Okay, I wrote this weeks before they even made a 'Broken Sky' coloum in fan fic, in fact I suggested it because I had written this story and wanted to post it, any way, after this was half through, I stopped writing this, it just sort of sat in my file until I finally deleted it. Then I wrote it again, most of these idea's are from the 1st copy, which was waaaaay better. Bare with me. I would also like to add that I didn't make any of these character's, except for Latoya and Baden. At least that's it so far.
thaladyoflorraine
P.s. PLEASE give me some suggestions on how someone with a mind half gone should think! PLEASE!
Broken Sky fic
Sisters
Part 2
A Blood Red Dagger
"What do you mean, dead? I won't take this...sir. Go kill yourself." Shouted Latoya, positivly enjoying herself. She was pretending to be her twin, and had been for the past two days. She had only ordered 12 servents to death, but she would have more visits. Her sister would return today, so she would have to leave soon. Too bad, and she was having so much fun. She didn't have enough servents to order any to death. Sigh.
She looked around the room. Empty. Goody. This was her chance to escape. "Princess Aurin! What should I do with this theif? He stole-"
"Kill him and get out of mysight, slave." She yelled, nervous.
At the same time the real Princess Aurin yelled, "Bring him here. I will kill him myself!" Latoya's heart skipped a beat. Aurin just had time to see her sister's insane smile before a flash of light blinded her temeraroly. When the light cleared her sister was gone.
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"You let her get away. Too many of my servents have died, you will have your life." Aurin said, he breathed again. "you will insted serve forty lashings, be gone." She smiled. Her sister was smarter than she thought. Not only had she pretended to be Aurin, but she had been in her room before, to steal her belongings. Discusting.
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"I had ever so much fun, Baden! You have no idea! I killed so many people!" cried Latoya, her eyes sparkiling as she reappered in the old farmhouse that served, for now, as her palace.
You know, she thought, perhaps I will keep this place, for old times sake. To remind me of when I killed my sister. She looked at the cobwebs and odd rat scurring about. Nah.
"Your highness, I have a proposition." Said Baden. His voice was quite steady for a dead man.
"Baden, you don't offer 'propositions' you tell me what I want to know and you live."
"I know how and when your sister will be where. I will tell you in exchange for you father." He repiled, his voice was steady, but when she looked into his eyes she saw fear. She drank it in, feeding on his power. She loved being a halfling, so many wonderous powers. (Okay people, a halfling is something i made, it's someone who has killed, or was born without, their spiltling. In return, they have the power to suck the enery from other, the flash of light Latoya used to transport herself was enery from a Flicker Dog.)
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"Father, would you come see me? I need your help with...certain matters." Said Latoya, yet again petending to be Aurin, Usually, she killed stragers, this time she would kill her father, or at least that's what she thought Baden would do. She would get her information, no matter who she went through.
"I will come in five days time." He repiled, his image dissapering before she was done speaking, that irked her.
"Well fine then, Mr. Prissy-pants. Show me your worst." She muttered into the empty room, well away from the mirror.
Latoya wondered for a brief moment if selling her father was wrong...no. She decided, it wasent't. Not if it ment acheving her own ends.
"Princess. Dinner is ready." Said a voice at her left.
"I'm coming. Wait for me." Repiled Latoya, knowing good and well she couldn't enter the dining hall. Aurin would be home soon.
"Yes princess." the voice left in retreading footsteps. Latoya sighed, and in a flash of light.
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"I SHOULD KILL YOU!" Aurin scremed, screeched really. It had been a long time sience she had felt feelings so...strong. She waved the dagger in her hand in front of a rather anoying slaves throught. In fact it had beeen a long time sience she had taken this dagger out as well. With it's crimson hilt, and raven blade. "YOU LET HER GET AWAY! AGAIN!" Aurin wasen't even listining to herself. She was dead inside, ever seince Ryushi...but she would forget about that, about him. He was nothing to her.
Eventually she reilized she had stopped screaming and the fool slaves were standing in the door way, awaiting her comand. "Leave." Said a voice behind her. One she reconized. Gasping, she turned. It wasen't what she thought. It wasen't Ryushi in the doorway, though the man standing there had sounded remarkably like him. It was her father.
She bowed, well, inclined her head really. "May I be of some service to you father?" She asked in the stone cold voice she always used with him...now.
"Yes. Your sister is still alive. She spoke to me, as you, in the mirror today. She wants me to come here, I want to know why." He repiled, his voice equally as frosty.
"I have no idea, father." She repiled, quite truthfully.
"I will meet her in five days time, be on the other side of Kirin Taq." He left.
Aurin walked back to her rooms, her eyes clouded with fury. How dare he? How dare he demand HER to go elsewhere, while her sister, her most hated enemy, and she had many, was in her rooms? Aurin would not listin to her father. She would kill him first.
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"BADEN!" Latoya screamed into the seeminly empty shack. "WHERE'S MY DRESS!" Where was he?
"It would do you well, 'Princess', to remember that it is not your dress. It belongs to Aurin." Said Baden in the door way. She watched his eyes travel over her scarsly dressed body, her own eyes resting on the dress in his hands
"It would do YOU well Baden, to remember that I am still a women, no matter what kind of conditions I live in. Or where I stand in my family's eyes." Snapped Latoya, grapping the dress, and motioning for him to get out. He didn't move. "DO YOU WANT TO HAVE MY FATHER?????? LEAVE!!!!!!!!!"
Baden stared at her for moment longer, but at meeting her half-crazed eyes...he left. Latoya finished dressing on her own.
"Well, 'daddy,'" she said, staring at the black dagger with a blood red hilt in her hands, "here I come." She slipped the dagger into the sheth on her ankle.
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More to Come
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thaladyoflorraine
P.s. PLEASE give me some suggestions on how someone with a mind half gone should think! PLEASE!
Broken Sky fic
Sisters
Part 2
A Blood Red Dagger
"What do you mean, dead? I won't take this...sir. Go kill yourself." Shouted Latoya, positivly enjoying herself. She was pretending to be her twin, and had been for the past two days. She had only ordered 12 servents to death, but she would have more visits. Her sister would return today, so she would have to leave soon. Too bad, and she was having so much fun. She didn't have enough servents to order any to death. Sigh.
She looked around the room. Empty. Goody. This was her chance to escape. "Princess Aurin! What should I do with this theif? He stole-"
"Kill him and get out of mysight, slave." She yelled, nervous.
At the same time the real Princess Aurin yelled, "Bring him here. I will kill him myself!" Latoya's heart skipped a beat. Aurin just had time to see her sister's insane smile before a flash of light blinded her temeraroly. When the light cleared her sister was gone.
~ ` ~ ` ~ `
"You let her get away. Too many of my servents have died, you will have your life." Aurin said, he breathed again. "you will insted serve forty lashings, be gone." She smiled. Her sister was smarter than she thought. Not only had she pretended to be Aurin, but she had been in her room before, to steal her belongings. Discusting.
~ ` ~ ` ~ `
"I had ever so much fun, Baden! You have no idea! I killed so many people!" cried Latoya, her eyes sparkiling as she reappered in the old farmhouse that served, for now, as her palace.
You know, she thought, perhaps I will keep this place, for old times sake. To remind me of when I killed my sister. She looked at the cobwebs and odd rat scurring about. Nah.
"Your highness, I have a proposition." Said Baden. His voice was quite steady for a dead man.
"Baden, you don't offer 'propositions' you tell me what I want to know and you live."
"I know how and when your sister will be where. I will tell you in exchange for you father." He repiled, his voice was steady, but when she looked into his eyes she saw fear. She drank it in, feeding on his power. She loved being a halfling, so many wonderous powers. (Okay people, a halfling is something i made, it's someone who has killed, or was born without, their spiltling. In return, they have the power to suck the enery from other, the flash of light Latoya used to transport herself was enery from a Flicker Dog.)
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"Father, would you come see me? I need your help with...certain matters." Said Latoya, yet again petending to be Aurin, Usually, she killed stragers, this time she would kill her father, or at least that's what she thought Baden would do. She would get her information, no matter who she went through.
"I will come in five days time." He repiled, his image dissapering before she was done speaking, that irked her.
"Well fine then, Mr. Prissy-pants. Show me your worst." She muttered into the empty room, well away from the mirror.
Latoya wondered for a brief moment if selling her father was wrong...no. She decided, it wasent't. Not if it ment acheving her own ends.
"Princess. Dinner is ready." Said a voice at her left.
"I'm coming. Wait for me." Repiled Latoya, knowing good and well she couldn't enter the dining hall. Aurin would be home soon.
"Yes princess." the voice left in retreading footsteps. Latoya sighed, and in a flash of light.
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"I SHOULD KILL YOU!" Aurin scremed, screeched really. It had been a long time sience she had felt feelings so...strong. She waved the dagger in her hand in front of a rather anoying slaves throught. In fact it had beeen a long time sience she had taken this dagger out as well. With it's crimson hilt, and raven blade. "YOU LET HER GET AWAY! AGAIN!" Aurin wasen't even listining to herself. She was dead inside, ever seince Ryushi...but she would forget about that, about him. He was nothing to her.
Eventually she reilized she had stopped screaming and the fool slaves were standing in the door way, awaiting her comand. "Leave." Said a voice behind her. One she reconized. Gasping, she turned. It wasen't what she thought. It wasen't Ryushi in the doorway, though the man standing there had sounded remarkably like him. It was her father.
She bowed, well, inclined her head really. "May I be of some service to you father?" She asked in the stone cold voice she always used with him...now.
"Yes. Your sister is still alive. She spoke to me, as you, in the mirror today. She wants me to come here, I want to know why." He repiled, his voice equally as frosty.
"I have no idea, father." She repiled, quite truthfully.
"I will meet her in five days time, be on the other side of Kirin Taq." He left.
Aurin walked back to her rooms, her eyes clouded with fury. How dare he? How dare he demand HER to go elsewhere, while her sister, her most hated enemy, and she had many, was in her rooms? Aurin would not listin to her father. She would kill him first.
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"BADEN!" Latoya screamed into the seeminly empty shack. "WHERE'S MY DRESS!" Where was he?
"It would do you well, 'Princess', to remember that it is not your dress. It belongs to Aurin." Said Baden in the door way. She watched his eyes travel over her scarsly dressed body, her own eyes resting on the dress in his hands
"It would do YOU well Baden, to remember that I am still a women, no matter what kind of conditions I live in. Or where I stand in my family's eyes." Snapped Latoya, grapping the dress, and motioning for him to get out. He didn't move. "DO YOU WANT TO HAVE MY FATHER?????? LEAVE!!!!!!!!!"
Baden stared at her for moment longer, but at meeting her half-crazed eyes...he left. Latoya finished dressing on her own.
"Well, 'daddy,'" she said, staring at the black dagger with a blood red hilt in her hands, "here I come." She slipped the dagger into the sheth on her ankle.
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More to Come
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