(Who ever wrote that first review thanks, I've never posted any of my fanfics just read them myself (boring) and I guess I just got in the habit of leaving the caps on and didn't really think. I've allready finished the next two chapters and don't really want to go back retype it all so I'll start toning it down in chapter four, Me the Author gives her sincere appologys, I'm sorry, I'm really, really, sorry, please forgive me?.
Thanks, Marguerite)
(And whoever you are and others keep up the good advice, and stories:)
*LATER THAT SAME NIGHT*
MARGUERITE STIRRED SLIGHTLY OPENED HER EYES AND SIGHED LETTING HER HANDS FLOP
RESIGNEDLY ONTO HER STOMACH. VERONICA WHO HAD BEEN PEACEFULY SLEEPING ON HER
STOMACH , SUDDENLY BOLTED UPRIGHT (NOT AN EASY FEET WHEN YOUR SLEEPING ON YOUR
STOMACH), "ARE YOU OK," SHE SAID IN SAME BREATH. MARGUERITE TRIED TO KEEP HER
SMILE FROM SHOWING, "I'M FINE," WAS ALL MARGUERITE COULD GET BEFORE SHE STARTED TO
GIGGLE WHICH TURNED INTO FULL FLEDGED LAUGHTER IN A MATTER OF SECONDS. "WHAT!"
VERONICA EXCLAIMED NOT UNDERSTANDING WHAT WAS SO FUNNY. IN BETWEEN DEEP
BREATHS AND GIGGLES MARGUERITE MANAGED TO GASP OUT, "YOUR AS BAD AS JOHN IF NOT
WORSE," AND THAT WAS ALL SHE SAID BEFORE DISSOLVING INTO LAUGHTER AGAIN. VERONICA
SHOOK HER HEAD MUMBLED SOMETHING ABOUT CHALLENGER BEING RIGHT AND FLOPPED
BACK DOWN. MARGUERITE TOOK A DEEP BREATH TRYING TO CALM DOWN, THE EXCITEMENT
WAS GETTING THE BABY STIRRED UP AND THE LAST THING MARGUERITE NEEDED WAS A NIGHT OF
SWIFT KICKS IN THE GUT, FINALLY CALMED SHE SAID, "WHAT WAS CHALLENGER WAS RIGHT ABOUT,".
"HMMMMM," VERMONICA MUMBLED ALLREADY HALF ASLEEP, BEFORE BOLTING UPRIGHT
AGAIN REPEATING HER PREVIOUS QUESTION. MARGUERITE MANAGED TO CONFINE HER
AMUSMENT TO A FEW GIGGLES THIS TIME, AND SAID, "YOU SAID SOMETHING ABOUT
CHALLENGER BEING RIGHT WHAT, WAS IT?," MARGUERITE SAID NOT BOTHERING TO ANSWER
VERONICA'S QUESTION. "OH AHH YOU DON'T WANT KNOW," VERONICA SAID WITH A QUICK
NOSE SHRUG AT THE END. MARGUERITE PROPPED HERSELF UP ON A ELBOW, "OH NO YOU
DON'T WHAT'D HE SAY," AT VERONICA'S TIGHT LIPPED MOUTH AND SHAKE OF HER HEAD
MARGUERITE SAID, " OH COME ON PLEASE WHAT HE SAY," SHE FINISHED WITH A POUT FACE.
VERONICA SIGHED SHE JUST COULDN'T REFUSE HER, "HE SAID PREGNANCY MESSES WITH THE
HORMONS MAKES YA EASILY EXCITABLE, LIKE FOR INSTANCE EASY TO LAUGH," VERONICA
FINISHED GRINNING. MARGUERITE SUDDENLY GASPED AND GRABBED VERONICA'S HAND
DRAWING IT TO HER SWOLLEN STOMACH. VERONICA'S MOUTH OPENED IN AN 'O' HER EYES
WIDENED, "IS THAT..." SHE SAID. MARGUERITE SIMPLY SMILED AND NODDED. "WOW, THAT'S
INCREDABLE," VERONICA SAID IN AN AIRY VOICE. MARGUERITE LAUGHED AND SAID, "YOU
SHOULD TRY IT FROM THIS SIDE,". SUDDENLY THEY HEARD A TWIG SNAP BREAKING THE
SISTERLY MOMENT BETWEEN FRIENDS. VERONICA JUMPED UP GRABING HER KNIFE AND QUICKLY
HOPPED OUT OF THE TENT SAYING, "STAY HERE,".
VERONICA SLINKED AROUND THIER CAMP SEARCHING FOR A RAPTOR, CANNIABLE,
HEADHUNTER, OR JUST PLAIN RUN RUN OF MILL SAVAGE. AND SUDDENLY SHE FOUND THE CULPRIT
OF THE BROKEN BRANCH, HER EYES WIDENED IN TERROR AT THE SIGHT BEFORE HER.
(R&R, SHOULD I CONTINUE?)
Thanks, Marguerite)
(And whoever you are and others keep up the good advice, and stories:)
*LATER THAT SAME NIGHT*
MARGUERITE STIRRED SLIGHTLY OPENED HER EYES AND SIGHED LETTING HER HANDS FLOP
RESIGNEDLY ONTO HER STOMACH. VERONICA WHO HAD BEEN PEACEFULY SLEEPING ON HER
STOMACH , SUDDENLY BOLTED UPRIGHT (NOT AN EASY FEET WHEN YOUR SLEEPING ON YOUR
STOMACH), "ARE YOU OK," SHE SAID IN SAME BREATH. MARGUERITE TRIED TO KEEP HER
SMILE FROM SHOWING, "I'M FINE," WAS ALL MARGUERITE COULD GET BEFORE SHE STARTED TO
GIGGLE WHICH TURNED INTO FULL FLEDGED LAUGHTER IN A MATTER OF SECONDS. "WHAT!"
VERONICA EXCLAIMED NOT UNDERSTANDING WHAT WAS SO FUNNY. IN BETWEEN DEEP
BREATHS AND GIGGLES MARGUERITE MANAGED TO GASP OUT, "YOUR AS BAD AS JOHN IF NOT
WORSE," AND THAT WAS ALL SHE SAID BEFORE DISSOLVING INTO LAUGHTER AGAIN. VERONICA
SHOOK HER HEAD MUMBLED SOMETHING ABOUT CHALLENGER BEING RIGHT AND FLOPPED
BACK DOWN. MARGUERITE TOOK A DEEP BREATH TRYING TO CALM DOWN, THE EXCITEMENT
WAS GETTING THE BABY STIRRED UP AND THE LAST THING MARGUERITE NEEDED WAS A NIGHT OF
SWIFT KICKS IN THE GUT, FINALLY CALMED SHE SAID, "WHAT WAS CHALLENGER WAS RIGHT ABOUT,".
"HMMMMM," VERMONICA MUMBLED ALLREADY HALF ASLEEP, BEFORE BOLTING UPRIGHT
AGAIN REPEATING HER PREVIOUS QUESTION. MARGUERITE MANAGED TO CONFINE HER
AMUSMENT TO A FEW GIGGLES THIS TIME, AND SAID, "YOU SAID SOMETHING ABOUT
CHALLENGER BEING RIGHT WHAT, WAS IT?," MARGUERITE SAID NOT BOTHERING TO ANSWER
VERONICA'S QUESTION. "OH AHH YOU DON'T WANT KNOW," VERONICA SAID WITH A QUICK
NOSE SHRUG AT THE END. MARGUERITE PROPPED HERSELF UP ON A ELBOW, "OH NO YOU
DON'T WHAT'D HE SAY," AT VERONICA'S TIGHT LIPPED MOUTH AND SHAKE OF HER HEAD
MARGUERITE SAID, " OH COME ON PLEASE WHAT HE SAY," SHE FINISHED WITH A POUT FACE.
VERONICA SIGHED SHE JUST COULDN'T REFUSE HER, "HE SAID PREGNANCY MESSES WITH THE
HORMONS MAKES YA EASILY EXCITABLE, LIKE FOR INSTANCE EASY TO LAUGH," VERONICA
FINISHED GRINNING. MARGUERITE SUDDENLY GASPED AND GRABBED VERONICA'S HAND
DRAWING IT TO HER SWOLLEN STOMACH. VERONICA'S MOUTH OPENED IN AN 'O' HER EYES
WIDENED, "IS THAT..." SHE SAID. MARGUERITE SIMPLY SMILED AND NODDED. "WOW, THAT'S
INCREDABLE," VERONICA SAID IN AN AIRY VOICE. MARGUERITE LAUGHED AND SAID, "YOU
SHOULD TRY IT FROM THIS SIDE,". SUDDENLY THEY HEARD A TWIG SNAP BREAKING THE
SISTERLY MOMENT BETWEEN FRIENDS. VERONICA JUMPED UP GRABING HER KNIFE AND QUICKLY
HOPPED OUT OF THE TENT SAYING, "STAY HERE,".
VERONICA SLINKED AROUND THIER CAMP SEARCHING FOR A RAPTOR, CANNIABLE,
HEADHUNTER, OR JUST PLAIN RUN RUN OF MILL SAVAGE. AND SUDDENLY SHE FOUND THE CULPRIT
OF THE BROKEN BRANCH, HER EYES WIDENED IN TERROR AT THE SIGHT BEFORE HER.
(R&R, SHOULD I CONTINUE?)
