The beginning of the End
"Help!" a small elfin girl dashed out of the forest, and slammed right into Max, tumbling both of them to the ground, "Oof!!"
"Are you all right, miss?" Kane crouched down, and offered a hand to help her stand.
"I'm being chased by the ugliest, most disgusting creatures," she stood, unassisted, and Max sat up, "Oh, my name's Misha."
"Nice to meet you," Kane stood, "I'm Kane, he's Max."
"Just how far away are the creatures," Max looked around, "and what do they look like?"
"I told you they're ugly," she glared at Kane, "But they're kind of insubstantial too."
"You mean intangible, or invisible?" Kane blinked.
"Both," Misha paused, "and neither. They waver in and out of visibility, and they choose when to be tangible."
"Do they have blood red irises surrounded by pitch black pupils and corneas?" Max began reaching for his sword, "Sharp looking claws and long, pointy horns?"
"Yes," she paled, "How do you know?"
"We're surrounded by them!" Kane growled, "Why didn't you say anything, Max?!"
Yeah, I have a lot of small chapters, but I don't think that hurts too much. Here's where some new people come in.
"Help!" a small elfin girl dashed out of the forest, and slammed right into Max, tumbling both of them to the ground, "Oof!!"
"Are you all right, miss?" Kane crouched down, and offered a hand to help her stand.
"I'm being chased by the ugliest, most disgusting creatures," she stood, unassisted, and Max sat up, "Oh, my name's Misha."
"Nice to meet you," Kane stood, "I'm Kane, he's Max."
"Just how far away are the creatures," Max looked around, "and what do they look like?"
"I told you they're ugly," she glared at Kane, "But they're kind of insubstantial too."
"You mean intangible, or invisible?" Kane blinked.
"Both," Misha paused, "and neither. They waver in and out of visibility, and they choose when to be tangible."
"Do they have blood red irises surrounded by pitch black pupils and corneas?" Max began reaching for his sword, "Sharp looking claws and long, pointy horns?"
"Yes," she paled, "How do you know?"
"We're surrounded by them!" Kane growled, "Why didn't you say anything, Max?!"
Yeah, I have a lot of small chapters, but I don't think that hurts too much. Here's where some new people come in.
