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Quietus
By Ender
"Obi-Wan!"
Jedi
master Qui-Gon Jinn found himself screaming his Padawan's name frantically as
the building in back of him erupted into a huge fireball. As the scorching flames licked at his face,
a chill ran through the Jedi's body.
His apprentice was still inside the building when it exploded, and no
person, Jedi or not, could survive that colossal blast.
These
thoughts, accompanied by feelings of shock and grief, flashed through Qui-Gon's
head in a split second as he struggled to crawl away from the searing
heat. He pushed the thoughts away,
attempting to concentrate on pulling his body away from the fiery wreck.
Qui-Gon
tried to stand, but his legs buckled, and he fell to the ground with barely
enough strength to break his fall. He sought refuge from heat behind a pile of
boxes as smaller explosions roared behind him.
Guilt loomed in the back of Qui-Gon's mind as the final blast thundered
in the background, causing debris to rain around him. The Jedi then fell into darkness, passing out from the wounds
that he had sustained during the previous battle and the scorching heat that
engulfed his body.
When he came into
consciousness, Qui-Gon saw that he had been moved to one of the medical rooms
inside the Jedi Temple. He tried to
remember what had happened to him, but a splitting headache that blocked clear
thought. Qui-Gon surveyed his injuries
and concluded from the pain in his ribs that they were possibly broken. He also noticed the numerous cuts and burns
he had sustained from falling debris and his aching head all but screamed that
he had a concussion. His chest felt
like it was on fire, and the cuts he had received felt like stabbing pinpricks
that threatened to overwhelm him each time he dared to move. Qui-Gon reached up and felt the coarse
texture of the gauze encompassing his throbbing head.
As he looked around the white
walled room, he began to feel a disturbance in the back of his mind that was
not caused by his throbbing headache.
Qui-Gon decided to banish the disturbance to the deep recesses of his
mind in order to focus on the matters at hand. He tried to remember what had
caused the injuries, but drew a blank, then sensed through the Force that
someone was approaching.
As Qui-Gon looked up, a woman
entered the room. She wore the plain
light-blue robes of a Jedi healer, which swished softly as she moved to his
bed.
"Hello," she said," I'm your
healer, Ra'ae. It's good to see you
awake."
"How long have I been here?"
asked Qui-Gon as the disturbance in his mind grew, unbeknownst to him.
"You've been asleep for three
days," Ra'ae answered, "I tended to
your broken ribs and other wounds. They
should heal completely in a few days.
The effects of your concussion might last a bit longer, though. Many of the masters have been in to see
you, but you were not well enough for-"
Ra'ae stopped talking as a
knock resonated on the cold metal door.
"Your friend Tahl has been
wanting to see you, as well. I'll leave
you for a while."
She exited the room as Tahl
entered. Tahl maneuvered over to the
bed, skillfully avoiding a chair, though she was unable to see it. To the
casual onlooker, it would not have appeared that she was completely blind. Qui-Gon was glad to see a familiar face in
his confusion. He wanted to talk to her
and find out what had happened to him, and ask her about the event that had
caused him to end up like this.
"Hello Qui-Gon," she said
quietly, giving him a light hug.
"Hello, Tahl, it's good to see
you," he answered; though he had a strange urge to start questioning her about
the mysterious disturbance right away.
It felt like a memory that needed to surface, but couldn't, it just
pulsed in his mind.
"How are the injuries faring?"
Tahl asked Qui-Gon, a motherly look crossing her beautiful face.
"They're all right. They say the cuts and burns should be gone
in the next few days. The concussion
affected my memory, though, I don't remember much about what happened," he
answered.
Tahl went slightly pale at his
words, as a pained look crossed her lovely features. Qui-Gon saw this, and was immediately concerned.
"What is it?" Qui-Gon asked
her urgently, "What's wrong?"
"Do you remember anything
about your mission or the accident?" Tahl said, with a strange, sad look in her
eyes.
"I remember that our mission
was to infiltrate a pirate smuggling league that was killing innocent people in
return for large amounts of credits. Obi-Wan
and I slipped into their warehouse. That's where my recollection ends."
Then something from his
previous sentence hit him like a hard punch in the gut. His voice became panicked as the disturbance
grew to an enormous size, filling his entire mind. One question came to his mind amidst the flurry of questions and
feelings of dread flying through his thoughts.
The 15 year-old boy struggled
against the chains that bound his wrists and feet together, trying futilely to
release himself. His captors had kept
him drugged and, as a result, the Force slipped away from him as if he were
holding an eel. It could no longer
provide help or comfort for him.
He
stopped struggling for a moment, and looked for the millionth time around the
room for an escape route. The room was
pitch-black and damp, with walls of solid stone. The only way out was the entrance; the only light a doorway of
lasers in front of a thick door made of metal.
The beams were formulated so that they would severely injure anything
that dared to cross their path. There
was no hope for escape through the door, so the boy continued to try to break
free. He couldn't escape, but it would
help to be untied if an opportunity arose.
Then
the lasers deactivated and the door opened, sending painful, unwelcome light
into the boy's eyes, temporarily blinding him.
Two men
stepped into the room, carrying large wooden clubs and blasters.
"Rise
and shine, prettyboy," one said mockingly, "cause you're going to pay for your
meddling."
The men
tried to drag the boy out of the room, but he resisted, trying clumsily to hit
the men with his heavy chains. The men
were faster and better armed, though, and began to hit him with their clubs. Soon the boy's entire body was aching as the
men beat him mercilessly with the weapons.
The boy
started to loose consciousness soon after the torture began. As he fell into darkness he heard the men
talking.
"This
one's going to pay."
"What's the scum's name?"
Tahl's face turned almost
transparent at Qui-Gon's question. She
turned her head away from his questioning gaze.
"There
were important documents in the warehouse that could expose the pirates," she
said as her voice quivered.
"Yes, I
know. What does that have to do with
Obi-Wan?" Qui-Gon was becoming very
worried.
The
pirates destroyed the warehouse. All
that was left were smoldering cinders.
Obi-Wan was…." Tahl stared at the floor, not wanting to look at Qui-Gon.
"Obi-Wan
was what, Tahl? Tell me!"
"Obi-Wan
was still in the warehouse when it was destroyed. He was killed in the blast."
Tahl's eyes were filled with tears.
"I'm sorry."
Qui-Gon
began to feel sick as his mind processed the terrible information that he had
just heard. The words felt like a knife
sticking into his heart. Obi-Wan can't be dead, he thought to
himself. I was just talking to him.
He knew, though, that if the Jedi Council had given
up a search, they were absolutely sure of their findings. His Padawan was gone forever. Qui-Gon could feel bile burning his already
sore throat, threatening to choke him.
Thoughts of guilt and grief flew through Qui-Gon's head as a single tear
slid down his cheek.
"I'm
sorry," Tahl said, her voice breaking on the words, "It was a shock to
everyone. A search party looked for any
sign of him, but nothing was found."
"Thank
you for telling me," Qui-Gon's words sounded hollow, even to himself. "I-
"
Ra'ae
entered the room, causing Qui-Gon to stop speaking.
"I'm
sorry to interrupt, but Qui-Gon will need to sleep so the injuries will have
time to heal."
"Of
course," Tahl turned to Qui-Gon. "I'm
sorry, my friend, but the council has sent me on a mission with Takr." Her voice was laced with regret.
"It's
all right Tahl, you should go. Thank
you for visiting me," Qui-Gon said, his voice sounding far away.
"Goodbye,"
Tahl whispered, "I'm sorry."
"Goodbye."
Ra'ae
returned to check on Qui-Gon's bandages.
"You are healing, but you need
to rest. The council has requested you
to come before them as soon as you are well," Ra'ae said.
Qui-Gon
nodded with a slight tilt of his head before he sank back into his grievous
thoughts, then sleep, a picture of Obi-Wan hovering in the back of his mind.
"Get up, scum."
Obi-Wan
woke at the sound of the man's harsh voice.
He immediately noticed the fresh wounds from the previous day's
beating. His torso and head ached from
the harsh blows of the clubs and his wrists and ankles were raw and bloody from
the heinous chains that cut deeply into his skin when he struggled. Obi-Wan knew that an escape was hopeless in
his current state, and decided to focus on resting to return his strength.
The men
prodded him mercilessly on his aching wounds as Obi-Wan tried to stand. His remaining strength left him and he fell
to the ground. The Jedi attempted to
stand again, but fell painfully on his face.
One of
the men started grumbling as they started to drag Obi-Wan to his unknown
destination. Obi-Wan was powerless at
the hands of the brutal men. He
couldn't walk, run, or connect to the force.
The drug had partially worn off, and he tried to call Qui-Gon through
their bond, but to no avail. Obi-Wan
hoped that his master had not been captured or injured, and that he would soon
find the young Jedi
Obi-Wan
tried to recollect what had happened after he had been fighting at his master's
side. All he could remember was being
dragged away as the warehouse erupted into flames. At this thought he became very concerned for his master, and
feverishly hoped that his master had survived the inferno.
Obi-Wan's
thoughts were jarred as the men threw him down on the icy floor. As he fought to roll over on his back, a man
entered the desolate room.
The man
was gigantic, making the other men look diminutive. He wore a blood red cloak with a black tunic and pants. He was obviously the superior to the other
men, as they stood behind him and cowered.
His commanding presence filled the room as his harsh gaze centered on
Obi-Wan.
The two
other men seemed to shrink away as the new man's voice boomed.
"You,
Jedi," he sneered, "have meddled in our affairs and in doing so you have cost
me a lifetime of riches. You have been
given to me to punish as I see fit."
The man stepped toward his helpless prisoner, as if threatening
him. "I don't think it would be
profitable to kill you, so I will save you from that fate. You will make an excellent slave, however."
Obi-Wan
wasn't sure if that was to his benefit as the man looked at him like a predator
would at fresh meat.
"Yes,
you will do. I will take you to
Kantreg, and you will be my personal slave.
You do not have a name anymore.
You shall be known as slave, boy, or scum. You will come quickly and obediently when called or I will
make your life miserable. That is a
promise."
He leaned in close to Obi-Wan's
face, as if daring him to disagree.
Obi-Wan returned the look with a cold glare.
Obi-Wan's
hopes at escape or a rescue had vanished when the man had said they were going
to Kantreg. It was a small planet on
the outer rim where slavery was accepted, not despised. There was little to no hope that anyone
would find him on the tiny planet. It
was up to him to devise a plan to return to Coruscant and the Jedi Temple. Obi-Wan decided to accept this turn of
events and wait. He then answered the
burly pirate.
"What
am I to call you, then?" Obi-Wan kept
his voice neutral and calm.
"My
name is Croix, but you will call me Master at all times." Croix answered.
Croix
then signaled the other men with his hand.
They took hold of Obi-Wan's arms and dragged him onto a landing pad with
a waiting starship. It had a jet-black
hull that made it seem like a vehicle of death. The men dragged Obi-Wan on to the ship to a seat in a room just
outside of the cockpit. They chained
him to an uncomfortable chair that was made entirely of metal. Obi-Wan knew that he would be held there for
the days it took to go to the outer rim.
Croix
approached the chair with a strange device in his hand.
"One
more thing," he said, grinning menacingly, "Banish any thoughts of escaping."
He
reached over and snapped a strange machine that looked like a bracelet to
Obi-Wan's limp and bloody wrist.
"This
administers a drug every twelve hours that will keep your Jedi powers at bay.
It is indestructible and you will not be able to take it off. If you try to leave my property without
permission, it will inject you with enough of the drug to kill you instantly.
Croix turned and walked away with a confident swagger as
Obi-Wan was injected with a drug by a needle in the bracelet. It put him instantly into a deep sleep as
the starship carried him toward a bleak future.
Qui-Gon
stood before the Jedi Council, the gazes of the twelve masters sweeping across
him. The last few weeks had been a
blur, the events rushing by his mind, but not penetrating his muddled thoughts.
Qui-Gon
had recovered from most of his wounds, but gained many more in the wake of the
awful news. He had hardly slept since
Tahl's visit as terrible nightmares plagued his restless slumber.
The
gazes of the Jedi were now stronger and laced with concern and sadness. Qui-Gon didn't want their pity. It wouldn't bring Obi-Wan back.
"Worried
about you, we are," Yoda started, not pausing for introductions.
"You
shouldn't be. I have almost fully recovered from my wounds. The ones that remain will be gone in a
matter of days," Qui-Gon replied, keeping his face as still as stone.
"We
were not referring to your physical injuries, but the mental effects about the
death of Obi-Wan," Mace Windu stated.
"Ra'ae and others in the Temple have noticed your behavior in the last
few days. They say that you have seemed
distant from everyone and everything."
"My
apprentice was murdered. I believe that
that is reason enough for my recent actions," Qui-Gon said stoically.
"Normal
grieving, this is not," Yoda said with obvious concern.
"I will
be fine," Qui-Gon replied firmly.
"Then we will not discuss the matter
any further," Mace Windu said, not pressing the subject as signs of worry
appeared on his face.
Qui-Gon
had little emotion apparent in his expression as he looked at Mace Windu. The council member could see the great pain
hidden beneath the cool exterior of the gaze.
Windu's grief for Obi-Wan and for his friend echoed the sadness in
Qui-Gon's eyes as the look was broken.
"May the Force be with you,"
Windu said as Qui-Gon bowed, then left the room.
After he had left, Yoda and
Windu stepped aside.
"He will need much time to
heal," Windu said to the small master.
"Time he will have," Yoda
answered as they watched Qui-Gon walking slowly down the hall.
Obi-Wan was jarred awake by
the sound of repulsorlifts. He
immediately looked around and found he was still in the metal chair. The ship began to land, though Obi-Wan
wasn't sure if it was on Kantreg. If this is Kantreg, he thought, then I was asleep for many days.
Before
he could assess the situation any longer, Croix burst into the room. The man seemed to be in a calm mood, which
Obi-Wan was thankful for. He didn't
want any more beatings like the previous ones he had been given.
"Get
up, slave," Croix told the Jedi, " we have arrived. I don't want any trouble from you, got it?"
"Yes,"
Obi-Wan answered cautiously.
Croix
slapped him sharply across the face, leaving Obi-Wan momentarily stunned.
"Yes,
what?" Croix said menacingly.
"Yes, Master." Obi-Wan could feel
blood run down his aching face as he uttered the proper title. He waited until the pirate turned to wipe it
off, not wanting to provoke any other blows.
The word had sounded wrong in Obi-Wan's mouth, as if he was eating a
bitter food. Qui-Gon is your master,
his mind screamed, not that murderous pirate!
"Go get
your wounds mended at the infirmary. Be
back in two hours, or you will receive many more today," Croix threatened.
"Yes,
Master." Obi Wan tried to see straight as he limped into the street.
He asked a passerby where the infirmary was. The being pointed to a small building that
looked nearly run down, but after comparison so did all of the other buildings
on the planet.
Obi-Wan
looked around to survey the planet and its people. The planet was rocky, with reddish-brown soil and numerous
mountains. He could see the dangers of
the rough terrain and assumed that there were just as dangerous animals located
in the dense forest opposite the mountains.
The people in town had skin the color of water, though there were some
humanoids. They looked poor with their
dirty and tattered clothes. Most of
them hurried past Obi-Wan without giving him a glance, and the ones that did
seemed to glare at him with a hatred, as if they knew he was a slave.
Obi-Wan
ducked out of the street into the side alley, following the directions he was
given. He found the infirmary in an
abandoned alley. There was a small door
around Obi-Wan's height in the center of a stone wall with a small painted
INFIRMARY on the space above it.
Obi-Wan
entered, and found a short woman standing in the center of a small room. She came up to him carrying a syringe and a
towel on a tray.
"What
do ya need?" she asked him.
"Uh, I
was wondering if you could heal these cuts," Obi-Wan said cautiously. This seemed like a woman that you shouldn't
provoke.
"Sure. Get on that table over there, I'll be there
in a few moments." She directed him to a table in the corner that looked like
it was about to collapse.
Obi-Wan
sat on the table lightly, fearing that it would break at any second. The woman came over to the table before he
had much time to worry about it, though.
"I
haven't seen you around here before.
You new here?" she inquired.
"Yes, I
just arrived. My name is Obi-Wan
Kenobi," Obi-Wan replied. Though he
usually wasn't quick to trust people he had just met, he felt that he could
trust and talk to this woman. " What's
yours?"
"People
call me Sakde. Those wounds look pretty bad.
How'd you get 'em?"
"I was
disciplined by my master," Obi-Wan decided to get used to the title.
"And
that would be?" Sakde seemed more curious now.
She began to bandage a cut on his forehead.
"A man
named Croix," Obi-Wan said simply. He
watched for her reaction.
It
didn't seem good. She started as a
frown appeared on her face.
"So,
you another one of his? Doesn't look
like you got on his good side."
"No, I
didn't," Obi-Wan didn't like the way she was talking about Croix. She seemed very mad and concerned.
"I have
some advice, kid. Don't get on his bad
side. Most of the serious injuries I
get in here are on his slaves, caused by him.
If you don't do what he says he will punish you, and even if you do, I
have a feeling that you'll be here more than you'd like to be."
Sakde
finished repairing the cuts and bandaging his sore back.
"I'd
give you some painkillers, but he'd just take them and beat you because of
them. If I were you, I'd get used to
the pain and try to build up a resistance to it," she said with pity in her
eyes.
"Thank
you for helping me, and for the advice.
I'll try to use it to my benefit.
I must ask you of one more thing, though," Obi-Wan stated.
"And
what would that be?" Sakde asked.
"Can
you tell me where Croix's residence is?
I need to be back soon."
"Of
course. You go straight towards the
mountains to the edge of town, then turn right. You will see a gigantic house.
That's what you're looking for," Sakde told him, though it was apparent
that she didn't want him to go there.
"Thank
you. I think I'll be seeing you soon if
you're right," Obi-Wan told her as he ducked to go out of the tiny doorway.
"You're
welcome and take care of yourself," she said, smiling, "Come back and see me
sometime, when you don't have to."
Obi-Wan
smiled, then ran down the alley, not wanting to waste time getting to the
mansion. He did not want to anger Croix
more than necessary.
At least I have one friend
here, Obi-Wan thought as he took one last look at the
infirmary door. Then he ran down the
street, and towards his unknown and bleak future.
Qui-Gon
looked out at the bustling streets of Coruscant from a balcony in the Jedi
Temple. The young Padawan had loved to
watch the busy city and all of its excitement, usually standing for hours just
observing the flow of beings through the metropolis. Qui-Gon wished that Obi-Wan could have been there with him.
At the thought of his Padawan, Qui-Gon became somber, his sadness
kept at bay in a corner of his mind. He
had agreed to wait for a matter of months before taking another mission after
acknowledging his problem of managing his intense grief over the death of
Obi-Wan.
As he looked out on a
beautiful sunset above the swarm of clamoring people, Qui-Gon knew that Obi-Wan
was one with the Force and that his apprentice would always be with him. This didn't comfort him, however, but
instead added to his sadness and rage at the injustice. Even if his Padawan was one with the Force,
Qui-Gon would rather have Obi-Wan with him here instead.
Qui-Gon broke his chain of
thought and told himself that he should meditate to help soothe his strong
emotions, though he dreaded to think about the incident any more. After heaving a weary sigh, he retreated
into his pitch-black room, letting the darkness swallow him, mirroring the
heart wrenching pain that was threatening to overcome him.
End Part 1