Allrighty, my second chapter. Once again, I do not own anything, and am
not making any money whatsoever.
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Author's note: A big thanks to all my reviewers, and sorry about the last
chapter, it was rushed in so I will try to make this one longer and
better. Oh yeah, now I will be writing a little from Karen's POV so if
something starts with Karen it's her.
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Chapter 2
The door swung open with a loud creak. Suddenly the smells of
smoke and cheap perfume found their way to Jack's nose. 'Whoa,' Jack thought.
'This place is pretty bad' Then he realized it wasn't as bad as it
seemed. The bar was just a small house, consisting of a counter where
the bartender served drinks and four smaller tables with four chairs on each.
There was no sign of entertainment in the bar, it was just a place people
came to unwind after a hard days' work. Jack settled down a a small table
in the corner, where he didn't think anybody would notice him. When he
had just started to deciding what to have, Karen walked into the bar.
'Oh no, not her again,' Jack thought. 'Does she follow me everywhere?'
'She's form the winery, she must like wine, that's it, she's here for the wine'
But was she really there for the wine. Or did Karen really see something in
this Jack character. He hoped not. While contemplating this dilemma,
and sitting in the corner, sipping a glass of water, a strangely pretty
pink haired strode confidently into the bar.
'This girl' Jack wondered. 'Who is she, I must know her name'
For you see, Jack had never really loved someone before. But the moment
he saw this.... this woman, he knew she was to be his bride. Never had
he been more set on a task. He would make his farm flourish to get the attention
of this girl. After she walked out, Jack went over to the bartender and asked
who the girl was. His reply was, "Her name's Popuri, and she's the flower shop
owner's daughter. "So does she like flowers and home-grown things?" Jack
asked impatiently. "What are you, stupid? Who doesn't?" said the bartender
snickering. With that, Jack triumphently walked outside, not even bothering
to say hello to Karen.
Karen
'Ah, it feels so good to realax. Father has me working way too
hard. AND I get to stare at that cute farmer-boy again. I think he really
likes me. It's only a matter of time... Karen in poked on the shoulder.
"Huh," she says outloud. "Wha?" she says grogilly. "I fell asleep again?"
'And that farmer boy didn't even say goodbye..."
J
As Jack walked home, all he could think about was how much he liked that
pink-haired girl. Jack started humming to himself. He also started to fantasize
about her. 'She would make a lovely wife. We would do all sorts of stuff together.
Then I would have children and she could help out and everyone would be so
very, very happy.' With all this daydreaming, Jack had lost his way. He had
stumbled into the woods. He didn't know his way around at all. Jack was
hopelessly lost...
not making any money whatsoever.
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Author's note: A big thanks to all my reviewers, and sorry about the last
chapter, it was rushed in so I will try to make this one longer and
better. Oh yeah, now I will be writing a little from Karen's POV so if
something starts with Karen it's her.
*****
Chapter 2
The door swung open with a loud creak. Suddenly the smells of
smoke and cheap perfume found their way to Jack's nose. 'Whoa,' Jack thought.
'This place is pretty bad' Then he realized it wasn't as bad as it
seemed. The bar was just a small house, consisting of a counter where
the bartender served drinks and four smaller tables with four chairs on each.
There was no sign of entertainment in the bar, it was just a place people
came to unwind after a hard days' work. Jack settled down a a small table
in the corner, where he didn't think anybody would notice him. When he
had just started to deciding what to have, Karen walked into the bar.
'Oh no, not her again,' Jack thought. 'Does she follow me everywhere?'
'She's form the winery, she must like wine, that's it, she's here for the wine'
But was she really there for the wine. Or did Karen really see something in
this Jack character. He hoped not. While contemplating this dilemma,
and sitting in the corner, sipping a glass of water, a strangely pretty
pink haired strode confidently into the bar.
'This girl' Jack wondered. 'Who is she, I must know her name'
For you see, Jack had never really loved someone before. But the moment
he saw this.... this woman, he knew she was to be his bride. Never had
he been more set on a task. He would make his farm flourish to get the attention
of this girl. After she walked out, Jack went over to the bartender and asked
who the girl was. His reply was, "Her name's Popuri, and she's the flower shop
owner's daughter. "So does she like flowers and home-grown things?" Jack
asked impatiently. "What are you, stupid? Who doesn't?" said the bartender
snickering. With that, Jack triumphently walked outside, not even bothering
to say hello to Karen.
Karen
'Ah, it feels so good to realax. Father has me working way too
hard. AND I get to stare at that cute farmer-boy again. I think he really
likes me. It's only a matter of time... Karen in poked on the shoulder.
"Huh," she says outloud. "Wha?" she says grogilly. "I fell asleep again?"
'And that farmer boy didn't even say goodbye..."
J
As Jack walked home, all he could think about was how much he liked that
pink-haired girl. Jack started humming to himself. He also started to fantasize
about her. 'She would make a lovely wife. We would do all sorts of stuff together.
Then I would have children and she could help out and everyone would be so
very, very happy.' With all this daydreaming, Jack had lost his way. He had
stumbled into the woods. He didn't know his way around at all. Jack was
hopelessly lost...