Hey minna! Ok, this is the ABSOLUTE FIRST fanfic I ever wrote… well, except for the ones I started in my notebook :::gags::: But that's
another story! Well, anyways, this is a little something that just
came to me when I was depressed one day…very short, gomen, but I have other ones I will post. I would just like to hear your opinions about
my story so REVIEW! EMAIL ME! I want to hear what you think! I will accept flames, just try not to be too hard on me! My email is powerpuff567@Hotmail.com … please tell me all opinions! That will decide if I should post my next story
Ok, now to the legal stuff. I don't own nor did I create Sailor Moon
or any of its charries… blah blah blah, you all know the story! But,
do I ever wish I did own it… Naoko, I must say, is one of the most creative and talented people in the world!
Title: Pain
Author: Mina Starwind
Rating: PG (::grimaces:: I never thought I would write a PG story! Usually I like pg-13 or R)
Pain
Her back slammed against the wall, slumping to the ground, curling up into a ball. The heavens split, rain battered down in sheets, sticking her flowing tresses to the ground. Her frail body shook with all the pain… too much pain for her to handle, it all trying to come out at once; she just couldn't take it. The tears forced out without end as an attempt to amend the suffering and loneliness that left her soul bleeding. It all broke his heart, shattering it to the tiniest of pieces, causing him to turn away. His body was emotionally torn apart with hers. Oh, how he wanted to run to her, to grab her in his arms and shield her from any misery… to make it all better… to lay over her to keep her dry… anything. Maturity, love, and fate instead confined him to a shadowed corner as an observer. Shutting his eyes did no good, nor did clutching his ears; her desperate lonely sob echoed throughout his mind. She thrashed her arms down, pounding the ground as if drowning from the cascading droplets that rammed down upon her form. As her energy drained away, she muttered one unsolved word before the blackness void enveloped her mind and spirit.
"Why…?"
This caused him to break down. He grabbed his head, having an inner battle with the voices of reason. One side won. He knew he shouldn't ~ the heavens had forbidden him to do so. He knew he should let her be. The hell with reasoning. Silently he crept over to the lifeless form, subconsciously shivering from the cold, her face blotchy from the ever-flowing tears. Her mouth was slightly ajar, letting out shallow breaths. His ebony bangs swept across midnight blue hues shining with love and compassion. Slowly, he began to weep - she was so beautiful, inside as well as out - how could he handle seeing her so vulnerable? He removed his jacket and gingerly placed it over the girl to warm her. Oh-so carefully and gently he gathered his angel in his arms from the soaking ground. Her long pigtails limply dangled over his arm, her body subconsciously moving closer to the warmth. He smiled warmly down at her and started on his journey home, knowing he made the right decision.
Complete! Yes, short… but, can minna guess who the two people are? Oh, hard one, isn't it?
another story! Well, anyways, this is a little something that just
came to me when I was depressed one day…very short, gomen, but I have other ones I will post. I would just like to hear your opinions about
my story so REVIEW! EMAIL ME! I want to hear what you think! I will accept flames, just try not to be too hard on me! My email is powerpuff567@Hotmail.com … please tell me all opinions! That will decide if I should post my next story
Ok, now to the legal stuff. I don't own nor did I create Sailor Moon
or any of its charries… blah blah blah, you all know the story! But,
do I ever wish I did own it… Naoko, I must say, is one of the most creative and talented people in the world!
Title: Pain
Author: Mina Starwind
Rating: PG (::grimaces:: I never thought I would write a PG story! Usually I like pg-13 or R)
Pain
Her back slammed against the wall, slumping to the ground, curling up into a ball. The heavens split, rain battered down in sheets, sticking her flowing tresses to the ground. Her frail body shook with all the pain… too much pain for her to handle, it all trying to come out at once; she just couldn't take it. The tears forced out without end as an attempt to amend the suffering and loneliness that left her soul bleeding. It all broke his heart, shattering it to the tiniest of pieces, causing him to turn away. His body was emotionally torn apart with hers. Oh, how he wanted to run to her, to grab her in his arms and shield her from any misery… to make it all better… to lay over her to keep her dry… anything. Maturity, love, and fate instead confined him to a shadowed corner as an observer. Shutting his eyes did no good, nor did clutching his ears; her desperate lonely sob echoed throughout his mind. She thrashed her arms down, pounding the ground as if drowning from the cascading droplets that rammed down upon her form. As her energy drained away, she muttered one unsolved word before the blackness void enveloped her mind and spirit.
"Why…?"
This caused him to break down. He grabbed his head, having an inner battle with the voices of reason. One side won. He knew he shouldn't ~ the heavens had forbidden him to do so. He knew he should let her be. The hell with reasoning. Silently he crept over to the lifeless form, subconsciously shivering from the cold, her face blotchy from the ever-flowing tears. Her mouth was slightly ajar, letting out shallow breaths. His ebony bangs swept across midnight blue hues shining with love and compassion. Slowly, he began to weep - she was so beautiful, inside as well as out - how could he handle seeing her so vulnerable? He removed his jacket and gingerly placed it over the girl to warm her. Oh-so carefully and gently he gathered his angel in his arms from the soaking ground. Her long pigtails limply dangled over his arm, her body subconsciously moving closer to the warmth. He smiled warmly down at her and started on his journey home, knowing he made the right decision.
Complete! Yes, short… but, can minna guess who the two people are? Oh, hard one, isn't it?