I am not sure if this is where I want the scene, or if I even want this scene, please help me decide
Scene 2
(Opens to a well-decorated room of the M. Nolan's apartment. Kevin is in the room sitting with his friends, Seth and Nathan West. They are discussing the future arrangements.)
Kevin: 3 months left until the bondage of slavery.
Nathan: or everlasting love, I suppose it's the way you see it.
Kevin: Ah so that's what this is supposed to be. I don't know what I'm doing. Part of me is so devoted to her, but the other part of me realizes, what I'm giving up. I guess it's the debate of quality versus quantity.
Seth: Are you sure that Jenn is right for you?
K: No, I have a feeling she would be right for me, but I'm not sure. I feel like I'm taking a jump into the wrong direction. Never again will I be able to add to my legacy.
N: You need to do some thinking. Jenn should be your legacy, past and present. You should have no questions at all of what you're giving up for her. I know I'd give my life to be with Renee.
K: I don't feel that way. When I think of how much pussy I'm giving up to pursue this one girl.
S: You still haven't slept with her?
K: No, I haven't; and that's part of what's drawing me in. I don't understand love, I never will.
N: I really don't think it's fair to let her believe you love her, to the point of being wed; only to find out later that it was maybe only an infatuation. That's not fair to her, and that's not fair to you.
K: So, you completely and utterly love Renee, without a doubt in your mind.
N: We love each other beyond all else.
S: That's cute bullshit, now your telling me nothing could tear you apart?
N: Not even God himself. We are totally devoted.
K: That's great. I'm truly happy for you. (no sarcasm)
N: Thank you. I'm going to leave now to be back in Boston by nightfall. And Kevin, you need to seriously think about the consequences of the marriage. Talk to her about it, talk to someone. Till we meet again. (Exits through stage Left door, leaving Seth and Kevin together)
K: I don't think he's faking this.
S: Women are the only ones good at faking, as he's probably noticed quite often. It is obvious that he is so uncertain of this relation, that it could crumble in a moment's notice.
K: You're not going to fuck with this one. Tell me your not.
S: We'll see. In the meantime, I would suggest that you decide if you are devoted to Jenn or not. On that point, the shithead might just be right. Are you attending the symphony, tonight?
K: No, I think I'll pass. With whom are you going?
S: A good acquaintance, you might just be our topic of conversation.
K: Sounds interesting, Keep me posted.
S: Certainly (departs furvishly)
Curtain falls
Scene 2
(Opens to a well-decorated room of the M. Nolan's apartment. Kevin is in the room sitting with his friends, Seth and Nathan West. They are discussing the future arrangements.)
Kevin: 3 months left until the bondage of slavery.
Nathan: or everlasting love, I suppose it's the way you see it.
Kevin: Ah so that's what this is supposed to be. I don't know what I'm doing. Part of me is so devoted to her, but the other part of me realizes, what I'm giving up. I guess it's the debate of quality versus quantity.
Seth: Are you sure that Jenn is right for you?
K: No, I have a feeling she would be right for me, but I'm not sure. I feel like I'm taking a jump into the wrong direction. Never again will I be able to add to my legacy.
N: You need to do some thinking. Jenn should be your legacy, past and present. You should have no questions at all of what you're giving up for her. I know I'd give my life to be with Renee.
K: I don't feel that way. When I think of how much pussy I'm giving up to pursue this one girl.
S: You still haven't slept with her?
K: No, I haven't; and that's part of what's drawing me in. I don't understand love, I never will.
N: I really don't think it's fair to let her believe you love her, to the point of being wed; only to find out later that it was maybe only an infatuation. That's not fair to her, and that's not fair to you.
K: So, you completely and utterly love Renee, without a doubt in your mind.
N: We love each other beyond all else.
S: That's cute bullshit, now your telling me nothing could tear you apart?
N: Not even God himself. We are totally devoted.
K: That's great. I'm truly happy for you. (no sarcasm)
N: Thank you. I'm going to leave now to be back in Boston by nightfall. And Kevin, you need to seriously think about the consequences of the marriage. Talk to her about it, talk to someone. Till we meet again. (Exits through stage Left door, leaving Seth and Kevin together)
K: I don't think he's faking this.
S: Women are the only ones good at faking, as he's probably noticed quite often. It is obvious that he is so uncertain of this relation, that it could crumble in a moment's notice.
K: You're not going to fuck with this one. Tell me your not.
S: We'll see. In the meantime, I would suggest that you decide if you are devoted to Jenn or not. On that point, the shithead might just be right. Are you attending the symphony, tonight?
K: No, I think I'll pass. With whom are you going?
S: A good acquaintance, you might just be our topic of conversation.
K: Sounds interesting, Keep me posted.
S: Certainly (departs furvishly)
Curtain falls