THANK YOU:
This is my little thank you to all those who reviewed my last chap
Destiny's Angel - Thanx, glad you like it! And see? I did write more!
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how rite your,paragraphs really ARE our friends ;)! And also I thanx for telling me
how to spell Lily I didn't know (no I Am not being sarcastic) but I like spelling it
my way...sorry! (no offence or anything)
"§" Channy Hoppy "§" - Sorry it was hard to read but I think me and my incredible lack of skill
with comps have worked out how to get it to upload rite without getting
rid of all the line spacing. ** Crosses fingers** also as far as I can tell I
have fixed any spellings and grammar etc but please tell me if I have
missed anything. And WOW thanx 4 putting me on your favorites, I will
read your fic too, ecstatic u like it (hey that was almost a rime) enjoy the
next chap
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Ch 2: Conversations, Confessions and Collisions
A kindly looking man woke Lily when they reached Kings Cross station, she thanked him and he
helped her off the train with her trunk, she thanked him again and they parted ways.
The excitement coursing through Lily was making her light headed but she was a little apprehensive
too, only now was the possibility occurring to her that the owl letter may have just been a cruel
joke, cursing her self for not thinking of it before Lily resolved to find out one way or another
being as she was here now any way.
Following the directions on her Hogworts letter Lilly easily found 'the leaky cauldron' and barely
had time to wonder why she had never noticed a small, rather dilapidated, public house next to the
record store on any of her other shopping trips to London before she stepped into the confusing
medley of noise and people (at least what Lily assumed to be people but with some of them she
wasn't so sure.) She was still staring around dazedly clutching her heavy trunk with a white
knuckled hand when a large almost toothless, but friendly, looking man wearing a stained apron
appeared before her - glancing at her trunk he said
"So its Hogworts then miss?" Lily could only nod. It was just then that a jaw-cracking yawn swept
over her and forced her to find her voice; covering her mouth politely she waited till the wave of
tiredness passed then said
"Um please sir, might I have a room for tonight in fact until Monday?" she enquired timidly
"Call me Tom," stated her host with finality and again Lily simply nodded.
"Have you no sense Tom?" demanded a stern voice "cant you see the child's hungry and she's
asleep on her feet poor might!" Both Lily and Tom turned to face a medium height woman with
black shoulder length hair and a kind face - she wasn't slim but she didn't seem overly heavy either,
and she held her self with such command and poise that Lily knew instinctively she had to be a
mother. Turning an impassive face to the stern looking lady Tom seemed to look up at her
imposing figure though in actual fact Tom was the taller of the two.
"She has just asked for a room Mrs. Black," he informed her but Mrs. Black wasn't really listening
but bustling about Lily
"Good, good" she said absently "then be so good as to take her trunk and prepare one for her "
dutifully Tom obeyed taking Lily's trunk and leaving her in Mrs. blacks capable hands.
"Now then dear what's your name?" asked the older woman in a much softer tone, Lily was to tired
to be nervous she simply said "Lily Flower Evans" with a worm motherly smile Mrs. black lead
Lily over to a corner table saying "I know Sirius is always hungry and you…" the portly lady
paused mid sentence to eye lily's slight frame for emphasis before continuing "you look like you
wouldn't hurt for a meal or two your self" remembering her manors at last Lily stood up from the
seat Mrs. black had directed her to sit in as she spoke and said
"No I couldn't possibly I can pay for my own food and I certainly cant let you go and make it and
wait on me at this time of night, you don't even know me!"
"Now Lily" the woman admonished "its no trouble honestly" Lily was now shaky on her feet and
everything in front of her was blurring as her sleep addled brain rebelled and refused to allow the
exhausted girl to take in any thing else. Still Lily found the strength to thank Mrs. black and offer to
provide any help she required, though by now the red head was swaying on the spot, the older
woman gave her a beatific almost patronizing smile and gently pressed her back into her recently
vacated chair and bustled away to doubtless find the kitchens.
"So" said a boy sitting opposite her, she hadn't really noticed him before but Mrs. black
(presumably this boys mother) had refereed to him as 'Sirius'
"So" she echoed nothing showing in her voce or her face and then the boy grinned, he had the
most infectious grin Lily had ever seen she found her self helplessly returning his smile and looking
into his dark shadowy eyes which shone with fun and mischief, what ever he saw in her face must
have pleased him too because he said
"Hi I am Sirius as you may have gathered" his voice was worm, friendly, kind: all things Lily wasn't
used to hearing often
"Hi" she replied, "I guess you know by now but I am Lily"
"Ahh said the other," striking a dramatic pose and staring into the jade green depths of her eyes
"not even the flower she is named for can surpass the beauty I see before me" the statement was
intended to be joking and silly but with every word he said Sirius found him self more and more
bedazzled by the sight of the figure opposite him illuminated in torch and fire light only. He liked
her immediately, her sense of fun and mischief radiated of her in waves but there was another thing
too…. something, something else. The stunned boy new no more than that as he spiraled
downward, entranced, falling into the pools of glowing green and noticing the little flecks of silver,
which on anyone else would have looked odd, but on Lily it just looked right and served only to
make her even more stunning.
Lily, who's normally porcelain skin had acquired a distinctly rosy tinge at the complement, and the
stare of the boy who gave it, now shook her self and laughed liking this boy on site. The quiet
giggle seemed to awaken her comrade as intended, and then he, too, shook himself.
Looking up Lily saw his Mrs. Black returning with, what seemed to Lily, enough food to feed an
army, seeing the direction of her gaze Sirius bounced over to help his mother unload the food on to
the table.
Lily hadn't eaten since she had left and found her appetite immediately at the sight of the food with
a quick 'thank you' to its provider Lily began the systematic destruction of the huge potion in front
of her. Lily ate quickly and neatly clearing her plate in almost record time, she hadn't realized how
hungry she had been until she began to eat, however if Lily thought she had wolfed her food down
she had nothing on Sirius: he was done almost before she had raised her fork and had finished
seconds then thirds before Lily had even finished her first helping, distinctly unsurprised by her
sons antics Mrs. Black patently doled out the food as and when he asked for it, occasionally
scolding him for his manors when eating. Feeling bloated lily sat back placing her knife and fork
side by side in her almost empty plate, the moment the cutlery was out of her hands Sirius
demanded
"Are you gonna eat that?" laughing and realizing why Mrs. Black had made so much food Lily
gladly handed her plate, with her remaining food, over to the boy while marveling at the quantity he
seamed able to consume so fast and thanked Mrs. black profusely for the meal. Sirius, who seemed
to have finally eaten enough echoed her statement fervently, flushed at the two children's praise the
older woman said
"So Lily we are going into diagonally tomorrow to get Sirius and James their school stuff they is
starting Hogworts this September too."
"That is going to make for an…interesting couple of years!" mumbled Sirius under his breath and
received an icy glare for his trouble so he wisely shut up. Deciding not to ask, just then, who James
was Lily hit on another problem
"In, in my letter" she began hesitantly
"Yes dear" Mrs. black prompted encouragingly,
"Well it mentioned what I guess is money as rough estimates for the prices of my school things
except, well, it must be a different currency to what we, well non-wizard people" Lily was
floundering
"Muggles" supplied Sirius helpfully
"Muggles" she repeated giving him a grateful smile which brought color to his cheeks "well" she
continued "I guess we…well they must use different money to you…or us" Lily was tired and her
brain wasn't cooperating and she was flustered. Coming to her rescue Mrs. black finished for her
"And you only have muggle money!" it wasn't a question but Lily nodded mutely any way "well not
to worry said the cheerful woman you can get your money changed at Gringots. It's a wizarding
bank love," she added to clarify. Still mute Lily nodded to show her understanding, anything more
than that seemed like far too much effort just then,
"Its run by goblins" put in Sirius; forgetting her fatigue Lily sat bolt up right a wide-eyed and almost
uncomfortably intense stare fixed on the supplier of this shocking and fascinating information:
Sirius! He squirmed uncomfortably the beam of her flashing excited green eyes that held him like a
dear in a head-light, then he shrugged and Lily's new found energy left her as quickly as it had come
and she slouched back in her chair her unnerving yet beautiful eyes again obscured by heavy tired
lids and thick dramatic eye lashes. Feeling the sudden urge to win her approval like that again he
said, "you never know you could have a Family Trust Vault there any way!"
"A what?" she asked sleepily
"A family trust vault" repeated the boy then he launched into an explanation "when a muggle born
witch or wizard receives a Hogworts letter they can go to Gringots and find out if they have a vault.
You see it started a long time ago it is kind of like a hand-me-down from your ancestors, every
witch or wizard in your family can with draw enough money to get them through school curtsy of
there mugle born magical ancestors and when they receive their first wage packet the put a
percentage back into the vault and any more they wish to add over time so that when ever the next
young witch or wizard is discovered in their muggle family they can have the benefits and money
their predecessor had! See?"
"Its actually a very good idea" Mrs. Black put in, "a lot of wizarding families are starting similar
vaults so they have the money saved to put their children through school." Lily was still skeptical
and said
"I don't think there have been any more witches or wizards in our family before me"
"You'd be surprised dear, what you'd find in your family tree"
"Ok then how do I find out if I have one of these vaults?" the red head asked still not entirely
believing
"Oh that's easy" it was Sirius again "you cant use names because names change with marriage and
stuff so its done by magic" the mention of magic immediately caught Lily's attention, seeing that she
was hanging on his every word Sirius smiled and continued "you just stand before a large filing
cabinet type thing and state your full name and address then if you have a vault the appropriate
draw in the cabinet will open and a card with something on flies to the goblin in charge and from
there you will be taken to your vault"
"Its that easy?" she demanded awe struck
"Yup"
"So what is on the card, you know the one that flies out if you have a vault?"
"No one knows the goblins guard their secrets well, all I know is that it is something that identifies
you and directs them to your vault."
"It has your key on though, to your vault I mean" Mrs. black had decided to take part in this
conversation "and in your vault is a list of all the inputs and withdrawals since the vault was opened,
you of course will by then have been added to the list yourself, so you may find out a bit about
your family tree too, you never know" This was a lot to take in and it was now the early hours of
the morning, so, again Lily simply nodded. Seemingly reading her mind Mrs. black gave them each
a key and shoed them of to find there rooms and get some sleep assuring lily her luggage was
already there, gratefully she accepted the key and followed Sirius.
The exhausted pair made their way slowly up the stairs to where, according to Sirius, the rooms
were. They finally made it to the top and Lily looked ad the doors around her and saw gold
numbers glowing on each mahogany surface, noting the number she was standing by, Lily referred
to the key ring on her room key to find out what number her room was.
"Um…Sirius?" she asked, with any one else Lily may have felt ignorant or self-conscious but not
with this boy.
"Yeah -" he asked but the words died in his throat, he was gaping at her, she was silhouetted
against a torch in a bracket but the door they had just come through only her figure was discernible
and her flashing green eyes. Damn! he thought I'm in love!
"Sirius?" Lily asked again noticing him being in some kind of trance. He shook him self-feeling
embarrassed
"Um… sorry!" he muttered but she only shrugged and Sirius felt comfortable again. Instantly
resuming his exuberance her realized she wanted help finding her room a there were no room
numbers on the keys. He grinned and threw his key up, Lily frowned confused but then his key
began to glow illuminating the aria around him with a steady blue light, as it hovered directly by the
boys head it shot out a thin blue cord which led of in another direction "just follow the line" he said.
Lily did the same and soon both keys glowed directing the way to their rooms.
Sirius let Lily walk a little ahead of him so he could admire her as she walked without anyone being
any the wiser, all to soon they reached their doors, which to there mutual delight were side by side.
Shaking himself out of his Lily/love induced daze he heard his companion say
"Well good night then," she smiled a smile that made his insides melt and began to fiddle with her
lock.
When Lily didn't hear either an answer or the sound of another key and lock she looked up, Sirius
was standing there looking at her with such a crest fallen expression on his face that she almost had
to laugh, he had a lock of black hair falling over his big pleading eyes and such a contrite
expression on his face that he reminded her strongly of a lost little puppy dog in a shop window desperate for some one to love him, she could have killed him easier than refuse that look! Sighing Lily said, "ok, lets both go in our rooms and get ready for bed then you can bring your duvet in here and we will talk for a bit, How's that?" Sirius grinned from ear to ear and literally bounced with joy, now Lily thought about it he reminded her a lot of a dog or rather a young excitable puppy, for a moment she thought he would actually jump up and lick her face! Rolling her eyes Lily entered her room and began to get ready for bed.
Just as the girl entered her room there was a knock on the adjoining wall, amused Lily asked
"Yeah"
"Be right back" came the reply
Still smiling Lily began her evening rituals; she looked around for her trunk and saw it just inside her
door. She went over and took out her wash bag and bed things then she washed her face in the
basin in the corner of her room and brushed her teeth. After that she changed into a pair of fairly
short simple black cotton cycling shorts (not hot pants) and a large baggy mottled gray and white
T shirt then she sipped her very small feet into a pair of size one gray and white fluffy bunny
slippers and unwound her hair from its day time braid in favor of the bun she wore it in at night.
Just then there was a knock at the door so Lily lent over and opened it and Sirius's jaw dropped!
She stood there a cascade of vivid copper hair longer than anything she wore rapping her like a
cloak and the light gray top and very black shorts complimented her slim supple figure and unusual
coloring perfectly.
Sirius could barely think his mind had simply blanked at the sight of her but this time Lily didn't
notice she was to busy laughing at Sirius's own appearance. Still giggling she opened the door
farther and, stepping out of the way then ushered him into her room. Sirius moved on auto-piolate
still gaping and only when she continued to laugh did the high, happy, innocent sound awaken him
and it was then her looked to find the souse of her amusement, she had a beautiful laugh he thought
as he did so!
It was easy to discover what Lily found so funny, he had on the same fluffy gray and white bunny
slippers that she wore only in a much larger size, he smiled and said, "They were a present, from
my little sister she thought they were cute, and I happen to agree with her." Lily laughed again;
Sirius found he liked to make her laugh, he put on a fake girly voice and struck a model pose saying
"I rather like them and I here animal foot were is very this season" Lily giggled, encouraged by this
Sirius continued with a fake frown, looking down he said in an even more exaggeratedly feminine
voice: "but be honest…." A dramatic pause then, "does my bum look big in this?" Examining his
feet closely he shook them so that the stuffed rabbit heads on the toes nodded limply "see? They
agree! Oh I am such a blimp I will just have to go on a diet" then with a final melodramatic gesture
he cried, "oh wow is I!" then collapsed onto Lily's bed in a fit of hysterics. It was a full five minutes
before either of them could stop laughing long enough to speak but finally Lily looked up with tears
of mirth streaming down her flushed cheeks and asked
"Wow is I? Isn't it meant to be oh wow is me?" Drawing him self up importantly Sirius intoned in a
mock serious, pompous voice
"I use proper grammar young lady!" before relapsing into laughter again.
"You sound like my old head master" Lily gasped, breathless from laughing till her sides hurt,
"in fact they were both worryingly good impressions!"
Sitting next to her Sirius lifted an eye brow then assured her, smiling "its ok; I have older brothers
and sisters!
"Ah I see!" Lily said giving a fake sigh of relief and wiping imaginary sweat from her for head with
a tiny hand. Then she asked, "What are there names?"
"Peter is the eldest he is 22 and has a job and his own house and feels that makes him 'oh so
superior' to the rest of us! Shame he couldn't have got his 'own house' some where a bit further
away…like the north pole! Mary is ok she is 15 and nice enough though she is obsessed by her
weight and can be annoying too sometimes, she is in her forth year at Hogworts. And Lucy is the
youngest, I have as little to do with her as possible, enough said!"
"So you're the spoilt middle child?" Lily teased and Sirius stuck out his bottom lip and pouted,
"Am not!" he sulked in a babyish spoilt voice.
"Another scarily good impression there Siri" was her reply
"I had a good teacher, Lil" he stressed the nickname letting her know he had noticed her shortening
of his name before continuing "it's the spoilt youngest in our house as you can probably tell."
"Not in ours!" muttered Lily darkly, her smile falling from her face, but she left it at that.
There was a worm fire in the grate and they both got there duvets and pillows then sat propped up
against the end of her bed very close to the blaze. They settled comfortably and Sirius asked
"So where are your parents? How did you end up here at this time of the morning all alone?" The
question was bluntly put but Lily didn't mind, and she replied in the same fashion with no pre amble
simply stating
"I ran away" Sirius gaped, and seeing this Lily clarified "my sister, Petunia" the boy noticed the
bitter tone with which Lily said the hated girls name but decided not to mention it yet "she is
eighteen so mum and dad went out leaving her to look after" again the bitterness penetrated the
small girls speech "me, and we have other family on our street who we could go to for help"
"When will your parents be back?" asked Sirius
"Not till late tomorrow…or rather today" she amended glancing at the clock "Any way the owl with
my letter came, and Petunia was…'not best pleased' and I doubt my parents would notice if I'm
there or not, and my letter said I could stay here so I left in a taxi to the station took a train to
London then a bus to the top of the road and walked the rest of the way." He was still awe struck
by this feat but she waved it away with a casual hand adding only "I had too!"
They talked for a while more telling each other about hobbies, homes and friends, laughing about
the things they had done with there magic before they had got the letter, made all the funnier by the
fact that Lily grew up around muggles, and the pair discovered there mutual love for practical joking.
By the time they finally finished talking the fire had died down to glowing embers and the two
children were firm friends!
The remains of the fire were the only things lighting the room both inhabitants were very sleepy
and far to comfortable to move, they squirmed for a moment or two finding comfortable positions
then Lily snuggled up under her blankets, curling her small form up into a ball and tucking her teddy
under one arm she laid her head on Sirius's chest and sighing she closed her eyes.
Unfortunately this position but too much strain on her bruised and aching body, up until then her
tiredness had only allowed her one thought at a time and had, to some extent, numbed her injuries
but now the pain came back with full force! Thinking Sirius was asleep and trying not to wake him
she winced and sat up two silent tears making tracks down her almost translucent skin, she tried a
position to see if it hurt and hissed, biting her lip hard to keep from making any more sound as pain
arrowed its way up from her right side. Suddenly strong comforting arms lifted her now trembling
form into some ones lap and she felt herself being rapped in her covers again, she was held against
a firm chest and large hands stroked her silky hair as she cried her self out, letting go all the anger,
the frustration, the pain.
When she had calmed down, gently Sirius lifted her from his lap where he had cradled her and,
being care full not to put to much pressure on her injuries he laid her on the floor. Now he saw the
mottled bruise on her leg, about the size of some ones foot, lifting her top a little way he saw
another large bruise on her right hip, and then lifting her top a little further still he hissed in
sympathy as he saw the pail expanse of her stomach adorned with bruises large and small. Still
saying nothing he turned over her un protesting form and examined her back, shoulders, arms, and
ribs finding the same there as on her stomach.
His examination finished he picked her light figure up again, as easily as a rag doll and raped her
back up in her blanket, re settling her in his lap he looked her in the eye and asked seriously
"Who did this to you?" she looked away and muttered vaguely
"No one, I fell down" Forcing her to look at him he insisted
"Lily who was it?" his face was serious and black with anger as he said "I swear I will make them
sorry!"
"No!" she cried, then more calmly "no, I will tell you but you cant hurt her" Sirius looked un
convinced but she insisted and he looked into her tear stained, expressive, beautiful face and knew
he couldn't refuse her though he still didn't understand. After extracting this promise from him Lily
pored out the whole story from start to finish including how she would never maliciously harm or
incite harm on another member of her family and how her parents barely knew she was born and
were never there.
Sirius said nothing he just held her when she cried and rocked her like a baby nodding his
understanding when it was necessary, then finally when he was done he simply whispered
"Don't worry, I'll always be here when you need me, and that's a promise! Will you be okay?
"Yeah" she replied, "its only bruising it should have gone down by the morning it usually does"
"Yeah you said you heal fast maybe it's part of the magic you did to be accepted into Hogworts
you some how learned a healing charm or something, they say your first magic comes out when
you have need of it" he added darkly.
"Maybe" she agreed then curled up in his lap and laid her head on his shoulder and closed her eyes
with a sigh for a second time that night. This time they both sleped soundly, exhausted from both
the evenings, or rather early mornings events and the lateness/earliness of the hour.
This was howJames found them when at two o'clock in the after noon later that same day as he
walked into the room finding the door had been left ajar and unceremoniously threw a spare pillow
at the lump in the blankets, wondering briefly why exactly it was at the end of the bed. The pillow
made contact and before the astonished boy knew what was happening the blankets exploded and
a small red andgray fire bolt flew out of them and leapt at, and collided with him. James yelled and
fell backwardswith the 'fire bolt' on his chest and looked up into the most beautiful face he had ever
seen! Fiery tendrils dripped over the small girls shoulders and pooled on his clothes starkly
contrasted to the tiny white hands that were firmly planted on his chest, her weight was minimal and
James was sure he could stand up easily without needing to dislodge the form now attempting to
pin him down.
Then he made the mistake of looking up again into her petit artfully crafted porcelain doll face with
the tiny button slightly turned up nose and the vibrantly red mouth against the pure unblemished
delicately white skin marred only by a few orange-brown freckles dusting her nose and anger
flushed cheeks. The pinioned boy had the impression of grate delicacy as though he might brake
her with a touch but also of an underlying strength of body and of character that made her even
more intriguing then her eyes caught his and held them, the extravagant copper eyelashes served
only to make the forest green flashing gem like orbs seem infinitely large and of a depth un
imaginable.
If they were read by some one who knew her well James knew they would reflect her feelings like a
mirror but now to him they held mystery, intrigue there hidden depths spoke of secrets and
questions. Her intelligence was clear and her ability to learn as was her quick temper but underlying
compassion, and unbendable will power her entire self spoke of mischief; and James was enthralled!
One thousand questions streamed through his mind who was she? How did she know Sirius?
What was she doing here? But then she spoke
"Will you stop staring at me?" it was a demand not a question her voice held an authority that called
him on the most basic level of his being to obey! "People have been doing that a lot lately she
grumbled" more to herself than any one, Lily really wasn't a morning person.
"Nuhh…" was all he could manage, James's mind had gone blank only one thought would register:
she is perfect she had a musical entrancing almost hypnotic voice even when she was angry, he
couldn't believe she was real! Still locked in a furias staring contest with the new comer the girl
waited for his next move but then from behind she heard
"James? Meet Lily!" in Sirius's sleepy but amused drawl, and he tossed the pillow that had woken
the two, back at James.
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A/N ok so what did you think??? I did my VERY best to get this paragraphed and line spaced and
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ok gonna shut up now goddess bless u all luv Aurora xxx
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This is my little thank you to all those who reviewed my last chap
Destiny's Angel - Thanx, glad you like it! And see? I did write more!
JoyofPotter - Thanx and thanx for liking it and telling me so (- does that even MAKE sense?) I
hope this re-post fixes my entire lack of paragraphs and punctuation. I now know
how rite your,paragraphs really ARE our friends ;)! And also I thanx for telling me
how to spell Lily I didn't know (no I Am not being sarcastic) but I like spelling it
my way...sorry! (no offence or anything)
"§" Channy Hoppy "§" - Sorry it was hard to read but I think me and my incredible lack of skill
with comps have worked out how to get it to upload rite without getting
rid of all the line spacing. ** Crosses fingers** also as far as I can tell I
have fixed any spellings and grammar etc but please tell me if I have
missed anything. And WOW thanx 4 putting me on your favorites, I will
read your fic too, ecstatic u like it (hey that was almost a rime) enjoy the
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Phoenix_vs_crazy_snow - Thanx like way cool review too! I did keep writing so you keep
reading ok?
Ariana - Hopefully this time I got the paragraph thing down! Thanx for reviewing glad you liked it
enjoy the rest of it.
Nazgulette () - thanx for your review and I like that you said it was descriptive I like doing
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very nice kind reviewer type person.
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Ch 2: Conversations, Confessions and Collisions
A kindly looking man woke Lily when they reached Kings Cross station, she thanked him and he
helped her off the train with her trunk, she thanked him again and they parted ways.
The excitement coursing through Lily was making her light headed but she was a little apprehensive
too, only now was the possibility occurring to her that the owl letter may have just been a cruel
joke, cursing her self for not thinking of it before Lily resolved to find out one way or another
being as she was here now any way.
Following the directions on her Hogworts letter Lilly easily found 'the leaky cauldron' and barely
had time to wonder why she had never noticed a small, rather dilapidated, public house next to the
record store on any of her other shopping trips to London before she stepped into the confusing
medley of noise and people (at least what Lily assumed to be people but with some of them she
wasn't so sure.) She was still staring around dazedly clutching her heavy trunk with a white
knuckled hand when a large almost toothless, but friendly, looking man wearing a stained apron
appeared before her - glancing at her trunk he said
"So its Hogworts then miss?" Lily could only nod. It was just then that a jaw-cracking yawn swept
over her and forced her to find her voice; covering her mouth politely she waited till the wave of
tiredness passed then said
"Um please sir, might I have a room for tonight in fact until Monday?" she enquired timidly
"Call me Tom," stated her host with finality and again Lily simply nodded.
"Have you no sense Tom?" demanded a stern voice "cant you see the child's hungry and she's
asleep on her feet poor might!" Both Lily and Tom turned to face a medium height woman with
black shoulder length hair and a kind face - she wasn't slim but she didn't seem overly heavy either,
and she held her self with such command and poise that Lily knew instinctively she had to be a
mother. Turning an impassive face to the stern looking lady Tom seemed to look up at her
imposing figure though in actual fact Tom was the taller of the two.
"She has just asked for a room Mrs. Black," he informed her but Mrs. Black wasn't really listening
but bustling about Lily
"Good, good" she said absently "then be so good as to take her trunk and prepare one for her "
dutifully Tom obeyed taking Lily's trunk and leaving her in Mrs. blacks capable hands.
"Now then dear what's your name?" asked the older woman in a much softer tone, Lily was to tired
to be nervous she simply said "Lily Flower Evans" with a worm motherly smile Mrs. black lead
Lily over to a corner table saying "I know Sirius is always hungry and you…" the portly lady
paused mid sentence to eye lily's slight frame for emphasis before continuing "you look like you
wouldn't hurt for a meal or two your self" remembering her manors at last Lily stood up from the
seat Mrs. black had directed her to sit in as she spoke and said
"No I couldn't possibly I can pay for my own food and I certainly cant let you go and make it and
wait on me at this time of night, you don't even know me!"
"Now Lily" the woman admonished "its no trouble honestly" Lily was now shaky on her feet and
everything in front of her was blurring as her sleep addled brain rebelled and refused to allow the
exhausted girl to take in any thing else. Still Lily found the strength to thank Mrs. black and offer to
provide any help she required, though by now the red head was swaying on the spot, the older
woman gave her a beatific almost patronizing smile and gently pressed her back into her recently
vacated chair and bustled away to doubtless find the kitchens.
"So" said a boy sitting opposite her, she hadn't really noticed him before but Mrs. black
(presumably this boys mother) had refereed to him as 'Sirius'
"So" she echoed nothing showing in her voce or her face and then the boy grinned, he had the
most infectious grin Lily had ever seen she found her self helplessly returning his smile and looking
into his dark shadowy eyes which shone with fun and mischief, what ever he saw in her face must
have pleased him too because he said
"Hi I am Sirius as you may have gathered" his voice was worm, friendly, kind: all things Lily wasn't
used to hearing often
"Hi" she replied, "I guess you know by now but I am Lily"
"Ahh said the other," striking a dramatic pose and staring into the jade green depths of her eyes
"not even the flower she is named for can surpass the beauty I see before me" the statement was
intended to be joking and silly but with every word he said Sirius found him self more and more
bedazzled by the sight of the figure opposite him illuminated in torch and fire light only. He liked
her immediately, her sense of fun and mischief radiated of her in waves but there was another thing
too…. something, something else. The stunned boy new no more than that as he spiraled
downward, entranced, falling into the pools of glowing green and noticing the little flecks of silver,
which on anyone else would have looked odd, but on Lily it just looked right and served only to
make her even more stunning.
Lily, who's normally porcelain skin had acquired a distinctly rosy tinge at the complement, and the
stare of the boy who gave it, now shook her self and laughed liking this boy on site. The quiet
giggle seemed to awaken her comrade as intended, and then he, too, shook himself.
Looking up Lily saw his Mrs. Black returning with, what seemed to Lily, enough food to feed an
army, seeing the direction of her gaze Sirius bounced over to help his mother unload the food on to
the table.
Lily hadn't eaten since she had left and found her appetite immediately at the sight of the food with
a quick 'thank you' to its provider Lily began the systematic destruction of the huge potion in front
of her. Lily ate quickly and neatly clearing her plate in almost record time, she hadn't realized how
hungry she had been until she began to eat, however if Lily thought she had wolfed her food down
she had nothing on Sirius: he was done almost before she had raised her fork and had finished
seconds then thirds before Lily had even finished her first helping, distinctly unsurprised by her
sons antics Mrs. Black patently doled out the food as and when he asked for it, occasionally
scolding him for his manors when eating. Feeling bloated lily sat back placing her knife and fork
side by side in her almost empty plate, the moment the cutlery was out of her hands Sirius
demanded
"Are you gonna eat that?" laughing and realizing why Mrs. Black had made so much food Lily
gladly handed her plate, with her remaining food, over to the boy while marveling at the quantity he
seamed able to consume so fast and thanked Mrs. black profusely for the meal. Sirius, who seemed
to have finally eaten enough echoed her statement fervently, flushed at the two children's praise the
older woman said
"So Lily we are going into diagonally tomorrow to get Sirius and James their school stuff they is
starting Hogworts this September too."
"That is going to make for an…interesting couple of years!" mumbled Sirius under his breath and
received an icy glare for his trouble so he wisely shut up. Deciding not to ask, just then, who James
was Lily hit on another problem
"In, in my letter" she began hesitantly
"Yes dear" Mrs. black prompted encouragingly,
"Well it mentioned what I guess is money as rough estimates for the prices of my school things
except, well, it must be a different currency to what we, well non-wizard people" Lily was
floundering
"Muggles" supplied Sirius helpfully
"Muggles" she repeated giving him a grateful smile which brought color to his cheeks "well" she
continued "I guess we…well they must use different money to you…or us" Lily was tired and her
brain wasn't cooperating and she was flustered. Coming to her rescue Mrs. black finished for her
"And you only have muggle money!" it wasn't a question but Lily nodded mutely any way "well not
to worry said the cheerful woman you can get your money changed at Gringots. It's a wizarding
bank love," she added to clarify. Still mute Lily nodded to show her understanding, anything more
than that seemed like far too much effort just then,
"Its run by goblins" put in Sirius; forgetting her fatigue Lily sat bolt up right a wide-eyed and almost
uncomfortably intense stare fixed on the supplier of this shocking and fascinating information:
Sirius! He squirmed uncomfortably the beam of her flashing excited green eyes that held him like a
dear in a head-light, then he shrugged and Lily's new found energy left her as quickly as it had come
and she slouched back in her chair her unnerving yet beautiful eyes again obscured by heavy tired
lids and thick dramatic eye lashes. Feeling the sudden urge to win her approval like that again he
said, "you never know you could have a Family Trust Vault there any way!"
"A what?" she asked sleepily
"A family trust vault" repeated the boy then he launched into an explanation "when a muggle born
witch or wizard receives a Hogworts letter they can go to Gringots and find out if they have a vault.
You see it started a long time ago it is kind of like a hand-me-down from your ancestors, every
witch or wizard in your family can with draw enough money to get them through school curtsy of
there mugle born magical ancestors and when they receive their first wage packet the put a
percentage back into the vault and any more they wish to add over time so that when ever the next
young witch or wizard is discovered in their muggle family they can have the benefits and money
their predecessor had! See?"
"Its actually a very good idea" Mrs. Black put in, "a lot of wizarding families are starting similar
vaults so they have the money saved to put their children through school." Lily was still skeptical
and said
"I don't think there have been any more witches or wizards in our family before me"
"You'd be surprised dear, what you'd find in your family tree"
"Ok then how do I find out if I have one of these vaults?" the red head asked still not entirely
believing
"Oh that's easy" it was Sirius again "you cant use names because names change with marriage and
stuff so its done by magic" the mention of magic immediately caught Lily's attention, seeing that she
was hanging on his every word Sirius smiled and continued "you just stand before a large filing
cabinet type thing and state your full name and address then if you have a vault the appropriate
draw in the cabinet will open and a card with something on flies to the goblin in charge and from
there you will be taken to your vault"
"Its that easy?" she demanded awe struck
"Yup"
"So what is on the card, you know the one that flies out if you have a vault?"
"No one knows the goblins guard their secrets well, all I know is that it is something that identifies
you and directs them to your vault."
"It has your key on though, to your vault I mean" Mrs. black had decided to take part in this
conversation "and in your vault is a list of all the inputs and withdrawals since the vault was opened,
you of course will by then have been added to the list yourself, so you may find out a bit about
your family tree too, you never know" This was a lot to take in and it was now the early hours of
the morning, so, again Lily simply nodded. Seemingly reading her mind Mrs. black gave them each
a key and shoed them of to find there rooms and get some sleep assuring lily her luggage was
already there, gratefully she accepted the key and followed Sirius.
The exhausted pair made their way slowly up the stairs to where, according to Sirius, the rooms
were. They finally made it to the top and Lily looked ad the doors around her and saw gold
numbers glowing on each mahogany surface, noting the number she was standing by, Lily referred
to the key ring on her room key to find out what number her room was.
"Um…Sirius?" she asked, with any one else Lily may have felt ignorant or self-conscious but not
with this boy.
"Yeah -" he asked but the words died in his throat, he was gaping at her, she was silhouetted
against a torch in a bracket but the door they had just come through only her figure was discernible
and her flashing green eyes. Damn! he thought I'm in love!
"Sirius?" Lily asked again noticing him being in some kind of trance. He shook him self-feeling
embarrassed
"Um… sorry!" he muttered but she only shrugged and Sirius felt comfortable again. Instantly
resuming his exuberance her realized she wanted help finding her room a there were no room
numbers on the keys. He grinned and threw his key up, Lily frowned confused but then his key
began to glow illuminating the aria around him with a steady blue light, as it hovered directly by the
boys head it shot out a thin blue cord which led of in another direction "just follow the line" he said.
Lily did the same and soon both keys glowed directing the way to their rooms.
Sirius let Lily walk a little ahead of him so he could admire her as she walked without anyone being
any the wiser, all to soon they reached their doors, which to there mutual delight were side by side.
Shaking himself out of his Lily/love induced daze he heard his companion say
"Well good night then," she smiled a smile that made his insides melt and began to fiddle with her
lock.
When Lily didn't hear either an answer or the sound of another key and lock she looked up, Sirius
was standing there looking at her with such a crest fallen expression on his face that she almost had
to laugh, he had a lock of black hair falling over his big pleading eyes and such a contrite
expression on his face that he reminded her strongly of a lost little puppy dog in a shop window desperate for some one to love him, she could have killed him easier than refuse that look! Sighing Lily said, "ok, lets both go in our rooms and get ready for bed then you can bring your duvet in here and we will talk for a bit, How's that?" Sirius grinned from ear to ear and literally bounced with joy, now Lily thought about it he reminded her a lot of a dog or rather a young excitable puppy, for a moment she thought he would actually jump up and lick her face! Rolling her eyes Lily entered her room and began to get ready for bed.
Just as the girl entered her room there was a knock on the adjoining wall, amused Lily asked
"Yeah"
"Be right back" came the reply
Still smiling Lily began her evening rituals; she looked around for her trunk and saw it just inside her
door. She went over and took out her wash bag and bed things then she washed her face in the
basin in the corner of her room and brushed her teeth. After that she changed into a pair of fairly
short simple black cotton cycling shorts (not hot pants) and a large baggy mottled gray and white
T shirt then she sipped her very small feet into a pair of size one gray and white fluffy bunny
slippers and unwound her hair from its day time braid in favor of the bun she wore it in at night.
Just then there was a knock at the door so Lily lent over and opened it and Sirius's jaw dropped!
She stood there a cascade of vivid copper hair longer than anything she wore rapping her like a
cloak and the light gray top and very black shorts complimented her slim supple figure and unusual
coloring perfectly.
Sirius could barely think his mind had simply blanked at the sight of her but this time Lily didn't
notice she was to busy laughing at Sirius's own appearance. Still giggling she opened the door
farther and, stepping out of the way then ushered him into her room. Sirius moved on auto-piolate
still gaping and only when she continued to laugh did the high, happy, innocent sound awaken him
and it was then her looked to find the souse of her amusement, she had a beautiful laugh he thought
as he did so!
It was easy to discover what Lily found so funny, he had on the same fluffy gray and white bunny
slippers that she wore only in a much larger size, he smiled and said, "They were a present, from
my little sister she thought they were cute, and I happen to agree with her." Lily laughed again;
Sirius found he liked to make her laugh, he put on a fake girly voice and struck a model pose saying
"I rather like them and I here animal foot were is very this season" Lily giggled, encouraged by this
Sirius continued with a fake frown, looking down he said in an even more exaggeratedly feminine
voice: "but be honest…." A dramatic pause then, "does my bum look big in this?" Examining his
feet closely he shook them so that the stuffed rabbit heads on the toes nodded limply "see? They
agree! Oh I am such a blimp I will just have to go on a diet" then with a final melodramatic gesture
he cried, "oh wow is I!" then collapsed onto Lily's bed in a fit of hysterics. It was a full five minutes
before either of them could stop laughing long enough to speak but finally Lily looked up with tears
of mirth streaming down her flushed cheeks and asked
"Wow is I? Isn't it meant to be oh wow is me?" Drawing him self up importantly Sirius intoned in a
mock serious, pompous voice
"I use proper grammar young lady!" before relapsing into laughter again.
"You sound like my old head master" Lily gasped, breathless from laughing till her sides hurt,
"in fact they were both worryingly good impressions!"
Sitting next to her Sirius lifted an eye brow then assured her, smiling "its ok; I have older brothers
and sisters!
"Ah I see!" Lily said giving a fake sigh of relief and wiping imaginary sweat from her for head with
a tiny hand. Then she asked, "What are there names?"
"Peter is the eldest he is 22 and has a job and his own house and feels that makes him 'oh so
superior' to the rest of us! Shame he couldn't have got his 'own house' some where a bit further
away…like the north pole! Mary is ok she is 15 and nice enough though she is obsessed by her
weight and can be annoying too sometimes, she is in her forth year at Hogworts. And Lucy is the
youngest, I have as little to do with her as possible, enough said!"
"So you're the spoilt middle child?" Lily teased and Sirius stuck out his bottom lip and pouted,
"Am not!" he sulked in a babyish spoilt voice.
"Another scarily good impression there Siri" was her reply
"I had a good teacher, Lil" he stressed the nickname letting her know he had noticed her shortening
of his name before continuing "it's the spoilt youngest in our house as you can probably tell."
"Not in ours!" muttered Lily darkly, her smile falling from her face, but she left it at that.
There was a worm fire in the grate and they both got there duvets and pillows then sat propped up
against the end of her bed very close to the blaze. They settled comfortably and Sirius asked
"So where are your parents? How did you end up here at this time of the morning all alone?" The
question was bluntly put but Lily didn't mind, and she replied in the same fashion with no pre amble
simply stating
"I ran away" Sirius gaped, and seeing this Lily clarified "my sister, Petunia" the boy noticed the
bitter tone with which Lily said the hated girls name but decided not to mention it yet "she is
eighteen so mum and dad went out leaving her to look after" again the bitterness penetrated the
small girls speech "me, and we have other family on our street who we could go to for help"
"When will your parents be back?" asked Sirius
"Not till late tomorrow…or rather today" she amended glancing at the clock "Any way the owl with
my letter came, and Petunia was…'not best pleased' and I doubt my parents would notice if I'm
there or not, and my letter said I could stay here so I left in a taxi to the station took a train to
London then a bus to the top of the road and walked the rest of the way." He was still awe struck
by this feat but she waved it away with a casual hand adding only "I had too!"
They talked for a while more telling each other about hobbies, homes and friends, laughing about
the things they had done with there magic before they had got the letter, made all the funnier by the
fact that Lily grew up around muggles, and the pair discovered there mutual love for practical joking.
By the time they finally finished talking the fire had died down to glowing embers and the two
children were firm friends!
The remains of the fire were the only things lighting the room both inhabitants were very sleepy
and far to comfortable to move, they squirmed for a moment or two finding comfortable positions
then Lily snuggled up under her blankets, curling her small form up into a ball and tucking her teddy
under one arm she laid her head on Sirius's chest and sighing she closed her eyes.
Unfortunately this position but too much strain on her bruised and aching body, up until then her
tiredness had only allowed her one thought at a time and had, to some extent, numbed her injuries
but now the pain came back with full force! Thinking Sirius was asleep and trying not to wake him
she winced and sat up two silent tears making tracks down her almost translucent skin, she tried a
position to see if it hurt and hissed, biting her lip hard to keep from making any more sound as pain
arrowed its way up from her right side. Suddenly strong comforting arms lifted her now trembling
form into some ones lap and she felt herself being rapped in her covers again, she was held against
a firm chest and large hands stroked her silky hair as she cried her self out, letting go all the anger,
the frustration, the pain.
When she had calmed down, gently Sirius lifted her from his lap where he had cradled her and,
being care full not to put to much pressure on her injuries he laid her on the floor. Now he saw the
mottled bruise on her leg, about the size of some ones foot, lifting her top a little way he saw
another large bruise on her right hip, and then lifting her top a little further still he hissed in
sympathy as he saw the pail expanse of her stomach adorned with bruises large and small. Still
saying nothing he turned over her un protesting form and examined her back, shoulders, arms, and
ribs finding the same there as on her stomach.
His examination finished he picked her light figure up again, as easily as a rag doll and raped her
back up in her blanket, re settling her in his lap he looked her in the eye and asked seriously
"Who did this to you?" she looked away and muttered vaguely
"No one, I fell down" Forcing her to look at him he insisted
"Lily who was it?" his face was serious and black with anger as he said "I swear I will make them
sorry!"
"No!" she cried, then more calmly "no, I will tell you but you cant hurt her" Sirius looked un
convinced but she insisted and he looked into her tear stained, expressive, beautiful face and knew
he couldn't refuse her though he still didn't understand. After extracting this promise from him Lily
pored out the whole story from start to finish including how she would never maliciously harm or
incite harm on another member of her family and how her parents barely knew she was born and
were never there.
Sirius said nothing he just held her when she cried and rocked her like a baby nodding his
understanding when it was necessary, then finally when he was done he simply whispered
"Don't worry, I'll always be here when you need me, and that's a promise! Will you be okay?
"Yeah" she replied, "its only bruising it should have gone down by the morning it usually does"
"Yeah you said you heal fast maybe it's part of the magic you did to be accepted into Hogworts
you some how learned a healing charm or something, they say your first magic comes out when
you have need of it" he added darkly.
"Maybe" she agreed then curled up in his lap and laid her head on his shoulder and closed her eyes
with a sigh for a second time that night. This time they both sleped soundly, exhausted from both
the evenings, or rather early mornings events and the lateness/earliness of the hour.
This was howJames found them when at two o'clock in the after noon later that same day as he
walked into the room finding the door had been left ajar and unceremoniously threw a spare pillow
at the lump in the blankets, wondering briefly why exactly it was at the end of the bed. The pillow
made contact and before the astonished boy knew what was happening the blankets exploded and
a small red andgray fire bolt flew out of them and leapt at, and collided with him. James yelled and
fell backwardswith the 'fire bolt' on his chest and looked up into the most beautiful face he had ever
seen! Fiery tendrils dripped over the small girls shoulders and pooled on his clothes starkly
contrasted to the tiny white hands that were firmly planted on his chest, her weight was minimal and
James was sure he could stand up easily without needing to dislodge the form now attempting to
pin him down.
Then he made the mistake of looking up again into her petit artfully crafted porcelain doll face with
the tiny button slightly turned up nose and the vibrantly red mouth against the pure unblemished
delicately white skin marred only by a few orange-brown freckles dusting her nose and anger
flushed cheeks. The pinioned boy had the impression of grate delicacy as though he might brake
her with a touch but also of an underlying strength of body and of character that made her even
more intriguing then her eyes caught his and held them, the extravagant copper eyelashes served
only to make the forest green flashing gem like orbs seem infinitely large and of a depth un
imaginable.
If they were read by some one who knew her well James knew they would reflect her feelings like a
mirror but now to him they held mystery, intrigue there hidden depths spoke of secrets and
questions. Her intelligence was clear and her ability to learn as was her quick temper but underlying
compassion, and unbendable will power her entire self spoke of mischief; and James was enthralled!
One thousand questions streamed through his mind who was she? How did she know Sirius?
What was she doing here? But then she spoke
"Will you stop staring at me?" it was a demand not a question her voice held an authority that called
him on the most basic level of his being to obey! "People have been doing that a lot lately she
grumbled" more to herself than any one, Lily really wasn't a morning person.
"Nuhh…" was all he could manage, James's mind had gone blank only one thought would register:
she is perfect she had a musical entrancing almost hypnotic voice even when she was angry, he
couldn't believe she was real! Still locked in a furias staring contest with the new comer the girl
waited for his next move but then from behind she heard
"James? Meet Lily!" in Sirius's sleepy but amused drawl, and he tossed the pillow that had woken
the two, back at James.
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