Author's Note: Hey! Ok, now this is a bit different, each chapter is written from a character's point of view, first chapter was in Shiro's view, but it will change each chapter. Hope thats ok. Some langage further chapters.
The New Mobile Suit
By: Soul Goddess
Victoria's point of view
The mass of black was uncontrollably fast! It went straight for me, screaming I jumped away, missing any damage. The Commander rushed toward the thing with his beam sword, aiming for the arm. For some reason the beam sword couldn't cut through it. Leaving the Commander open for attack. I thought quickly and slammed into the thing, away from the Commander. "Fall back and hit with the beam rifles!" I heard the Commander yell. Following orders from this guy was hard, he always changed his tactics at the last minute. That annoyed me, but what could I do? He is the Commander afterall. My thoughts were so troubling I didn't see the thing charge at me.
The force was so intense, that my whole Gundam shut down. I was also knocked out, because everything went black.
* Flashback*
I saw my hometown....peaceful...quiet....but then...Flames! " NOOOOOO!" I screamed. Why now? So many dead................................................................ " MOMMY...DADDY!!"
*End of Flashback*
"Victoria," a soothing voice called me. "Wake up, Victoria." I openned my eyes, for a second I thought I saw an angel. " AAAAAAH!" I screamed. The Commander looked back at me with puzzled eyes. "I didn't mean to startle you, Victoria" he said quietly. How did I see him as an angel? That confused me, "The Thing?" I asked. "It was captured intact, as planned," he said with a smile. "You okay?" "Yeah, just not everyday I wake up to a guy's face," I answered lamly. Why was it lame? I didn't know, not then at least.
It turned out that, the Great leader of, Zion had designed the things or "Aquas" to destroy submarnies or ships near the front line. It took three days of research and work to find out how it worked and so on. The Commander even, began to gain everyone's trust and loyality. Headquaters were happy on our success, with the Aquas. It seemed Zion was being careless, by letting us win a base with so much info. But the Commander reminded us that, all the infomation found could be false. I reminded myself, not to get excited about small things when the war in whole was important.
That night I sat by the shore and wondered about the commander. I couldn't help it, today I was impressed a bit by the mission's success. I found myself begin to like him, I mean love him. He seemed caring, kind and not to mention hot. But I stilled remembered the first look he gave me, impressed and soft. I wondered if he had covered me when my Gundam shut down. Tilly came up behind me,"Thinking about the commander?" she asked. "Yeah, but tell and you die" I warned. Then I smiled and wondered how torrorrow would end up like.
To be continued...
The New Mobile Suit
By: Soul Goddess
Victoria's point of view
The mass of black was uncontrollably fast! It went straight for me, screaming I jumped away, missing any damage. The Commander rushed toward the thing with his beam sword, aiming for the arm. For some reason the beam sword couldn't cut through it. Leaving the Commander open for attack. I thought quickly and slammed into the thing, away from the Commander. "Fall back and hit with the beam rifles!" I heard the Commander yell. Following orders from this guy was hard, he always changed his tactics at the last minute. That annoyed me, but what could I do? He is the Commander afterall. My thoughts were so troubling I didn't see the thing charge at me.
The force was so intense, that my whole Gundam shut down. I was also knocked out, because everything went black.
* Flashback*
I saw my hometown....peaceful...quiet....but then...Flames! " NOOOOOO!" I screamed. Why now? So many dead................................................................ " MOMMY...DADDY!!"
*End of Flashback*
"Victoria," a soothing voice called me. "Wake up, Victoria." I openned my eyes, for a second I thought I saw an angel. " AAAAAAH!" I screamed. The Commander looked back at me with puzzled eyes. "I didn't mean to startle you, Victoria" he said quietly. How did I see him as an angel? That confused me, "The Thing?" I asked. "It was captured intact, as planned," he said with a smile. "You okay?" "Yeah, just not everyday I wake up to a guy's face," I answered lamly. Why was it lame? I didn't know, not then at least.
It turned out that, the Great leader of, Zion had designed the things or "Aquas" to destroy submarnies or ships near the front line. It took three days of research and work to find out how it worked and so on. The Commander even, began to gain everyone's trust and loyality. Headquaters were happy on our success, with the Aquas. It seemed Zion was being careless, by letting us win a base with so much info. But the Commander reminded us that, all the infomation found could be false. I reminded myself, not to get excited about small things when the war in whole was important.
That night I sat by the shore and wondered about the commander. I couldn't help it, today I was impressed a bit by the mission's success. I found myself begin to like him, I mean love him. He seemed caring, kind and not to mention hot. But I stilled remembered the first look he gave me, impressed and soft. I wondered if he had covered me when my Gundam shut down. Tilly came up behind me,"Thinking about the commander?" she asked. "Yeah, but tell and you die" I warned. Then I smiled and wondered how torrorrow would end up like.
To be continued...