ok, it's me again. i decided that i might as well post the crapped up thing that is what i handed in. i didn't think it was very good. it was much too sweet and soppy for my liking. anywayz, then i showed it to my friends and they liked it, so i thought, hey, maybe it wasn't so bad. then i got it back from the teacher and got 19/20. then i was really happy, then i saw that i got a review finally for my little story so then i decided to post this. i was happy with my 19/20 because the only real reason why i got marked down was because i didn't include addresses. we never got told that we had to bother, but apparently we do. stuff that. we've finished romeo and juliet for good now. (okay, not really, there's still that strange essay we have to do on themes and stuff.) all my exams except history are over, so all i really need to worry about is my assignments. i hate assignments, especially history ones. urgh. and i know i failed my commerce exam today... i suppose i should stop blabbering and let you get on with reading the story. i dunno, i just thought you might want to hear my miscellaneous ramblings, how mistaken was i? i'm still blabbering, though.
so, i guess you want to read the thing, now... go on.
My dearest flower, Rosaline,
Many a time have I written thee before, but ne'er a single word in reply. I have waited, watched, and wondered what may have befell my darling.
My angel sweet, how I long to hold you dear in my arms and caress your flaxen hair forever. How I wish that you would but speak three words. If you did, my life would be complete.
I sit and stare as I write looking out onto the grove of sycamores which reminds me so of you, my love. The birds sing, but I cannot hear them, the trees are coloured, but I cannot see them. I cannot, my dove, until you requite my feelings. To live without your love, without your smile, without your face is the ultimate hell. I will live forever here in the darkness, waiting. The light is approaching, dawn is come, and I must away, to my chamber.
But, I will run after you, chase you, like a hungry fox, my love, until you see the way I seek. Is there another? Is that the cause? Tell me dear heart that it is not so. That there is no other man; there is no other way. You must I am sure, being as lovely as you are, be suffering from the affections of another. Tell me that you do not requite his feelings. You, I know, are the brightest, largest, most glowing star in the universe, and like all stars are only seen at night. The night is incomplete without your beauty. And when day comes, I must away, to my chamber where there is night, where your splendor will forever reign.
Your darling,
Romeo
***how'd you like it? feel free to take it if you're really desperate for a love letter. why would anyone be that desperate? anyways, have fun. i think i'll post strange school stories another time, and there's still the little dole bludgers' song... happy reading. hope you don't think i'm too insane. review if you want, it makes me feel special.
so, i guess you want to read the thing, now... go on.
My dearest flower, Rosaline,
Many a time have I written thee before, but ne'er a single word in reply. I have waited, watched, and wondered what may have befell my darling.
My angel sweet, how I long to hold you dear in my arms and caress your flaxen hair forever. How I wish that you would but speak three words. If you did, my life would be complete.
I sit and stare as I write looking out onto the grove of sycamores which reminds me so of you, my love. The birds sing, but I cannot hear them, the trees are coloured, but I cannot see them. I cannot, my dove, until you requite my feelings. To live without your love, without your smile, without your face is the ultimate hell. I will live forever here in the darkness, waiting. The light is approaching, dawn is come, and I must away, to my chamber.
But, I will run after you, chase you, like a hungry fox, my love, until you see the way I seek. Is there another? Is that the cause? Tell me dear heart that it is not so. That there is no other man; there is no other way. You must I am sure, being as lovely as you are, be suffering from the affections of another. Tell me that you do not requite his feelings. You, I know, are the brightest, largest, most glowing star in the universe, and like all stars are only seen at night. The night is incomplete without your beauty. And when day comes, I must away, to my chamber where there is night, where your splendor will forever reign.
Your darling,
Romeo
***how'd you like it? feel free to take it if you're really desperate for a love letter. why would anyone be that desperate? anyways, have fun. i think i'll post strange school stories another time, and there's still the little dole bludgers' song... happy reading. hope you don't think i'm too insane. review if you want, it makes me feel special.
