Hmm. . . It seems a like it still need something. . . Oh well, when I think of it I'll post it.
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Thanks also to Kat, the Almighty Mad Platypus, for being so nice sweet about everything. (And yes, I am a girl:)
Like I said, the ending seems incomplete to me. Please review and tell me what you think.
I knew you before you were
I brought you into being
I fashioned you within your mothers womb
Before you ever drew a breath, I loved you
I gave you free will
I hoped that you would come to love me as I love you
I would not force you to love me
Forced love is not love at all
Everything I could do to bring you to me I did
I, Alpha and Omega, became helpless and walked among you as a creature
I allowed myself to be whipped and tortured in the worst way possible
I died in unspeakable torment
You are my Child
The air is fresher
The earth greener
And the sun is brighter since you have come
You are my delight
You are my joy
Though I am All-Powerful
Mighty and Awesome
I need you
Like a fool, drunk with love, I follow you always
Hopelessly in love with my creation
To bring you true joy is my one desire
To see you smile and laugh is my delight
But when you are truly happy
(Only when you are close to me)
Then I am in ecstasy
You are not a pawn in some game
You are not my plaything
You are not a dumb brute that I twist and deceive
You are my child
You are my own
