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chapter 3 the enemy attacks

Serena washed her face and did her best to hide the fact that she had been crying, but it was still really obvious. She got dressed and put her hair up and went to the arcade to meet her friends.
"Hi, Serena!" Mina ran up to meet her friend. "Where's Rini?" Mina looked around. "I didn't think she would want to come." Serena laughed nervously. We were going to go to Raye's temple as soon as you got here. We didn't expect you for another half an hour." Mina smiled. "Come on, let's go." Mina motioned for Serena to follow her.
Everyone went inot Rayes room and made sure the door was shut tight. "Does anyone know anything about our new enemy?" Raye asked, looking desperate.
"I uh..........." Serena stuttered. But she couldn't fight it. Not with it having so much power over her. Darien, maybe, but it still looked doubtful. She had to try..... Speaking as fast as she could serena said. "It's a probe, me Andrew and Darien. You have to help us....." Serena winced. Those words had used just about all of her strength. Then Serena fell to the floor. All though it had happened lots of times before in fights, it still came as a shock. "Serena!" Everyone gasped.
"How do we get rid of it?!?" Mina cried. Serena was now fighting for breath, all most hyperventilating. "Serena, just relax. You have to let the probe take over again. If you don't, you could die." Raye kneeled on the ground next the Serena and rested her hand on her shoulder. "It..... Can't..... Win....." Serena said in between gasps. "We won't let it, but if you keep this up it might." Lita said, worried.
"I have to see something........ MERCURY CRYSTAL........ POWER!!!" Amy shouted. On transformed, Sailor Mercury put down her goggles and looked at Serena. "Every second the probe is growing larger! Serena, you have to relax!" Amy looked worried. "But, how is that possible?!" Artemis cried. "It's feeding off Serena's energy and turning it black!" Amy detransformed.
Serena tried to relax, but she was so afraid something bad would happen. Raye could almost instantly sense the evil was back. "Now that you know my secret, I just might have to kill you..." Serena hissed. Serena lunged at Raye and tried to strangle her. Diana almost cried out with fear. Luna lifted her paw and covered Diana's eyes.
Lita ran up to Serena and tried to pull her off Raye. "You don't really want to do this." But Serena was surprisingly strong, and wouldn't let go. Lita managedto pull Serena off long enough for Raye to catch her breath.
Amy took out her pocket computer and started typing something. Serena fell to the ground and a lot of dark energy came out of her and started flying away. "Amy, what did you do!?" Mina cried. "It's simple, really. I typed in the code we found out yesterday and found the code to make Serena's probe go away. Now, I'm doing the same for Andrew and Darien." Amy said while typing on her computer.
"Does that mean it's dead?" Lita asked. "Acutely, no. If my hypothesis is correct, then the probes energy will go back to the keeper and in order to win we will have to defeat it." Amy sighed. "If it has more dark energy than the three probes put together I don't how we can win." Serena started to open her eyes. "Wh-what happened?- Oh my gosh- Raye, are you ok?!"Serena bolted upright. Raye nodded slightly. "It's ok. It wasn't your fault." Raye said in a raspy whisper.
"I am so sorry, I was really rude to all of you." Serena said sadly. "It's ok Serena, but we have more important things to worry about now. We have to find the sorce of the probes and defeat it so it doesn't defeat us. We need all the scouts help, even the outers." Luna said, starting to get mad.
"Let's transform!" Serena stood up and took out her compact. "Moon eternal- make up!" But nothing happened. Serena, already exhausted, fell to the ground. "I don't get it....." Serena looked at her compact. "The silver crystal! It's gone!" Serena almost started to cry. "Without the silver crystal-"
"Don't worry- we'll get it back!..... Mars crystal power, make up!" Raye transformed into Sailor Mars. "Right!- Venus crystal power, make up!" Mina transformed into Sailor Venus. "Jupiter crystal power, make up!" Lita tranfored into Sailor Jupiter. "Mercury crystal power, make up!" Amy transformed into Sailor Mercury.
"But- What about me!?" Serena whined. "Your coming with us!" Raye grabbed Serena's arm and pulled her along. It was already dark out, and the moon was in the sky. "Ahhhhhh..... The Sailor Senshi. I knew you'd come." A voice called as they entered the park.
"Looking for this?" It was the lady Rini had seen before, only now her clothes were changed to a long white dress with a slit up to her knee. In one hand she help up the silver crystal and in the other was Rini. "Rini, no! Let her go!" Serena shouted. "What are you going to do to me if I don't!? You can't transform any more Sailor Moon!" The evil lady laughed.
"What's the point in having the silver crystal if you can't use it?!" Sailor Mars said in mad tone. "That's where she comes in." A ring of dark energy formed around Serena, that sent out shock waves. Serena screamed in pain. "Tell me how to ue the silver crystal- or the girl dies!" The evil lady snickered.
"No! You can't use it!" Serena said as loud as she could. The evil women laughed. Dark energy was sent to Rini, causing Rini to cried barley able to get out the words. "Mama- Help!" "Me and Rini are the only ones still alive who can use the silver crystal! You'll never be able to use it even it you knew how!"
Serena fell to her knees. "Just let Rini go.." Serena said, barely loud enough to be heard. "Not a chance! Why let her go when I can watch both of you die!" Serena was hardly conscious now.
"We've got to do something! Venus.......... Love and beauty... SHOCK!" Sailor Venus shouted. She sent her attack towards the ring that held Serena captive but nothing happened. They needed a stronger attack.
The evil lady laughed. "One more attack and both girls die!" She held the silver crystal high above her head and prepared to smash it on the ground. Then a rose came flying through the air, nocking the silver crystal from her grasp. It flew through the air and was caught by Sailor Venus.
"Tuxedo Mask!" Everyone but Serena and Rini yelled. Rini was almost unconscious, but Serena already was. The lady turned around and saw Tuxedo Mask standing on a lamp post. She hit him with dark energy, but before it could hit him he jumped from the post onto the ground.
Strating to get really mad, the evil lady blasted Tuxedo mask with her strongest attack, nearly killing him, and knocking him on the ground. "True Love shall never win!" The lady laughed, and launched dark energy at all of the scouts, knocking them on the ground.
"I don't know what book your reading, but true love always wins." Mina tried to get up, but did not have enough strength left. "If you think that the power of love is weaker than evil, than you're got another thing coming!" Sailor Jupiter strained herself to stand up. "Jupiter... Oak...... EVOLUTION!!!" Sailor Jupiter sent a spiral of leaves towards the ring around Serena, and to her surprise broke the barrier!
"Serena!" Tuxedo Mask got up from the ground, his mask and hat falling off. He ran over to where Serena was and kneeled next to her. The evil lady gasped. "Your alive still?!?!?! You ruinded my plans! Now you shall die!" She sent a huge ball of dark energy at Darien, knocking him away from Serena.
Serena, dazed, opend her eyes. Altough her strengh was nearly gone, she seemed to find enough to stand up and run to Darien, when she saw him on the ground, hurt badly. "NO!" Serena screamed and started to cry.
"This is all my fault. I should have gotten the silver crystal back and transformed. I should have looked after Rini better. Now Dariens hurt and Rini's....." Serena started to cry harder, when she felt a hand on her shoulder. "It's not your fault." She turned around to see Darien. He was hurt worse than she thought, but at first it didn't matter.
The couple hugged, happy to see the other was alive. "Oh Darien. I'm so sorry for not being the kind of leader everyone wants me to be." Serena started to cry again. "If I was a better leader than you would have never gotten hurt and none of this would have ever happened. I'm so scared. Leaders aren't supposed to get scared."
"Serena, your a great leader. Even the bravest people get scared, it just matters how you handle the situation." Darien smiled. And you could never have prevented this from happening. It would have anyway, nomatter what you did." Serena stopped crying. "Rini!" Serena ran up to Mina and got the silver crystal from her, and replace it in her compact.
"Moon eternal.... Make up!" Serena transformed into Eternal Sailor Moon.

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Another question for my readers: Should Luna and Artemis take more part in the story? I know they haven't really been in it that much. Also, should I have the outers fight with the inners against the battle? Like I said, if you have any further comments, you can e-mail me (see top of page). See ya later!