Okay, here's my first fanfic! I hope you like it, and if this is successful
I may put more! Please review, I'd appreciate feedback!
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(Zim and GIR are at the toy store)
GIR: Whoopee! Look at all the toys!
Zim: next time I get to pick what we do.
GIR: ohhhhh! I wanna play with this one!(starts ripping tons of packages open.)
*alarm sounds*
Intercom: unpackaged toys on aisle 3!
Zim: hurry, GIR! We must go!
(Grabs GIR, and runs back home)
Zim: phew, that was a close one. You should be more careful.
GIR: .
1 To be continued.
Short, I know, but I'll post the next chapter soon, if I figure out how.
***
(Zim and GIR are at the toy store)
GIR: Whoopee! Look at all the toys!
Zim: next time I get to pick what we do.
GIR: ohhhhh! I wanna play with this one!(starts ripping tons of packages open.)
*alarm sounds*
Intercom: unpackaged toys on aisle 3!
Zim: hurry, GIR! We must go!
(Grabs GIR, and runs back home)
Zim: phew, that was a close one. You should be more careful.
GIR: .
1 To be continued.
Short, I know, but I'll post the next chapter soon, if I figure out how.
