Hey FF9 reader's this is my first fic so be cruel and tell me what u really think
Vivi stared at the starry sky wondering what had happened..the last he could remember he was filled with a murderous hate towards Kuja...he had seen his only family into believing that they would "live" longer if they joined forces with him "I can't believe it that they believed him, I wonder what will happen to them I can't bear to see what they are the only family I have if I loose them who will know what it's like to go from town to town sneered at and called a freak...just because I was created and became a defect...what is this word is it supposed to be bad the only thing I can see with this word is it gave me life, I became my own person, if I had become like the other's I would be controlled and use for evil."
Garnet and Zidane came walking in the distance and spotted Vivi. "Vivi, don't worry." called Garnet as she started to move towards him just as Zidane was beginning to. "We'll find Kuja and break from limb to limb." Garnet glared at Zidane he scowled and turned away. "Vivi, your friends made they choice you couldn't do anything, I know you want to but they have to learn for themselves when the time comes." he looked at her with his orange eyes and she could see the pain and suffering of so many things, she so the loss of so many loved ones and so the struggle to find someone to share his life with someone who knew how he never belonged..but couldn't find them.
He stared at her for a moment and said with one crisp phrase "What is life when no one can share it with you."
The End
P.S Don't worry this is only the beginning I am going to write a couple of chapters but please review I am eager to hear your responses
Vivi stared at the starry sky wondering what had happened..the last he could remember he was filled with a murderous hate towards Kuja...he had seen his only family into believing that they would "live" longer if they joined forces with him "I can't believe it that they believed him, I wonder what will happen to them I can't bear to see what they are the only family I have if I loose them who will know what it's like to go from town to town sneered at and called a freak...just because I was created and became a defect...what is this word is it supposed to be bad the only thing I can see with this word is it gave me life, I became my own person, if I had become like the other's I would be controlled and use for evil."
Garnet and Zidane came walking in the distance and spotted Vivi. "Vivi, don't worry." called Garnet as she started to move towards him just as Zidane was beginning to. "We'll find Kuja and break from limb to limb." Garnet glared at Zidane he scowled and turned away. "Vivi, your friends made they choice you couldn't do anything, I know you want to but they have to learn for themselves when the time comes." he looked at her with his orange eyes and she could see the pain and suffering of so many things, she so the loss of so many loved ones and so the struggle to find someone to share his life with someone who knew how he never belonged..but couldn't find them.
He stared at her for a moment and said with one crisp phrase "What is life when no one can share it with you."
The End
P.S Don't worry this is only the beginning I am going to write a couple of chapters but please review I am eager to hear your responses