AN: Well, i can finally say i have reviews, sniff i would like to thank the people who posted them, yes, all two of you! I know it's not three but i'll continue anyway.
PS at the bottom of this is a bit of info on how and why i'm doing my stories this way.
PPS i don't own the rights to the title, as a matter of fact the story has little to do with that movie, i just think it best sums up the chapter
CHAPTER 2 -- The Shining
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One should normally be a bit less hasty when chosing to evolve, especially into a pokemon like umbreon, i wasn't to know the full effects of this until morning.
I was risen by the dawning sun, not because it caught my attention, but because of that hot itchy feeling clawing its way up my spine. I learnt quickly after that to stay in the shade. It's not easy being a nocturnal pokemon with a trainer who's not, but if it wasn't for my love for tom, i would not have had the courage to live up to my destiny.
"Come on, its only a couple of steps" tom coaxed from the front varender, I eyed the morning sun carefully, betraying my umbreon intstincts, "it couldn't be too bad, could it?" i thought. Tom had a 'show and tell', at the begining of the week each student would show the class one opf their favourite toys or pokemon, the class would be real excited to see an actual Umbreon, and besides, i wasn't like i'd be there all day. "Please..." he said, giving me the look i used to use to get scraps, "Breon.." i sighed and took my first step outside of the house in days.
The sunlight wasn't hot, it was searing. The kind of heat that gives you a headache that doesn't go away. It wasn't as bad at first, but with each step it got hotter and my feet grew heavier, just inches from tom, things started to spin...
"Eveon, whats wrong?"
Spining...
Darkness...
Heat...
Pain...
"...It's the light, isn't it? Don't worry Eveon!" he cried and thinking quickly he threw his jumper over me, and shielded the rest with his body "Eveon are you alright?", "Umb..." i mumbled weakly, "Don't worry, there's a pokemon center nearby, they'll know what to do..." he said as he started sprinting with my limp form to the nearest pokemon center.
"Nurse Joy, We've got a problem" tom said, between breaths
"It's a dark type... We don't know much about them but, was it sunlight?"
"Yes" tom gasped
"Chancey get a stretcher out here for a medium sized quadra-ped, I'd scold you for this but i bet you didn't know about this evolution of eevee's..."
"Well, a little bit," Tom conceeded, as they loaded Eveon onto the stretcher, "Don't worry it looks like it hasn't been out for more than 5 minutes" she smiled as they pushed the stretcher into the ward.
"Hang on a tick," Tom thought, "Eveon was uncovered for nearly 10"
Nurse joy was nice enough to give us a lift to the school, but i still kept a close eye on the van's windows. We got there late but not too late, "Ms Kim..." tom started to apologise, "I was just about to call your name, you're up". The class went great, almost like the home, everyone liked me and wanted a pat, i think i enjoyed the attention almost as much as tom did, afterward tom arranged for me to get picked up after lunch. Tom settled down to do what they called 'Math', i tried to look interested, but all i got was three apples and another two apples makes a lot of food.
Lunch was the time when everyone sat down to eat, except for me, as tom led me from friend to friend, always being to careful to keep in the shade, each time ending with me a peice of food richer, when a voice seem to come from nowhere "Tom philips to the canteen, Tom philips", And while the voice startled me, it didn't tom, "Eveon, wait here i'll be right back" he said as he crossed the playground to one of the buildings. I didn't know what a canteen was, or why he was going there, but i figured they wanted me too. The shade of the trees we were near, didn't stretch to the building, but i figured if i jogged i'd be able to make it before it hurt too much, besides i was almost starting to get used to it, almost.
The sun quickly slowed me down, but it wouldn't stop me, not this time. when i got the headache, i gritted my teeth, when i started getting dizzy, i closed my eyes and when the ground drew me closer, i concentrated on putting one foot in front of the other. Just when i thought i couldn't go any further, i reached the shade and slumped onto the cool cement.
Everything was black, like there was nothing, an empty plain of existance, when all of a sudden a voice echo'd through my head, like mine but different.
So, you love the boy more than you think you do
Huh? Who are are you? where is this?
You know the answers to both of those, you just don't realise it
What? What do you mean?
I am You, and this is where ever you want it to be
??? look i just want to..
If you remember only one thing from this conversation, remember that you an Immortal, use your courage and faith to fulfill Your Destiny!The last vestages of the words dieing as i was brought back to consciousness
"Eveon, how'd you get over here?"
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I'd just like to say please Review this if you got this far, a fanfiction writer lives on caffiene and praise, but with that out of the way, i'd just like to say a little something about my brand of fiction,
----If-you-don't-want-me-to-spoil-anymore-don't read on!----
More fiction is done with a human as the main character, not a pokemon, or occasionaly a human who is transformed, or has the ability to transform into a pokemon, And most stories that are from a pokemon's point of view rarely cover epic events. Enter the chronicles.
Most of my sentences are short, keeping reading speed high, yet i choose to keep the major details in, especialy in battle scenes, something which will be covered less by this chronicle and more by the previous (if you can wait till the sixth, you'll see an epic battle between the immortals and 'The Ancient').
If your into adventure you'll like the next two afterwards, The winterstar, and elemental chronicles will be sett close by, as a matter of fact, they are the first two immortals to meet, what will the showdown be like?
PS at the bottom of this is a bit of info on how and why i'm doing my stories this way.
PPS i don't own the rights to the title, as a matter of fact the story has little to do with that movie, i just think it best sums up the chapter
CHAPTER 2 -- The Shining
------------------------------
One should normally be a bit less hasty when chosing to evolve, especially into a pokemon like umbreon, i wasn't to know the full effects of this until morning.
I was risen by the dawning sun, not because it caught my attention, but because of that hot itchy feeling clawing its way up my spine. I learnt quickly after that to stay in the shade. It's not easy being a nocturnal pokemon with a trainer who's not, but if it wasn't for my love for tom, i would not have had the courage to live up to my destiny.
"Come on, its only a couple of steps" tom coaxed from the front varender, I eyed the morning sun carefully, betraying my umbreon intstincts, "it couldn't be too bad, could it?" i thought. Tom had a 'show and tell', at the begining of the week each student would show the class one opf their favourite toys or pokemon, the class would be real excited to see an actual Umbreon, and besides, i wasn't like i'd be there all day. "Please..." he said, giving me the look i used to use to get scraps, "Breon.." i sighed and took my first step outside of the house in days.
The sunlight wasn't hot, it was searing. The kind of heat that gives you a headache that doesn't go away. It wasn't as bad at first, but with each step it got hotter and my feet grew heavier, just inches from tom, things started to spin...
"Eveon, whats wrong?"
Spining...
Darkness...
Heat...
Pain...
"...It's the light, isn't it? Don't worry Eveon!" he cried and thinking quickly he threw his jumper over me, and shielded the rest with his body "Eveon are you alright?", "Umb..." i mumbled weakly, "Don't worry, there's a pokemon center nearby, they'll know what to do..." he said as he started sprinting with my limp form to the nearest pokemon center.
"Nurse Joy, We've got a problem" tom said, between breaths
"It's a dark type... We don't know much about them but, was it sunlight?"
"Yes" tom gasped
"Chancey get a stretcher out here for a medium sized quadra-ped, I'd scold you for this but i bet you didn't know about this evolution of eevee's..."
"Well, a little bit," Tom conceeded, as they loaded Eveon onto the stretcher, "Don't worry it looks like it hasn't been out for more than 5 minutes" she smiled as they pushed the stretcher into the ward.
"Hang on a tick," Tom thought, "Eveon was uncovered for nearly 10"
Nurse joy was nice enough to give us a lift to the school, but i still kept a close eye on the van's windows. We got there late but not too late, "Ms Kim..." tom started to apologise, "I was just about to call your name, you're up". The class went great, almost like the home, everyone liked me and wanted a pat, i think i enjoyed the attention almost as much as tom did, afterward tom arranged for me to get picked up after lunch. Tom settled down to do what they called 'Math', i tried to look interested, but all i got was three apples and another two apples makes a lot of food.
Lunch was the time when everyone sat down to eat, except for me, as tom led me from friend to friend, always being to careful to keep in the shade, each time ending with me a peice of food richer, when a voice seem to come from nowhere "Tom philips to the canteen, Tom philips", And while the voice startled me, it didn't tom, "Eveon, wait here i'll be right back" he said as he crossed the playground to one of the buildings. I didn't know what a canteen was, or why he was going there, but i figured they wanted me too. The shade of the trees we were near, didn't stretch to the building, but i figured if i jogged i'd be able to make it before it hurt too much, besides i was almost starting to get used to it, almost.
The sun quickly slowed me down, but it wouldn't stop me, not this time. when i got the headache, i gritted my teeth, when i started getting dizzy, i closed my eyes and when the ground drew me closer, i concentrated on putting one foot in front of the other. Just when i thought i couldn't go any further, i reached the shade and slumped onto the cool cement.
Everything was black, like there was nothing, an empty plain of existance, when all of a sudden a voice echo'd through my head, like mine but different.
So, you love the boy more than you think you do
Huh? Who are are you? where is this?
You know the answers to both of those, you just don't realise it
What? What do you mean?
I am You, and this is where ever you want it to be
??? look i just want to..
If you remember only one thing from this conversation, remember that you an Immortal, use your courage and faith to fulfill Your Destiny!The last vestages of the words dieing as i was brought back to consciousness
"Eveon, how'd you get over here?"
-------------------------------
I'd just like to say please Review this if you got this far, a fanfiction writer lives on caffiene and praise, but with that out of the way, i'd just like to say a little something about my brand of fiction,
----If-you-don't-want-me-to-spoil-anymore-don't read on!----
More fiction is done with a human as the main character, not a pokemon, or occasionaly a human who is transformed, or has the ability to transform into a pokemon, And most stories that are from a pokemon's point of view rarely cover epic events. Enter the chronicles.
Most of my sentences are short, keeping reading speed high, yet i choose to keep the major details in, especialy in battle scenes, something which will be covered less by this chronicle and more by the previous (if you can wait till the sixth, you'll see an epic battle between the immortals and 'The Ancient').
If your into adventure you'll like the next two afterwards, The winterstar, and elemental chronicles will be sett close by, as a matter of fact, they are the first two immortals to meet, what will the showdown be like?