Okay, I stink at poems but I hope I did a good job of this. This is my first attempt at this sort of thing so please tell me what you thought.
I Love You
Everyday I wake up and see your face
You are my angel and my heart beats at a certain pace
Although I didn't realize it at first
When you told me everyone used to call you cursed
How I felt for you
Now that I know
I wish I didn't have to go
But you know I need to go back
And run on that track
I just wish I could go back
And be able to tell you
That I love you
-Hitomi's poem to Van
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Why did my angel go?
She didn't even know
How I felt about her
She left without knowing
And even now my love for her keeps growing
Why did I let her go?
She was my ray of sunshine in the morning
And my star in the evening
If only I had had enough courage to tell her
That I love her
-Van's poem to Hitomi
So? Did you like it? Please review and tell me. I would really like to know. And how come no one reviewed the revised version of "Sadness and Reflections"? Well, please review this.
