This is my first Metroid poem...I don't know how I wrote a poem about this but it is in Samus' POV thinking about what happened while she was at the planet Zebes...

Memories

You hatched

From that egg

You thought

I was your mother

A metroid

none like the others

I took you to the lab

then you were missing

I went to look for you

instead

I found out they took you

When I found you

you thought I was your enemy

You attacked me and drained

my energy

You stopped

when I was near death

you ran away from me

you seemed upset

But it was ok

I didn't care

I went on to look for you

But instead

I found trouble

This brain

no this monster

attacked me

trying to kill me

When this monster

was about to finish me off

you came to help me

protect me

You drained the

monsters energy

it looked like it was dead

but it was alive

and upset

You protected me

with every blow

I knew you were

getting weak

You gave me your strength

to kill this monster

so I used the plasma beam

to finish it off

It died quick

now I had to run

fearing for my life

I used everything I had

to get that monsters

minions out of my way

Before I left

I had to save some friends

I freed them from their prison

But that wasn't the end

I got to my ship

and fled the planet

I saw it disappear

with you on it..

I thank you

for saving my life

I regret I

couldn't save yours

and bring you back

to our planet...

So what did you guys think? I didn't see a lot of Metroid poems except one so tried to write one.....I think it sux but r&r plz...