This is my first Digimon fanfic and it's just a little idea I jotted down while I was on holiday. I would love feedback!!
Disclaimer: Unfortunately I do not own Digimon, the characters, the original story, etc, etc. I'm just borrowing them!
The shadow of time (Teaser)
Kari stared out over the beautiful ocean that lay out before her. It's greens and blues swirling into waves of emotion crashing against the golden sands of time. Time. It was something that meant so much to her world. If she had just had more time. If she could turn back time. Would she have allowed herself to go through the pains and challenges that had been laid before her if she had know what they led to? The answer would probably be yes, although it would be nice for her to think that at least then she had the choice. She turned and silently made her return to the house she and her friends were staying in. Her true friends. They knew and felt what she felt. They had been through the same as her. The digi-destined had decided to take a trip away to commemorate there lost comrades the digimon, and the closing of all the digi-ports. Kari, Tai, Cody, Davis and Joe had all travelled down together and had been the first to arrive at the house. Kari had decided to take a walk and had managed, after a lot of convincing from Tai, to make Davis stay at the house and play football with Tai. Her brother could be a saint when he wanted to. Kari had ended up at the beach and had lost track of time.
Hours seemed to pass and Kari decided it was time to head back to the house to see the rest of her friends. "Kari!" Kari turned round anxiously looking for the owner of the familiar voice. She felt a presence surround her, holding her, protecting her. "Soon! It won't be long!" And as if a gust of wind, the presence was gone. Kari collapsed to the floor unconscious.
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Well what do you think? Any good? Please RnR!!
Becca Mooshooes
Disclaimer: Unfortunately I do not own Digimon, the characters, the original story, etc, etc. I'm just borrowing them!
The shadow of time (Teaser)
Kari stared out over the beautiful ocean that lay out before her. It's greens and blues swirling into waves of emotion crashing against the golden sands of time. Time. It was something that meant so much to her world. If she had just had more time. If she could turn back time. Would she have allowed herself to go through the pains and challenges that had been laid before her if she had know what they led to? The answer would probably be yes, although it would be nice for her to think that at least then she had the choice. She turned and silently made her return to the house she and her friends were staying in. Her true friends. They knew and felt what she felt. They had been through the same as her. The digi-destined had decided to take a trip away to commemorate there lost comrades the digimon, and the closing of all the digi-ports. Kari, Tai, Cody, Davis and Joe had all travelled down together and had been the first to arrive at the house. Kari had decided to take a walk and had managed, after a lot of convincing from Tai, to make Davis stay at the house and play football with Tai. Her brother could be a saint when he wanted to. Kari had ended up at the beach and had lost track of time.
Hours seemed to pass and Kari decided it was time to head back to the house to see the rest of her friends. "Kari!" Kari turned round anxiously looking for the owner of the familiar voice. She felt a presence surround her, holding her, protecting her. "Soon! It won't be long!" And as if a gust of wind, the presence was gone. Kari collapsed to the floor unconscious.
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Well what do you think? Any good? Please RnR!!
Becca Mooshooes