Disclaimer: I own
nothing IaHb related.
This is called a
Fifty-Five Fiction story. I read about
it in a book and thought it sounded pretty cool. Basically, it is a little story that is written in 55 words or
less (In this case, I think it's exactly 55 words). What the writer tries to do is cram a whole huge story into only
a few words. This technique of writing
is not something I made up. I just
thought I'd try it out. This is my
first try. What do you think? I
encourage anyone and everyone to try it.
Please review. No flames please.
Thanks to
Strawberry Angel and K2 for telling me to upload this.
The room smelled
weird.
"Ahhhh!"
"Look what you
did," she said.
"I know," he
replied.
"You are awful,"
she said.
"No, I am not."
"I hate you," she
said.
"No, you don't."
…breathe….once
more……push…...
"Ahhhhh!"
"It's a girl!"
"I love you,"
Caitie said.
"I know," replied
Jamie, holding his new daughter, Gracie Rose.
Okay, so there
was my first try at a Fifty-Five Fiction story. I know it is very short, but that is the point. What did you guys think of it? Please review.