The room smelled weird

Disclaimer: I own nothing IaHb related. 

This is called a Fifty-Five Fiction story.   I read about it in a book and thought it sounded pretty cool.  Basically, it is a little story that is written in 55 words or less (In this case, I think it's exactly 55 words).  What the writer tries to do is cram a whole huge story into only a few words.  This technique of writing is not something I made up.  I just thought I'd try it out.  This is my first try.  What do you think? I encourage anyone and everyone to try it.  Please review.  No flames please.

Thanks to Strawberry Angel and K2 for telling me to upload this.

The room smelled weird.

"Ahhhh!"

"Look what you did," she said.

"I know," he replied.

"You are awful," she said.

"No, I am not."

"I hate you," she said.

"No, you don't."

…breathe….once more……push…...

"Ahhhhh!"

"It's a girl!"

"I love you," Caitie said.

"I know," replied Jamie, holding his new daughter, Gracie Rose.

Okay, so there was my first try at a Fifty-Five Fiction story.  I know it is very short, but that is the point.  What did you guys think of it?  Please review.