Chapter 4: Only Me
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Conventions
1)[Narration of Sorts]
2)*Character Thoughts*
3)"Character Dialouge"
Enjoy!
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[Inside crowded arena, Jann-Lee is fighting in the ring. Lei Fang sits a small distance from front row.]
*Jann-Lee loves to fight. Lately Jann-Lee has been entering all of the fighting circuits around the city. I've been to almost everyone of his matches. There is prize money, but it doesn't look like he's ever interested when he gets it.*
[Jann-Lee kicks opponent into wall, his battle cry echoes through the arena.]
*I've seen his style before. Why does it seem so special when I watch him do it? I can see every muscle move, each one bursting with power.*
[Jann-Lee continues to beat on his very unfortunate opponent with a series of combos.]
*He's so fast... but it doesn't even look like he's struggling to build up speed. It looks like his whole body has the freedom to whatever it wants effortlessly. He makes it look so easy.*
[Jann-Lee finishes opponent off, referee comes in and holds up Jann-Lee's hand.]
"The winner and undefeated champion is... JANN-LEE!!!"
[The crowd cheers. Jann-Lee stands tall triumphantly.]
"I AM THE WINNER!!!"
[Lei Fang looks on.]
*His eyes, I've never seen so much passion. Can I match that? I've been coming here everyday, he's never really talked to me. But at the end of every match, he looks. He looks straight at me, only me. He has that same passion in his eyes when he wins. But I can't tell if it's because of his victory or if it's because he's look at me... I can't tell... What am I doing here?*
[Jann-Lee looks at Lei Fang with his usual hard expression.]
*She's here again. She's doing it to me again. Looking... What is she trying to do?*
[After the competition, Jann-Lee heads towards the exit. Outside, Lei fang is waiting for him.]
"I've been watching you fight." Lei Fang said.
"I know... You know how to fight, right?"
"What?"
"I've seen you fight a little. That night at the back of the club."
"Oh yeah, I remember."
"What's that style?"
"Tai Kyoku Ken."
"Why do you fight?"
"Uh... From when I was young, know how to fight can come in handy sometimes... What about you?"
"... I've been doing it all my life... I guess I don't even know why anymore..."
[Conversation continues, never going off topic.]
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I have no idea on how to write battle scenes, and that's bad. I kinda avoided having to put much description on Jann-Lee fighting. Also when Lei-Fang was talking about how Jann-Lee fought, I tried my best in trying to make her sound like she knew what she was talking about (I would imagine that she would). R&R, all that disclaimer stuff, thanks for reading.
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Conventions
1)[Narration of Sorts]
2)*Character Thoughts*
3)"Character Dialouge"
Enjoy!
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[Inside crowded arena, Jann-Lee is fighting in the ring. Lei Fang sits a small distance from front row.]
*Jann-Lee loves to fight. Lately Jann-Lee has been entering all of the fighting circuits around the city. I've been to almost everyone of his matches. There is prize money, but it doesn't look like he's ever interested when he gets it.*
[Jann-Lee kicks opponent into wall, his battle cry echoes through the arena.]
*I've seen his style before. Why does it seem so special when I watch him do it? I can see every muscle move, each one bursting with power.*
[Jann-Lee continues to beat on his very unfortunate opponent with a series of combos.]
*He's so fast... but it doesn't even look like he's struggling to build up speed. It looks like his whole body has the freedom to whatever it wants effortlessly. He makes it look so easy.*
[Jann-Lee finishes opponent off, referee comes in and holds up Jann-Lee's hand.]
"The winner and undefeated champion is... JANN-LEE!!!"
[The crowd cheers. Jann-Lee stands tall triumphantly.]
"I AM THE WINNER!!!"
[Lei Fang looks on.]
*His eyes, I've never seen so much passion. Can I match that? I've been coming here everyday, he's never really talked to me. But at the end of every match, he looks. He looks straight at me, only me. He has that same passion in his eyes when he wins. But I can't tell if it's because of his victory or if it's because he's look at me... I can't tell... What am I doing here?*
[Jann-Lee looks at Lei Fang with his usual hard expression.]
*She's here again. She's doing it to me again. Looking... What is she trying to do?*
[After the competition, Jann-Lee heads towards the exit. Outside, Lei fang is waiting for him.]
"I've been watching you fight." Lei Fang said.
"I know... You know how to fight, right?"
"What?"
"I've seen you fight a little. That night at the back of the club."
"Oh yeah, I remember."
"What's that style?"
"Tai Kyoku Ken."
"Why do you fight?"
"Uh... From when I was young, know how to fight can come in handy sometimes... What about you?"
"... I've been doing it all my life... I guess I don't even know why anymore..."
[Conversation continues, never going off topic.]
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I have no idea on how to write battle scenes, and that's bad. I kinda avoided having to put much description on Jann-Lee fighting. Also when Lei-Fang was talking about how Jann-Lee fought, I tried my best in trying to make her sound like she knew what she was talking about (I would imagine that she would). R&R, all that disclaimer stuff, thanks for reading.
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