EOTW rewritten
Title: EOTW: rewritten aka Your Hopeless
Author: Shell
Rating: PG
Declaimer: Roswell belongs to Melinda Metz, JK, and now UPN.
Summary: What would happen if Max went to see Liz after he finished talking to Maria
Feedback: Why Not
Part 1
Max was walking around the dark street of Roswell aimlessly. Max's mind flashed back to the earlier conversation with Liz.
~:Flash:
My life is only in danger if I am with you. I...I want to be in love with boys...normal boys. I...I want to see my 21st birthday. I...I want to have a wedding day. I...I...I want to have children...and I want my children to be safe. You know, Max, if...if you truly love me, you'll let me go. I may love you, but I...I don't want to die for you.
:End Flash:~
/Why is she acting this way? Liz was always the one who didn't care about the danger/
Max thought to himself, he looked up to see the blinking lights of the Crashdown sign.
/Maria....Maria we know what to do/
Crashdown
Max goes in and tells Maria about what Liz said earlier.
They were quite for a few minutes
Maria: You just want me to tell you that it's all gonna work out, right?
Max: No. I want to hear what you have to say.
Maria: Ok. Here's what I think...give Liz up. Leave her alone. All this is leading nowhere. None of us belong with any of you. And I'm really sick of how much it's screwing us up. I mean, look at us. We're pathetic.
Max wasn't listening
Maria: You're not there, are you?
Max: I can't help it. I love her. What can I say?
Maria: You're hopeless.
Max gets up from the counter and begins to walk to the back.
"Max where are you going?" Maria asked as she went to intercept him
"I'm going to Liz"
"Max!!! Liz made it loud and clear, leave her alone"
"No Maria!! I love Liz NOT Tess!!! I don't care about my destiny...my planet all I care about is Liz, Without her I'm nothing!!!" Max yelled emotionally
Maria blinked "You really love her don't you?" Maria asked quietly
Max looks at her a second then sallow "Yes"
Maria touches his arm "The go to her, Don't let some blonde bimbo get in the way"
"Thanks Maria, Don't let Courtney get in-between you and Michael, Michael might show it but he does love you" Max said knowing the blonde bimbo comment was more Courtney then Tess
"Yeah...well I'm not sure about me and Mikey G anymore..."
"Maria..."
"Go get her girlfriend" Maria interrupted not wanting to here anymore
Max gives her one last look then goes up to Liz's room.
Liz's Room
Max opens Liz's bedroom door slightly and looks in because no one answered his knock
"Liz" Max called
FMax: It didn't work. We have to do something else.
Max turns to the balcony at the sound of the male voice.
/Why does he sound so familiar/
Liz: No, I...I can't.
/Liz...why does she sound so upset?/
FMax: You have to.
/Who is he?....If he's hurting Liz I swear I will kill him/ Max thinks to himself as he rushes over to the window.
He was about to go out on the balcony when he got a look at the owner of the male voice.
/What the hell...That's...That's me/
Max was shocked he could do nothing but watch
Liz: Do you know how hard it was for me to tell him that I didn't want to die for him? He's the only reason that I'm alive right now. You...you've...you gotta come up with another plan. Please go to someone else. I...I just...I can't do this anymore.
/She still love's me, she was forced to do it.../ Before Max could finish his thought the older version of him began to speck again
FMax: Just 25 minutes before I came here, I held Michael in my arms...dead. Isabel died 2 weeks before that. Now you have to do this. You have to find a way. All of our lives depend on it.
/Michael...Isabel...she did it to save them/ Max thinks to himself shocked and loving he more
Liz: How? What can I do that's gonna make you turn away from me?
FMax: I don't know.
"Nothing will"
/Oh my God/ Liz thinks to herself
FMax and Liz turn around to see Max
TBC~ Well Max knows about his Future self not what will happen
Title: EOTW: rewritten aka Your Hopeless
Author: Shell
Rating: PG
Declaimer: Roswell belongs to Melinda Metz, JK, and now UPN.
Summary: What would happen if Max went to see Liz after he finished talking to Maria
Feedback: Why Not
Part 1
Max was walking around the dark street of Roswell aimlessly. Max's mind flashed back to the earlier conversation with Liz.
~:Flash:
My life is only in danger if I am with you. I...I want to be in love with boys...normal boys. I...I want to see my 21st birthday. I...I want to have a wedding day. I...I...I want to have children...and I want my children to be safe. You know, Max, if...if you truly love me, you'll let me go. I may love you, but I...I don't want to die for you.
:End Flash:~
/Why is she acting this way? Liz was always the one who didn't care about the danger/
Max thought to himself, he looked up to see the blinking lights of the Crashdown sign.
/Maria....Maria we know what to do/
Crashdown
Max goes in and tells Maria about what Liz said earlier.
They were quite for a few minutes
Maria: You just want me to tell you that it's all gonna work out, right?
Max: No. I want to hear what you have to say.
Maria: Ok. Here's what I think...give Liz up. Leave her alone. All this is leading nowhere. None of us belong with any of you. And I'm really sick of how much it's screwing us up. I mean, look at us. We're pathetic.
Max wasn't listening
Maria: You're not there, are you?
Max: I can't help it. I love her. What can I say?
Maria: You're hopeless.
Max gets up from the counter and begins to walk to the back.
"Max where are you going?" Maria asked as she went to intercept him
"I'm going to Liz"
"Max!!! Liz made it loud and clear, leave her alone"
"No Maria!! I love Liz NOT Tess!!! I don't care about my destiny...my planet all I care about is Liz, Without her I'm nothing!!!" Max yelled emotionally
Maria blinked "You really love her don't you?" Maria asked quietly
Max looks at her a second then sallow "Yes"
Maria touches his arm "The go to her, Don't let some blonde bimbo get in the way"
"Thanks Maria, Don't let Courtney get in-between you and Michael, Michael might show it but he does love you" Max said knowing the blonde bimbo comment was more Courtney then Tess
"Yeah...well I'm not sure about me and Mikey G anymore..."
"Maria..."
"Go get her girlfriend" Maria interrupted not wanting to here anymore
Max gives her one last look then goes up to Liz's room.
Liz's Room
Max opens Liz's bedroom door slightly and looks in because no one answered his knock
"Liz" Max called
FMax: It didn't work. We have to do something else.
Max turns to the balcony at the sound of the male voice.
/Why does he sound so familiar/
Liz: No, I...I can't.
/Liz...why does she sound so upset?/
FMax: You have to.
/Who is he?....If he's hurting Liz I swear I will kill him/ Max thinks to himself as he rushes over to the window.
He was about to go out on the balcony when he got a look at the owner of the male voice.
/What the hell...That's...That's me/
Max was shocked he could do nothing but watch
Liz: Do you know how hard it was for me to tell him that I didn't want to die for him? He's the only reason that I'm alive right now. You...you've...you gotta come up with another plan. Please go to someone else. I...I just...I can't do this anymore.
/She still love's me, she was forced to do it.../ Before Max could finish his thought the older version of him began to speck again
FMax: Just 25 minutes before I came here, I held Michael in my arms...dead. Isabel died 2 weeks before that. Now you have to do this. You have to find a way. All of our lives depend on it.
/Michael...Isabel...she did it to save them/ Max thinks to himself shocked and loving he more
Liz: How? What can I do that's gonna make you turn away from me?
FMax: I don't know.
"Nothing will"
/Oh my God/ Liz thinks to herself
FMax and Liz turn around to see Max
TBC~ Well Max knows about his Future self not what will happen