Chapter 3: Proper Meeting
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Conventions
1)*Character Thoughts*
2)"Character Dialouge"
Enjoy!
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-Part 1-
He's been out of it since that night at the club. For the past few days, people around him have noticed Jann-Lee staring off into no where. Even one of the other body guards, Ken, noticed.
"Hey Jann-Lee, what are you starin' at?" Ken asked.
"Huh? Uh-" Jann-Lee hesitated, not being on guard was something he never does "Nothing."
"Oh really? You know what I think?"
"I don't care what you think." [-- Jann-Lee's not a people person.]
"I think you got a woman on your mind!"
"A woman! I don't waste my time on women! I'd use my time better if I were training!"
"Sure man, whatever you say."
Jann-Lee's boss, also taking note of his behavior, decided Jann-Lee needed a nice long vacation. Being who he is, Jann-Lee wasn't all too thrilled about it. After all, what better excuse is there to be able to fight other than protecting someone?
It was high noon and Jann-Lee was having his lunch at the local burger place. He was eating alone when a woman came up to sit in front of him.
*It's that woman! The one from the club! Lei Fang I think!*
"Hello." Lei Fang said placing her food in front of her.
"Uh, hi."
"Haven't I seen you somewhere before?"
"Uh, I don't know."
"Yes I have, you were that guy in the alley. The one who was about to help. I have seen you before!"
"I guess so." Jann-Lee stared hard out the window next to him, trying not to look at Lei Fang.
"Well, we haven't properly met have we? My name is Lei Fang. Pleased to meet you."
"I'm Jann-Lee."
"Jann-Lee huh? Is it okay if I sit here Jann-Lee?"
"I don't care."
Lei Fang glanced at him and smiled.
-Part 2-
Lei Fang was was walking around when she deicided to have some lunch. Looking for a place to eat, she noticed Jann-Lee sitting alone at the buger place.
*It's that guy! I wonder if I should I go in and meet him.*
Lei Fang stood in line and thought about what she should do.
*Hmm, I wonder if I should wait for him to finish and meet him outside... Or maybe I should just get my food to go and say hi real quick. If I got his name I'd be satisfied. I wonder what is his name. It'll probably some cool name that means 'iron will' or something. He seems pretty strong. He definately has a great build. I know he doesn't need viagra. His personality, I can't see past his face. I can usually tell by a guy's face what he wants, but not this one. I wonder why...*
Ignoring all the options she thought about, Lei Fang went straight to Jann-Lee's table and sat down.
"Hello." *Oh god what am I doing?"
"Uh, hi."
"Haven't I seen you somewhere before?" *He probably didn't even see me that night.*
"Uh, I don't know."
"Yes I have, you were that guy in the alley. The one who was about to help. I have seen you before!" *Why can't I learn to shut my mouth?*
"I guess so."
"Well, we haven't properly met have we? My name is Lei Fang. Pleased to meet you." *Oh man, I thought he would say something like 'I don't know you, what the hell are you talking about!'*
"I'm Jann-Lee."
"Jann-Lee huh? Is it okay if I sit here Jann-Lee?" *I hope he says I can."
"I don't care."
Lei Fang smiled *Jann-Lee...*
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Woo-hoo! Part 1 and part 2 are basically the same thing, but it's nice to know what characters are thinking when they do what they do. I made three whole chapters! Wow! I'm prone to having writer's block (which explains why only now have I started writing fics), small wonder how I've gotten this far. R&R (thanks to all the people who did!), disclaimers go here, thanks for reading!
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Conventions
1)*Character Thoughts*
2)"Character Dialouge"
Enjoy!
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-Part 1-
He's been out of it since that night at the club. For the past few days, people around him have noticed Jann-Lee staring off into no where. Even one of the other body guards, Ken, noticed.
"Hey Jann-Lee, what are you starin' at?" Ken asked.
"Huh? Uh-" Jann-Lee hesitated, not being on guard was something he never does "Nothing."
"Oh really? You know what I think?"
"I don't care what you think." [-- Jann-Lee's not a people person.]
"I think you got a woman on your mind!"
"A woman! I don't waste my time on women! I'd use my time better if I were training!"
"Sure man, whatever you say."
Jann-Lee's boss, also taking note of his behavior, decided Jann-Lee needed a nice long vacation. Being who he is, Jann-Lee wasn't all too thrilled about it. After all, what better excuse is there to be able to fight other than protecting someone?
It was high noon and Jann-Lee was having his lunch at the local burger place. He was eating alone when a woman came up to sit in front of him.
*It's that woman! The one from the club! Lei Fang I think!*
"Hello." Lei Fang said placing her food in front of her.
"Uh, hi."
"Haven't I seen you somewhere before?"
"Uh, I don't know."
"Yes I have, you were that guy in the alley. The one who was about to help. I have seen you before!"
"I guess so." Jann-Lee stared hard out the window next to him, trying not to look at Lei Fang.
"Well, we haven't properly met have we? My name is Lei Fang. Pleased to meet you."
"I'm Jann-Lee."
"Jann-Lee huh? Is it okay if I sit here Jann-Lee?"
"I don't care."
Lei Fang glanced at him and smiled.
-Part 2-
Lei Fang was was walking around when she deicided to have some lunch. Looking for a place to eat, she noticed Jann-Lee sitting alone at the buger place.
*It's that guy! I wonder if I should I go in and meet him.*
Lei Fang stood in line and thought about what she should do.
*Hmm, I wonder if I should wait for him to finish and meet him outside... Or maybe I should just get my food to go and say hi real quick. If I got his name I'd be satisfied. I wonder what is his name. It'll probably some cool name that means 'iron will' or something. He seems pretty strong. He definately has a great build. I know he doesn't need viagra. His personality, I can't see past his face. I can usually tell by a guy's face what he wants, but not this one. I wonder why...*
Ignoring all the options she thought about, Lei Fang went straight to Jann-Lee's table and sat down.
"Hello." *Oh god what am I doing?"
"Uh, hi."
"Haven't I seen you somewhere before?" *He probably didn't even see me that night.*
"Uh, I don't know."
"Yes I have, you were that guy in the alley. The one who was about to help. I have seen you before!" *Why can't I learn to shut my mouth?*
"I guess so."
"Well, we haven't properly met have we? My name is Lei Fang. Pleased to meet you." *Oh man, I thought he would say something like 'I don't know you, what the hell are you talking about!'*
"I'm Jann-Lee."
"Jann-Lee huh? Is it okay if I sit here Jann-Lee?" *I hope he says I can."
"I don't care."
Lei Fang smiled *Jann-Lee...*
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Woo-hoo! Part 1 and part 2 are basically the same thing, but it's nice to know what characters are thinking when they do what they do. I made three whole chapters! Wow! I'm prone to having writer's block (which explains why only now have I started writing fics), small wonder how I've gotten this far. R&R (thanks to all the people who did!), disclaimers go here, thanks for reading!
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