Well here's my new chapter and this is dedicated Bffyfan as she/or he reminded me to make Riley suffer so here it is. Sorry about the grammar I use spell check and look over my work but I miss stuff. Hey I'm only human.
After Spike walked off to kill a member of the Scooby gang Buffy was left on her own.
Buffy: oh no. Why didn't I stop Spike when I had the chance, he might kill someone I hold dear I must stop him!
Buffy starts to run across the graveyard breaking into a sprint. We see her running down a road towards the magic shop.
Buffy: why don't I buy a car I mean surely it would make it all easier I seem to chase a bad guy half way across the small town that over five seasons has turned into a large city.
As Buffy approaches the shop her movements slow down until she's sprinting in the standard slow motion that Joss uses whenever character death is near.
She kicks the shop door in, and runs into the shop. Riley is their fighting Spike.
Buffy: Riley leave him alone he's mine. I've put up with Spike for to long its time I kill him.
Riley: no Buffy, even thou you couldn't beat him half way through season two I think I can as I'm highly trained and extremely arrogant.
Before Buffy could respond Riley gets the electric stunner he uses whenever he fights a vampire.
Riley: ha I have got you now.
Spikes chip miraculously stops working and he grabs the electric stunner and rams it up Rileys pig nose. He then grabs a conveniently placed rat and sticks it in Riley's mouth.
Riley ran around for ten minutes and then collapsed dead on the floor.
Buffy: oh no Spike how could you. That was a living being a creature of god.
Spike: nah he was a pompous, ugly, smelly, raised in Iowa piece of oversized corn.
Buffy (disgusted): I didn't mean Riley I meant the rat.
Willow comes waltzing in with Tara by her side.
Willow: oh no that was Amy Spike used to kill Riley.
Tara: w-w-w-th-wh-whos Amy.
Buffy: gods dam you! Why cant you just stop the over exaggerated stammering.
Tara: s-s-s-sorr-sorry.
Willow goes over to Riley and pulls the rat out of Rileys mouth.
Willow: even thou I could fight a god, levitate books and drinks dispensers and even magic up a Troll from thin air as well as reverse many a more complicated spell I couldn't turn you back.
Buffy: don't blame yourself it wasn't your fault.
Spike: well now ive killed someone I think its time I go, if I stay any longer I might want to kiss my sworn enemy.
Spike leaves the magic shop leaving Tara, Buffy and Willow looking at Riley's body.
Is this one as good as the first I'm not sure please review for me!