Note:i dont own anything in this execpt maybe the charecters i make...thats
if i make any.OH also when you see this(...) its addintol info that really
woulsnt make sense if i put it in normally
Introduction
Zim was busy fiddling with his lazer weasel experiment,testing if they were ripe,suddenly the alarms sounded."probley dib agian"Zim sighed.He walked out and grabbed a litle lazer like gun.Dib fell from his ceiling and into the lab they fell,Dib had some sort of thing in his hands,it was a small lazer of his own,it was metallic and shiny with a glowing part at the energy chamber (its the rail gun)"Oooohh...what is it?"Zim asked,"Its a.....ummm....well its a very powerful weapon i found when a dimesnol portal appeared it spit it out along with some bloody......stuff"Dib replied.Dib shot it and it bounced off the metal into gir(which reactivated him),the voot cruiser and on the time replacer machine(from the rubber piggy episode)and turned that on and malfunctioned it.Zim ran over to it to see what was on it,it was somthing he had never see before,Dib ran over too as he thought he saw the lazer he had in his hand.they both were in awe as Zim saw alien cretures of the likes he had never seen before,Dib was amazed of the technogly they had...regenration machines,plasma energy...it was incredible that is until one of the many things in it died and blood and parts came spewing out of the portal."ewww....gross" Dib thought out loud meanwhile Zim snapped out of his hypnotism and snuck up behind dib to push him in,Dib sensed this and turned around to grab him as Zim pushed him,they both fell in there,Gir seeing his master go through followed.Meanwhile at Dib's house it was getting late,Proffeser Membraine told Gaz to get her borther,just knowing he was at Zim's she went started to walk over to Zim's house.....
Whatcha guys think?good storie?good idea?Flames are accepted although i wont write another chapter until i get at LEAST 5 good reviews
Introduction
Zim was busy fiddling with his lazer weasel experiment,testing if they were ripe,suddenly the alarms sounded."probley dib agian"Zim sighed.He walked out and grabbed a litle lazer like gun.Dib fell from his ceiling and into the lab they fell,Dib had some sort of thing in his hands,it was a small lazer of his own,it was metallic and shiny with a glowing part at the energy chamber (its the rail gun)"Oooohh...what is it?"Zim asked,"Its a.....ummm....well its a very powerful weapon i found when a dimesnol portal appeared it spit it out along with some bloody......stuff"Dib replied.Dib shot it and it bounced off the metal into gir(which reactivated him),the voot cruiser and on the time replacer machine(from the rubber piggy episode)and turned that on and malfunctioned it.Zim ran over to it to see what was on it,it was somthing he had never see before,Dib ran over too as he thought he saw the lazer he had in his hand.they both were in awe as Zim saw alien cretures of the likes he had never seen before,Dib was amazed of the technogly they had...regenration machines,plasma energy...it was incredible that is until one of the many things in it died and blood and parts came spewing out of the portal."ewww....gross" Dib thought out loud meanwhile Zim snapped out of his hypnotism and snuck up behind dib to push him in,Dib sensed this and turned around to grab him as Zim pushed him,they both fell in there,Gir seeing his master go through followed.Meanwhile at Dib's house it was getting late,Proffeser Membraine told Gaz to get her borther,just knowing he was at Zim's she went started to walk over to Zim's house.....
Whatcha guys think?good storie?good idea?Flames are accepted although i wont write another chapter until i get at LEAST 5 good reviews
