Always save your receipts. The warranties were probably still good on those things!"
" Isn't this the time where one of us comes up with a great idea?" Joe asked.
" I don't think that's gonna happen Joe, I think we're done for!" Mimi cried. " How can we defeat Apocalymon without Digivolving?"
" There's no way! All the Rookies combined can't win against someone who has the power of all our enemies!" Izzy explained.
" How can you guys be so sure?" Tai demanded.
" Think about what you just said, Tai." I told him.
" How did the original Digidestines beat this enemy?" Matt wondered.
" I'll take these children and their fear to make them Digital and disappear!" Apocalymon shouted, and I watched in horror as everyone started to dematerialize.
" What's this?" Matt asked.
" Fascinating. Our bodies are being broken down into little bits of digital information!" Izzy said in amazement.
" Keep cool, everyone. Don't fall to bits." Biyomon said.
" Too late." Agumon countered. I pointed my finger at Apocalymon.
" Don't relax just yet, Apocalymon. We're not through here! I'm not finished with you!" I yelled as the last part of me disappeared.
When I came around, I was a floating essence in a universe consisting of white light and floating numbers of zeros and ones. I tried looking for the others, but they could only sustain a physical form for so long.
" Where are we?" Tai asked.
" We're information now. This is where all digital information is collected. It's the world of data." Izzy explained.
" I'm too young to be dating!" Mimi complained.
" It's not the same." Izumi shot back.
" Sometimes too much information's a bad thing." Joe stated.
" Can we get out?" Kari asked.
" I don't know, Kari. Nothing like this has ever happened to us before. I don't know what to do." Sora replied.
" Is this it? Have we lost?" Tai wondered.
" I think that's a pretty good confusion." Matt responded.
" Come on, guys, don't quit now!" Agumon said.
" Why not?" Tai continued.
" Look, we can't give up because of a few minor setbacks." Gabumon reasoned.
" So what if we're bits of information, we have no tags and crests, we can't Digivolve, and we're against the most powerful enemy yet? I don't see a problem." Biyomon said.
" Biyomon, I know you have a positive outlook on this, but I just don't think a few Rookies can succeed in beating Apocalymon." I alleged.
" And another thing, I don't think that we'll be able to return to our original forms." Sora added.
" Just think positive." Agumon responded.
" I tied thinking positive once, and I was positive about one thing. I positively hated it." Joe said.
" Speaking scientifically, we're the first humans to be digitally processed. We're pioneers, like Marco Polo." Izzy theorized.
" Marco Polo? I know what he's famous for." Tentomon bragged, " Marco."
" Polo."
" Marco!
" Polo."
" Marco!"
" Polo!"
" In any battle you're bound to fight a number of unknowns." Gabumon stated.
" Yeah, you had a lot of battles when you didn't know if you'd win, but you fought them anyway, didn't you?" Gommamon said.
" That's right, we did fight. When I first came to the Digital World, I was afraid of any little thing that moved." Joe reminded, " We faced all kinds of new monsters."
" But no matter what they threw at us, we always found the strength to beat the enemy, regardless on how big he was, didn't we, Joe?" Gommamon continued.
" Yeah, we did. We worked together as a team. Even the time where we almost lost TK because he couldn't swim. Of course, I forgot that I couldn't swim, either."
" I remember times that all I wanted to do was break down and cry." Mimi stated.
" But instead you fought on with you're new friends." Palmon said.
" I feel I've become a much stronger person after meeting all of you. Like that time at the convention center when the Bakemon were attacking, I didn't cry one drop. Well, maybe one."
" Before I met you, TK, I didn't think it mattered if I Digivolved or not. But when Devimon grabbed me instead of you, I knew it was my time to shine, and became Angemon for the first time, and I've been flying high ever since." Patomon explained.
" I've learned something from you too, Patomon." TK responded. " I learned that sometimes you have to fight for what you believe in."
" I want you to know that you've changed my life a lot too, Sora." Biyomon said.
" Really?" Sora asked.
" Of course you have, after all, I've never had a best friend before, I would do anything for you, like that time I took Myotismon's Crimson Lightning attack right in the chest. Talk about heartburn."
" You don't know anything about an unfair fight, Biyomon." I started. " Not until you're a normal human kid going one on one with an Ultimate Digimon with only a pole. Fortunately, Phantomon got what he deserved, and so did I."
" You know Izzy, when I first met you, I thought you were one of those computer geeks. But now that I got to know you, I realize you are one of those computer geeks, and I'm glad you are." Tentomon complimented. " Because where would we be without you?"
" Tentomon," Izzy started.
" I promised myself I wouldn't cry. However, I wanted to cry when that asteroid belt was tightening against my waist, but you and I took care of Vademon together."
" As for you, Matt," Gabumon started to say.
" I know. You don't have to say anything." Matt said.
" There was that time-"
" That's right, I remember."
" And then we-"
" I know."
" And then-"
" Didn't you hear me, I said you don't have to say anything!"
" Okay, Matt."
" We knew from the beginning that we made an invincible team, right, Tai?" Agumon asked.
" You got that right. Of course, I probably could've taken care of Etemon myself, but it was nice having you around. And it did get me out of a few jams." Tai replied.
" We can't give up now, 'cause if we did, what was the point of searching for Kari in the first place?" Gatomon asked.
" Gatomon,"
" I've waited my whole life for you, Kari. And my purpose, which is to protect you no matter what the cost, even if that involves facing Myotismon's Grisly Wing, or facing the reality of losing Wizardmon. You know, I'll always be there for you."
" Wow, if I never met you Gatomon,"
" And I never went to the Digital world in the first place,"
" And we never met and became friends,"
" Then we wouldn't have became the people we are today."
" And we never would've won those battles without each other,"
" I feel I've grown up a lot."
" I think we've all grown up in a lot of ways."
" I've grown up too, I'm a much better fighter now."
" I'd hate to see what kind of a fighter you were before, Tai." I concluded.
" I don't know about you, but I'm not ready to quit just yet."
" Who said anything about quitting? I didn't."
" Me neither. There's no way I'm gonna let this experience be for nothing!"
" Same here. There is no way I'm gonna let my friends down."
" And besides, there are still a lot of people counting on us back on earth."
" Let's find a way!"
" Let's fight."
" We're ready."
" We've reached the point of no return."
" Crests or no crests, we're going to win!"
" We together?"
" Of course we are."
" Then let's fight!"
" It's gonna be hard without our crests."
" Crests? We don't need no stinking crests." All of the sudden, our crests started glowing on our chests.
" It's your crests! You don't need to carry them anymore, because you've had them inside you all along." Agumon said.
" What? You mean like in our hearts?" Tai asked.
" That makes perfect sense. It's like my knowledge and Joe's sense of responsibility. If your special traits are within you, you don't need the crests, because the crests are in you as well." Izzy concluded.
" You're wrong. It wasn't the friendship inside of me that made my crest glow, it's more than that." Matt contradicted. " It was the friendship I felt from each of you gathered inside my heart that made it glow."
" So each person's crest isn't powered by themselves, but by everyone in the group."
" Then the light inside of me is for everyone." Kari said.
" Gatomon Digivolve to… Angewomon!"
" And everyone's hopes, are my hopes."
" Patomon Digivolve to… Angemon!" " Angemon Digivolve to… Magnaangemon!"
" Knowledge is power."
" Tentomon Digivolve to… Kabuterimon!" " Kabuterimon Digivolve to… Megakabuterimon!"
" Sincerity."
" Palmon Digivolve to… Togamon!" " Togamon Digivolve to… Lilymon!"
" Reliability."
" Gommamon Digivolve to… Ikkakumon!" " Ikkakumon Digivolve to… Zudomon!"
" Love."
" Biyomon Digivolve to… Birdramon!" " Birdramon Digivolve to… Garudomon!"
" Rage." " Crest Power-up!"
" Friendship."
" Gabumon Warp-Digivolve to… Metalgarurumon!"
" Courage."
" Agumon Warp-Digivolve to… Wargreymon!" Suddenly, I felt whole again. Then I noticed we were back facing Apocalymon.
" We did it! We reassembled ourselves!" Izzy exclaimed.
" What? What is this?" Apocalymon trembled.
" You're facing the new-improved Digidestines!" Tai shouted.
" That's impossible! How did you Digivolve without you're crests?"
" Nothing's impossible, as long as you have your friends to help you!" Matt said.
" You said it, Matt, now, time to fight!" Tai ordered.
" Yeah!" We all charged at Apocalymon.
" Their doomed!" He said.
" Keep telling yourself that, mutant." I mocked.
" Death Claw!" the claws charged us and we destroyed them while we continued to charge the body.
" Stop hogging the fun!" I said. " Rage Ray!" I fired a split beam that destroyed two more claws.
" Virus Grenade!"
" Wing Blade!" " Horn Buster!"
" Now, go for the body!"
" Ice Wolf Claw!" " Terra Force!" " Rage Ray!" All the attacks hit Apocalymon's body, destroying the body, leaving the polyhedron.
" Do you think you're still so tough now?" Tai asked.
" Fools, you have not to begin to understand my power! You haven't seen my most powerful attack, Total Elimination!" the polyhedron began glowing. Abruptly, our Digivices shot out and created a field around the glowing sphere, and they blasted it into the horizon and imploded.
" What happened?"
" The blast was completely contained by our Digivices." Izzy explained.
" So that's it? We won?" I asked.
" We won!" I can't believe it. We did it!
" We did it!" " Way to go, guys!" " Finally!" I powered down and ran to Sora. We both hugged tightly.
" We finally did it, Sora. We won." I said and pulled away. Our eyes locked. We leaned in closer and our lips touched. When we broke apart, everyone was looking at us.
" What are you looking at?" They all just burst out laughing. They aren't a bad group of kids.
" Hey! You did it! Remind me to call you the next time I have trouble with my landlord." Ogremon said as he approached along with the rest of the ally Digimon. A Dokulomon and Centuramon flew in.
" Sorry I'm late, I forgot to set my alarm clock." Geni said from the cockpit of the Dokulomon. " Is it over?"
" Yeah, it is. But what'll happen to the Digital World?" Tai asked.
" Just look down." Geni said. The Digital World was reformatting. A large island was completely reborn.
" It's File Island!" Mimi exclaimed.
" That's correct. The inscription stated that the island would be first, and from that, the waters and the land. And then they Digimon."
" Then let's get down there!" Tai yelled. We opened a hole in the sky and fell down to an outside nursery.
" It's Primary Village!" TK joyfully said.
" And its back to normal." Electmon observed.
" Looks like it's gonna rain." Joe said as thousands of Digieggs landed in the nursery. TK, Kari, and Electmon ran to help them.
" Hey, shouldn't we take a picture to commemorate this day?" Tai asked.
" Sure thing. I'll go get TK and Kari." Izzy said. We al gathered in a meadow and scrunched together. My hand brushed against Sora's, and she held on to mine and smiled.
" Say cheese." Andromon said as he put his optical sensors to take the picture, because none of us had a camera.
" Cheese!" We said, and right before he took the picture, the Digiegg that Kari was holding hatched, totally screwing up our picture. But we didn't mind.
A few minutes later, we were at a lake exchanging stories on what happened while we were apart. After a short discussion, we decided to stay in the Digital World, due to the fact that we have way too much time to waste. Our conversation was ended when Geni came in.
" I don't think that is possible, children. Do you see that eclipse?" Geni asked as he pointed at the sun, which was in the middle of an eclipse.
" Yeah, what about it?" I asked.
" There is something very important about this eclipse,"
" I know! You're not supposed to look directly into it!" Mimi exclaimed.
" That's true, but this eclipse can ruin your lives." Geni said, crushing our hopes.
" So this isn't an ordinary eclipse?" Izzy wondered.
" The shadow is the gate to your world, and I'm afraid it will only last for two more hours." Centuramon stated.
" No problem, we'll just wait till it opens up again." Matt offered.
" After all, we still have over a hundred years of summer vacation left!" Mimi pointed out.
" I'm afraid that when Apocalymon was destroyed, the flow of time between the two worlds became synchronized." Geni stated.
" Well, we still have four weeks left."
" No, you only have two hours, because once it's closed, it's closed forever." We all moaned. I liked this world. It has taught me a lot. The others went off to say their good-byes, Izzy and I helped Geni reconfigure a trolley. I was rewiring some panels, when I just had to ask Geni something.
" Geni? I was wondering where do I fit in? I mean, everyone has their Digimon and crests, and then there's just me."
" I'm sorry, what do you mean?"
" I mean, I know that the accident didn't enable me with a Digimon, but, the Crest of Rage? I thought crests represented something good, like love, or hope, or light."
" It's true all crests represent good things, even your own. Rage and anger are powerful tools, and either side can use it efficiently. So in a matter, your crest is the powerful of all of them, and you don't have to rely on a Digimon for safety, which is something the others lack."
" I guess so."
" Besides, we knew from the start that you'd make an efficient Digidestined, even if there is no Digimon to help guide you."
I thought about that as we finished the cable car, and everyone gathered around.
" Have you all finished saying your good-byes? You can take this trolley as long as you return it to San Francisco, where I borrowed it from." Geni told the others. Mimi was bawling her eyes out.
" Can't we have a little more time?" Sora asked.
" I'm sorry, but the gate waits for no one. What's the problem?"
" Palmon seems to have disappeared." Agumon informed.
" Why won't she say good-bye?" Mimi cried.
" Well, see you later, guys." I said to the Digimon. " Gonna miss you."
" We're gonna miss you, too, Sky. It's not often you meet a human with the powers of a Digimon." Agumon complimented. I shook everyone's hands, and Biyomon whispered to me:
" Take good care of Sora, Sky."
" I will. Good-bye, Biyomon." I said and hugged her.
" It's time. On the cable car everyone." Geni ordered.
" Well, this is it. What can I say?" Tai said.
" Try good-bye." Agumon shot back. We all loaded the trolley and took our seats. We all took one side and looked out the window at our friends. We all gave our final partings as the car started towards the gate. It's funny, a twist of fate brought me here, changed my life, and took me away a few days later. I will never forget this place, no matter what happens. Out of all the inconveniences and challenges, I've found a new way of life, new friends, and Sora. No doubt I'm gonna miss this place, but everyone's waiting back home, a home which I'm proud to call my own, even if it's a ratted out orphanage. I took Sora's hand as we passed through the gate, and I realized, this is the best moment of my life, and I wouldn't change one bit of it.
The End
Well, there you have it, the ending to one of the longest fan fics in this place. Any Reviews? Flames? Chocolate fudge sundaes? Please be honest in your reviews. I just took up about ten hours of your time, hearing back would be appreciated. takari-critic2001, signing off.