Shadows - Chapter 5
By: Rachel*
Rated: R (Content, language, and STRONG violence peeps)
Gender: Romance/Horror/comedy
E-mail: DuckQueen2150@aol.com
~*~ OK, this is has very graphic description of bodies, and a tear jerker sean witch explains the song, you'll find out what I mean when you reach the section titled: Amy and Greg, a little feather from that point is the SAD part! I'm very proud of this chapter so PLEASE NO FLAMES!! And YES I know I have mistakes (JD/Amberprincessa) Who I'm placing in my Name to fame box of the month, for guessing chapter 4 right, because I forgot to place in chapter 4... heh heh... Sorry, JD. ~*~
~*~ Oh, and so you guys understand a certain part in the story, I wrote a part where I interact with the characters, ONLY our killers, and Amy and Greg though! ~*~
I don't out the song: Hope you Dance, or any names in this story except for John the pool boy (Not in this chapter, and in the next chapter I well own Bob the retired mailman! But other wise I own nothing except the story idea and... uhhh I think that's it.. O! I also don't own the main frame idea for: I Still Know What You Did Last Summer! (You are the weakest Link Buh Bye!) Just felt like adding that! On with the story!
Chapter 5
The Victims Come Swarming In
I Hope You Dance
By: Lee Ann Womack
I hope you never lose your sense of wonder
You get your fill to eat
But always keep that hunger
May you never take one single breath for granted
God forbid love ever leave you empty handed
I hope you still feel small
When you stand by the ocean
Whenever one door closes, I hope one more opens
Promise me you'll give fate a fighting chance
And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance
I hope you dance
I hope you dance
I hope you never fear those mountains in the distance
Never settle for the path of least resistance
Living might mean taking chances
But they're worth taking
Lovin' might be a mistake
But it's worth making
Don't let some hell bent heart
Leave you bitter
When you come close to selling out
Reconsider
Give the heavens above
More than just a passing glance
And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance
I hope you dance
(Time is a wheel in constant motion always)
I hope you dance
(Rolling us along)
I hope you dance
(Tell me who)
I hope you dance
(Wants to look back on their years and wonder)
(Where those years have gone)
I hope you still feel small
When you stand by the ocean
Whenever one door closes, I hope one more opens
Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance
And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance
Dance
I hope you dance
I hope you dance
(Time is a wheel in constant motion always)
I hope you dance
(Rolling us along)
I hope you dance
(Tell me who)
(Wants to look back on their years and wonder)
I hope you dance
(Where those years have gone)
(Tell me who)
I hope you dance
(Wants to look back on their years and wonder)
(Where those years have gone)
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Raye and Chad
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"Uhhhhh.... Hold on a seck.." Raye and Chad came into a room Raye's arms and legs wrapped around Chad, with there lips locked.
Chad flipped the light switch off and they both jumped onto the bed.
"You guys might want to make sure your alone in the room..." Liz had a blade in her hands raised about to plunge it into Chad's back. They couldn't make out the completion in front of them from the black slicker, she was warring.
"What the hell?!" Chad grabbed Raye and they dodged the knife as it hit the bed, cutting through the blankets and bed.
"RAYE RUNNN!!!!" Chad gripped onto her wrist and the fled away from the bedroom, hoping to find one of the others somewhere in the building.
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A few minuets later, Serena and the girls
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"Yo, Lita... Where'd that Liz girl go to?" Serena looked around as she pulled her hair back into a pony tail.
"OH! GREAT! We have a psycho killer on our hands and Liz goes missing! Who's next, Mina? You? ME?!!!" Lita shouted louder then ever, sending echo's throughout the desolate building.
"Yo, Were you guys looking for me?" Liz once again popped out of the shadows of nowhere. "I just went to the bath room to check and see if anyone was there..." Liz looked at the girls who just went blank.
"Don't leave without telling us!! We thought something happened to you girl! Anyway, you know this place better then us!"
"Not really.. I've only been working here for about oh... 7 hours and counting!" The girls inhaled deeply.
"Ya-... Your kidding right?" Serena swallowed the ball that formed in her throat, so she could speak.
"No, and I think there's more then just one person, but two!" Lita's eye were inflamed with anger, at the thought of something happening to Ken, or any one of her friends.
"W-who do you think it is Liz?!" Mina gripped onto the thin strap of Serena's shirt and Serena whacked her away.
"I... I think it's the old guy who runs the place, and the other cleaning lady Kate! (AN: Kate is the one from episode 11: Match Point for Sailor Moon? I think that's the one.. Anyway..) They have been off and on with each other for the past year, and there the only likely suspects.." Liz grinned and spook in a cute little innocent voice that didn't fit her description.
"Are you kidding Liz?!" Mina choked out of her trout as she looked around her to make sure that know one there.
"Do you think I would lie in this situation?!" Liz lied and acted as if nothing had even happened.
"Come on lets get the guys and then we'll go after them!" Lita started running down the hall away from the girls and they tried as hard as posable to get to her.
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"Hook, line, and sinker.. hmhmhmhmmm.." Liz snickered to herself and started after the girls.
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Darien, and the guys
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"Shit! I cut my God damn hand..." Ken moved his hand away from a... broken window and examined the wound.
"Ehhh... It'll be fine Ken." Andrew smiled at the cut on Ken's hand.
"Yeah, to YOU it'll be fine! How the hell do you think I FEEL?!" Ken glared at Andrew and tore his own shirt and rapped the bleeding hand.
"GUYS! Stop tearing at each others throats, we need to find the person, people.. or.. thing that killed the maid!" Darien turned and looked at the quarreling *friends* with anger clearly written on his tired face. They looked at him but then froze.
"Da.....Da.....Da......DARIEN!!!!!!!!!!!!" Ken was horrified at the site behind Darien.
"WHAT?!" Darien slapped Ken and Andrew in the face but his completion didn't change, they were still as pail as ghosts, and stuttering.
"Loo....lo......look. ... behind you!" Ken fell to his knees and pointed to the ground behind Darien.
"Oh... My... Hell!" Darien turned as white, as white can be as he looked at the body of yet another dead maid. Her body was tattered and torn from sharp pieces of glass imbedded into her frail body. Her brown hair matted down the blood that was streaming from her neck.
"That's it, the bastards going down!" Ken was inflamed with built up anger and was unleashing it vocally. "What kind of fucking psycho could do something so curl to a helpless woman?!" Ken's eyes brimmed with tears but they didn't spill from his eyes.
"HEEEELLLLLLPPPPPP!!!!" Raye and Chad came screaming into the hallway, gasping for air after the stopped there mad dash for survival.
"AHHHHH!" Ken and Darien jumped in surprise and held there hearts.
"DAMN IT MAN! DON'T SCARE US LIKE THAT!!!" Darien and Ken screamed into Raye and Chad's faces, and Andrew just chuckled in amusement.
"Sorry..." Raye paused for a moment and noticed a! "It.... It's a! There's a! AHHHHHHHHHH!" Raye screamed and jumped into the arms but, he aimlessly dropped to the floor as he saw the same thing he did.
"Yeah ... we know already, there's another dead body, and no killer to be found with it..." Andrew smiled happily but quickly whipped the look off his face, just to make sure he didn't look TO happy.
"Klutz! How could you drop ME?!" Raye stood up angrily and slapped Chad in the back in the head.
"Sorry sweet stuff... I didn't mean it, you saw the body before I did, and then when I saw it... I... Just dropped you..." Chad backed up a couple of feet, but calmed down as the flames in Raye dark eyes turned into a small flicker.
'I guess it's a good thing I decided not to clean up her body, they haven't even thought about the killers being one of them!' Andrew smiled one last time and backed up slowly away from the frightened group of people. Who ran in a HUGE mob away from the dead body as they heard a small noise from the other end of the hallway.
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Amy and Greg
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"I love you so much Amy.." Greg said between kisses. He wrapped his arms around her body and carried her onto one of the gumminess mattes in the exercise room.
"...Don't... You... Think we.... Should ... be looking..... for the killer?..." Amy pulled off Greg's shirt and pushed that though to the side as he did the same to her and kissed her up and down her stomach next, and lips.
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"That's it Amy forget about looking for us... And when you and Greg least expect it... hmhmhmhmhm!" Andrew's eyes turned cold black with evil as Liz came up next to him and smiled as well.
"Don't you mean, we'll get them?" Liz sneered at her brother who just messed up her hair.
"I wouldn't forget my little sister, now would I?"
"I don't know, would you?" Liz glared and Andrew just looked pointlessly at her.
"NO! I was just watching..." Andrew looked back at the couple tied into a heated passion of there undying love for each other.
"Pervert.. Your supposed to kill them, not watch them have sex..." Liz rolled her eyes and held out a black slicker the same that he had, so that they didn't really THINK that there were really two killers around.
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(AN: CREEK!) ::Story pauses for a second and all that's left is a black room with a light Amy, Greg, and The two killers and me!!::
"What the hell Rachel?!" Liz looks at me her knife in hand along with Andrew who sharpened the tip of the blade. "Uhhhh..... Heh heh (GULP!) ... wait why am I in the story?!!" I look around, ME, REACHEL* the author with 2 very unhappy killers and 2 lovers thinking that I was WATCHING them!! ARGGG!
"You peeping tom! How dare you watch us!" Amy growled at me as she held her cloths up covering herself, and Greg doing the same.
"I... I made the creaking noise because.... The KILLER/KILLERS were watching you, I'm just writing this damn thing! If I wanted to, everyone could be dead, and the bad guys would win, you two couldn't have you moment of passion, and the story would be finished!!!" I backed up unsteadily, as Greg and Amy took a second to absorb that thought.
"You mean.... WE COULD HAVE ALREADY KILLED EVERYONE BY NOW???!!!!!!" Liz is pissed... (Sigh, I hate getting stuck in my own stories! ^_^
"Uhhhh ... kind of... the story would suck... But yeah, I could have you, but I'm not sure what I'm going to do yet..." I gulped as Andrew's knife razed up to my neck.
"STOP! Don't hurt her!" But then suddenly Darien (The total hottie) grabbed the knife thrusting it into Andrew neck!
"Oh Darien I love you so much!" Darien wrapped his arms around my and we kissed deeply!
......"Heh heh.. got lost in my own fantasy... back to the story, forget I ever added the: CREEK!
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"Oh, Greg... Amy moaned but Greg soon sat up as they heard, and an added (CREEK) (AN: I just HAD to add it!) into there passionate showing of there love for each other.
"Amy, did ... you hear something?" Greg looked into the cold blackness, of night and storm.
"You two were supposed to be looking for us.. Now you'll have to pay the consequences!" The figure.. FIGURES in shadows walked out from there dark cripts, like lions getting ready to pounce on there unsuspecting prey.
"AMY RUN!" Greg pushed her out of the way the sharp blade missed Amy.. Hitting Greg straight in the heart.
"GRREEEEGGG!!!" Amy screamed as tears streamed down her face. "Don't leave me, Greg! Please, I need you!" Amy ran over to his side, while Liz an Andrew just watched happily, the faces unknown from the black slickers.
"Just think of it as a sign, that we probably wouldn't last that long as a married couple anyway.... I love you Amy, you'll be in my heart for all time my love.. I'll be waiting for you.." Greg brushed his hand on the fragile frame of Amy's tear ridden face and closed his eyes.
"NOOOOOOOO! GREG!!!" Amy broke down and the tears seemed to leave her eyes in bucketful's.
"Awwww... Boo cry'n who!" Liz looked over Amy and just smiled, very content on killing her as well.
"You bitch! Amy screamed and slammed into Liz and ran out of the room leaving the shocked Liz in the room with Andrew who soon ran after Amy.
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Serena and the girls
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"Lita!! WAIT UP!" Serena yelled and gripped onto the back of her shirt, stopping her abruptly.
"Damn it... My shirt!" Lita heard a rip and stopped in a millisecond. "You just HAD to rip my BRAND NEW, Forever 21 Tank-top didn't you SERENA!" Lita examined the shirt that was hanging by threads!
"Oppps... Didn't mean it.."
"You owe me 35 bucks woman!" Lita pulled out two clips that she had in her hair and reattached her shirt with them.
"Ewwww... You killed Lita's new shirt Serena!" Lita and Serena looked blankly at Mina who only blushed before turning pale as a BIG crowd of people slammed into the three girls.
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Amy
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"HELP! Someone!" Amy made a sharp turn around a corner her ocean blue hair matted with Greg's blood, and her face covered in tears of fear and lose.
"You can run Amy, but you can't hide!" Andrew was quick on her heals and she screamed in fear as she tripped but stood up quickly and continued running.
"Drop dead asswhole!" Amy yelled as she ran outside into the ferrous storm, her only light of hope for a chance of living.
"Oh, you do have a tong on you!" Andrew laughed evilly and ran out into the darkened sky of the storm.
"AHHHHHHHH!" Amy screamed as she fell into the pool Andrew following in with her.
"What Amy? Your acting like I'm going to hurt you or something? It wont hurt... I'm just going to cut your body into tiny ... little pieces." Andrew smiled coyly as Amy just glared punching him right in the eye unexpectedly.
"Yeah, well it would help if you knew who you were dealing with!" She scrambled out of the pool running at top speeds trying to find someone that could help her.
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Andrew still in the pool
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"Now your gonna get it bitch!" Andrew was way beyond pissed and wasn't going to give up on Amy so easily."Someone isn't to happy." Liz smiled at Andrew who just pushed her out of the way and ran after Amy, blood dripping onto the concrete path from the gash in his lip.
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Darien's group, and Serena's group where we left off
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"OWWWWWWWWW!" They all yelled as Darien, Ken, Raye, and Chad ran right into Serena, Lita, and Mina.
"Get off me!" Mina screamed
"I can't breathe!" Lita yelled trying to gasp for air and failing as Ken stepped on her head... "AHHHHH!"
"Sorry honey... Didn't mean it..." Ken leaped out of the pile of people, and helped Lita to her feet, letting the others tend to there wounds.
"Chad baby?" Raye looked concerned as she stood up and found him holding his head in pain. "What happened?!"
"You kicked me!" Raye turned bright red and looked at the Darien who held Serena gingerly as she cried into his shoulder.
"Anyway, while where here Chad.. Why did you guys come screaming around that corner?" Ken rubbed his stiff neck as he looked at the couple with interest.
"Well ... we ... were looking for looking for the person.... And we found him.. or her.. we couldn't 'make out' who it was.. and they almost killed me, but hit the.. bed instead of Raye and me."
"Oh yeah it sounds like you were looking REAL hard for our killer!" Serena giggled as Raye turned bright red with embarrassment.
"Are you OK?" Mina walked up to Raye and placed a hand on her back.
"Yeah, I'll be fine...." Raye smiled weakly and looked at all her friends noticing that people were missing.. "Uhhh..... where did Liz and Andrew go?"
"We have no clue, and Greg snd Amy are still know shows..." Darien massaged his temples to help stop the throbbing pain in his head.
"SOMEONE HELP ME PLEASE!!!!" Amy wailed as she stumbled into Serena's arms Amy's body socked with pool water, rain and tears streaming from her eyes.
"AMY!" Serena screamed and held her friend tight. "Wh- what's wrong?!"
"The killer... The killers got Greg.." Amy collapsed very weak but was able to talk. "He-They killed him!"
"Oh my God Amy, I.. Oh Amy.." Serena held Amy tight and rocked her back and forth so she would calm down.
"Oh, God.. We're gonna die, I know it! We're gonna die!" Raye slide down on a wall her hand over her face.
"No we're not, we'll get out of here, we can make it out alive." Darien walked down the hallway a little bit and looked around the corner making sure know one was there.
"Do you mind, I've been trying to sleep for hours and haven't been able to get an ounce of sleep!" The front desk guy appeared in Darien face and he yelled at the top of his lungs running at top speeds to the group of people who screamed even louder. "My word! Do you have to be so loud?! God your acting as if there's a prowler in the building!" Darien breathed heavily holding his chest again hoping that he wouldn't collapse over dead.
"Uhhh... it's more like two killers, not a prowler...." Lita said, her nerves reaching there braking point.
"Ha ha, very funny like I would actually believe that there are two mass murders in the building hunting down people for pure pleasure!" The man shook his head and turned around only to have a knife be jabbed into his gut.
"Oppss, that was supposed to go into your back... Oh well you'll die anyway!" Liz smiled and Serena went stark white in fear.
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" They all screamed and ran down the stairs, Darien holding Serena's hand and Amy's tired body.
"Outside we might all have a chance, it's raining really hard and the wind is REALLY nasty but if we make it to the jungle path area we can hide!" Ken yelled and they Darien agreed they all followed Ken and Darien into the dark, rain drenched, shadowy woods like area.
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"Thanks sis, we've got them right where we want them!" Andrew smiled placing an arm around his sister and together they walked silently into the shadows of the storm.
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~*~ A mild cliff hanger! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Anyway.. Working on chapter 6 and I figure that there might be a chapter 7 and a 100% chance of an epilogue! ~*~
~*~ Thanks to John for not killing me when I showed him the description of: John the pool boy, and thanks to all my friends at TMS! This 100% includes JD, who also has THE BEST STORIES ON FANFICTION.NET!!! A MUST to read peoples! Her author name is :::Amberprincessa::: ~*~
~*~ Oh, and for a quick update, in school we're doing this thing where we have to write a story about the Titanic, and what do you know I get a story idea! I'll have to add this one to my summer list! I'll be writing my story idea for school, and that way it well keep the idea fresh in my mind and I wont fall asleep in class! Heh heh... I HATE ENGLISH! Only when we get free writes is it cool. Anyway sorry for the boring dribble I just had to get out of my mind! R&R, or E-mail me at: DuckQueen2150@aol.com ~*~
By: Rachel*
Rated: R (Content, language, and STRONG violence peeps)
Gender: Romance/Horror/comedy
E-mail: DuckQueen2150@aol.com
~*~ OK, this is has very graphic description of bodies, and a tear jerker sean witch explains the song, you'll find out what I mean when you reach the section titled: Amy and Greg, a little feather from that point is the SAD part! I'm very proud of this chapter so PLEASE NO FLAMES!! And YES I know I have mistakes (JD/Amberprincessa) Who I'm placing in my Name to fame box of the month, for guessing chapter 4 right, because I forgot to place in chapter 4... heh heh... Sorry, JD. ~*~
~*~ Oh, and so you guys understand a certain part in the story, I wrote a part where I interact with the characters, ONLY our killers, and Amy and Greg though! ~*~
I don't out the song: Hope you Dance, or any names in this story except for John the pool boy (Not in this chapter, and in the next chapter I well own Bob the retired mailman! But other wise I own nothing except the story idea and... uhhh I think that's it.. O! I also don't own the main frame idea for: I Still Know What You Did Last Summer! (You are the weakest Link Buh Bye!) Just felt like adding that! On with the story!
Chapter 5
The Victims Come Swarming In
I Hope You Dance
By: Lee Ann Womack
I hope you never lose your sense of wonder
You get your fill to eat
But always keep that hunger
May you never take one single breath for granted
God forbid love ever leave you empty handed
I hope you still feel small
When you stand by the ocean
Whenever one door closes, I hope one more opens
Promise me you'll give fate a fighting chance
And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance
I hope you dance
I hope you dance
I hope you never fear those mountains in the distance
Never settle for the path of least resistance
Living might mean taking chances
But they're worth taking
Lovin' might be a mistake
But it's worth making
Don't let some hell bent heart
Leave you bitter
When you come close to selling out
Reconsider
Give the heavens above
More than just a passing glance
And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance
I hope you dance
(Time is a wheel in constant motion always)
I hope you dance
(Rolling us along)
I hope you dance
(Tell me who)
I hope you dance
(Wants to look back on their years and wonder)
(Where those years have gone)
I hope you still feel small
When you stand by the ocean
Whenever one door closes, I hope one more opens
Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance
And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance
Dance
I hope you dance
I hope you dance
(Time is a wheel in constant motion always)
I hope you dance
(Rolling us along)
I hope you dance
(Tell me who)
(Wants to look back on their years and wonder)
I hope you dance
(Where those years have gone)
(Tell me who)
I hope you dance
(Wants to look back on their years and wonder)
(Where those years have gone)
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Raye and Chad
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"Uhhhhh.... Hold on a seck.." Raye and Chad came into a room Raye's arms and legs wrapped around Chad, with there lips locked.
Chad flipped the light switch off and they both jumped onto the bed.
"You guys might want to make sure your alone in the room..." Liz had a blade in her hands raised about to plunge it into Chad's back. They couldn't make out the completion in front of them from the black slicker, she was warring.
"What the hell?!" Chad grabbed Raye and they dodged the knife as it hit the bed, cutting through the blankets and bed.
"RAYE RUNNN!!!!" Chad gripped onto her wrist and the fled away from the bedroom, hoping to find one of the others somewhere in the building.
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A few minuets later, Serena and the girls
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"Yo, Lita... Where'd that Liz girl go to?" Serena looked around as she pulled her hair back into a pony tail.
"OH! GREAT! We have a psycho killer on our hands and Liz goes missing! Who's next, Mina? You? ME?!!!" Lita shouted louder then ever, sending echo's throughout the desolate building.
"Yo, Were you guys looking for me?" Liz once again popped out of the shadows of nowhere. "I just went to the bath room to check and see if anyone was there..." Liz looked at the girls who just went blank.
"Don't leave without telling us!! We thought something happened to you girl! Anyway, you know this place better then us!"
"Not really.. I've only been working here for about oh... 7 hours and counting!" The girls inhaled deeply.
"Ya-... Your kidding right?" Serena swallowed the ball that formed in her throat, so she could speak.
"No, and I think there's more then just one person, but two!" Lita's eye were inflamed with anger, at the thought of something happening to Ken, or any one of her friends.
"W-who do you think it is Liz?!" Mina gripped onto the thin strap of Serena's shirt and Serena whacked her away.
"I... I think it's the old guy who runs the place, and the other cleaning lady Kate! (AN: Kate is the one from episode 11: Match Point for Sailor Moon? I think that's the one.. Anyway..) They have been off and on with each other for the past year, and there the only likely suspects.." Liz grinned and spook in a cute little innocent voice that didn't fit her description.
"Are you kidding Liz?!" Mina choked out of her trout as she looked around her to make sure that know one there.
"Do you think I would lie in this situation?!" Liz lied and acted as if nothing had even happened.
"Come on lets get the guys and then we'll go after them!" Lita started running down the hall away from the girls and they tried as hard as posable to get to her.
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"Hook, line, and sinker.. hmhmhmhmmm.." Liz snickered to herself and started after the girls.
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Darien, and the guys
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"Shit! I cut my God damn hand..." Ken moved his hand away from a... broken window and examined the wound.
"Ehhh... It'll be fine Ken." Andrew smiled at the cut on Ken's hand.
"Yeah, to YOU it'll be fine! How the hell do you think I FEEL?!" Ken glared at Andrew and tore his own shirt and rapped the bleeding hand.
"GUYS! Stop tearing at each others throats, we need to find the person, people.. or.. thing that killed the maid!" Darien turned and looked at the quarreling *friends* with anger clearly written on his tired face. They looked at him but then froze.
"Da.....Da.....Da......DARIEN!!!!!!!!!!!!" Ken was horrified at the site behind Darien.
"WHAT?!" Darien slapped Ken and Andrew in the face but his completion didn't change, they were still as pail as ghosts, and stuttering.
"Loo....lo......look. ... behind you!" Ken fell to his knees and pointed to the ground behind Darien.
"Oh... My... Hell!" Darien turned as white, as white can be as he looked at the body of yet another dead maid. Her body was tattered and torn from sharp pieces of glass imbedded into her frail body. Her brown hair matted down the blood that was streaming from her neck.
"That's it, the bastards going down!" Ken was inflamed with built up anger and was unleashing it vocally. "What kind of fucking psycho could do something so curl to a helpless woman?!" Ken's eyes brimmed with tears but they didn't spill from his eyes.
"HEEEELLLLLLPPPPPP!!!!" Raye and Chad came screaming into the hallway, gasping for air after the stopped there mad dash for survival.
"AHHHHH!" Ken and Darien jumped in surprise and held there hearts.
"DAMN IT MAN! DON'T SCARE US LIKE THAT!!!" Darien and Ken screamed into Raye and Chad's faces, and Andrew just chuckled in amusement.
"Sorry..." Raye paused for a moment and noticed a! "It.... It's a! There's a! AHHHHHHHHHH!" Raye screamed and jumped into the arms but, he aimlessly dropped to the floor as he saw the same thing he did.
"Yeah ... we know already, there's another dead body, and no killer to be found with it..." Andrew smiled happily but quickly whipped the look off his face, just to make sure he didn't look TO happy.
"Klutz! How could you drop ME?!" Raye stood up angrily and slapped Chad in the back in the head.
"Sorry sweet stuff... I didn't mean it, you saw the body before I did, and then when I saw it... I... Just dropped you..." Chad backed up a couple of feet, but calmed down as the flames in Raye dark eyes turned into a small flicker.
'I guess it's a good thing I decided not to clean up her body, they haven't even thought about the killers being one of them!' Andrew smiled one last time and backed up slowly away from the frightened group of people. Who ran in a HUGE mob away from the dead body as they heard a small noise from the other end of the hallway.
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Amy and Greg
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"I love you so much Amy.." Greg said between kisses. He wrapped his arms around her body and carried her onto one of the gumminess mattes in the exercise room.
"...Don't... You... Think we.... Should ... be looking..... for the killer?..." Amy pulled off Greg's shirt and pushed that though to the side as he did the same to her and kissed her up and down her stomach next, and lips.
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"That's it Amy forget about looking for us... And when you and Greg least expect it... hmhmhmhmhm!" Andrew's eyes turned cold black with evil as Liz came up next to him and smiled as well.
"Don't you mean, we'll get them?" Liz sneered at her brother who just messed up her hair.
"I wouldn't forget my little sister, now would I?"
"I don't know, would you?" Liz glared and Andrew just looked pointlessly at her.
"NO! I was just watching..." Andrew looked back at the couple tied into a heated passion of there undying love for each other.
"Pervert.. Your supposed to kill them, not watch them have sex..." Liz rolled her eyes and held out a black slicker the same that he had, so that they didn't really THINK that there were really two killers around.
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(AN: CREEK!) ::Story pauses for a second and all that's left is a black room with a light Amy, Greg, and The two killers and me!!::
"What the hell Rachel?!" Liz looks at me her knife in hand along with Andrew who sharpened the tip of the blade. "Uhhhh..... Heh heh (GULP!) ... wait why am I in the story?!!" I look around, ME, REACHEL* the author with 2 very unhappy killers and 2 lovers thinking that I was WATCHING them!! ARGGG!
"You peeping tom! How dare you watch us!" Amy growled at me as she held her cloths up covering herself, and Greg doing the same.
"I... I made the creaking noise because.... The KILLER/KILLERS were watching you, I'm just writing this damn thing! If I wanted to, everyone could be dead, and the bad guys would win, you two couldn't have you moment of passion, and the story would be finished!!!" I backed up unsteadily, as Greg and Amy took a second to absorb that thought.
"You mean.... WE COULD HAVE ALREADY KILLED EVERYONE BY NOW???!!!!!!" Liz is pissed... (Sigh, I hate getting stuck in my own stories! ^_^
"Uhhhh ... kind of... the story would suck... But yeah, I could have you, but I'm not sure what I'm going to do yet..." I gulped as Andrew's knife razed up to my neck.
"STOP! Don't hurt her!" But then suddenly Darien (The total hottie) grabbed the knife thrusting it into Andrew neck!
"Oh Darien I love you so much!" Darien wrapped his arms around my and we kissed deeply!
......"Heh heh.. got lost in my own fantasy... back to the story, forget I ever added the: CREEK!
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"Oh, Greg... Amy moaned but Greg soon sat up as they heard, and an added (CREEK) (AN: I just HAD to add it!) into there passionate showing of there love for each other.
"Amy, did ... you hear something?" Greg looked into the cold blackness, of night and storm.
"You two were supposed to be looking for us.. Now you'll have to pay the consequences!" The figure.. FIGURES in shadows walked out from there dark cripts, like lions getting ready to pounce on there unsuspecting prey.
"AMY RUN!" Greg pushed her out of the way the sharp blade missed Amy.. Hitting Greg straight in the heart.
"GRREEEEGGG!!!" Amy screamed as tears streamed down her face. "Don't leave me, Greg! Please, I need you!" Amy ran over to his side, while Liz an Andrew just watched happily, the faces unknown from the black slickers.
"Just think of it as a sign, that we probably wouldn't last that long as a married couple anyway.... I love you Amy, you'll be in my heart for all time my love.. I'll be waiting for you.." Greg brushed his hand on the fragile frame of Amy's tear ridden face and closed his eyes.
"NOOOOOOOO! GREG!!!" Amy broke down and the tears seemed to leave her eyes in bucketful's.
"Awwww... Boo cry'n who!" Liz looked over Amy and just smiled, very content on killing her as well.
"You bitch! Amy screamed and slammed into Liz and ran out of the room leaving the shocked Liz in the room with Andrew who soon ran after Amy.
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Serena and the girls
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"Lita!! WAIT UP!" Serena yelled and gripped onto the back of her shirt, stopping her abruptly.
"Damn it... My shirt!" Lita heard a rip and stopped in a millisecond. "You just HAD to rip my BRAND NEW, Forever 21 Tank-top didn't you SERENA!" Lita examined the shirt that was hanging by threads!
"Oppps... Didn't mean it.."
"You owe me 35 bucks woman!" Lita pulled out two clips that she had in her hair and reattached her shirt with them.
"Ewwww... You killed Lita's new shirt Serena!" Lita and Serena looked blankly at Mina who only blushed before turning pale as a BIG crowd of people slammed into the three girls.
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Amy
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"HELP! Someone!" Amy made a sharp turn around a corner her ocean blue hair matted with Greg's blood, and her face covered in tears of fear and lose.
"You can run Amy, but you can't hide!" Andrew was quick on her heals and she screamed in fear as she tripped but stood up quickly and continued running.
"Drop dead asswhole!" Amy yelled as she ran outside into the ferrous storm, her only light of hope for a chance of living.
"Oh, you do have a tong on you!" Andrew laughed evilly and ran out into the darkened sky of the storm.
"AHHHHHHHH!" Amy screamed as she fell into the pool Andrew following in with her.
"What Amy? Your acting like I'm going to hurt you or something? It wont hurt... I'm just going to cut your body into tiny ... little pieces." Andrew smiled coyly as Amy just glared punching him right in the eye unexpectedly.
"Yeah, well it would help if you knew who you were dealing with!" She scrambled out of the pool running at top speeds trying to find someone that could help her.
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Andrew still in the pool
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"Now your gonna get it bitch!" Andrew was way beyond pissed and wasn't going to give up on Amy so easily."Someone isn't to happy." Liz smiled at Andrew who just pushed her out of the way and ran after Amy, blood dripping onto the concrete path from the gash in his lip.
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Darien's group, and Serena's group where we left off
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"OWWWWWWWWW!" They all yelled as Darien, Ken, Raye, and Chad ran right into Serena, Lita, and Mina.
"Get off me!" Mina screamed
"I can't breathe!" Lita yelled trying to gasp for air and failing as Ken stepped on her head... "AHHHHH!"
"Sorry honey... Didn't mean it..." Ken leaped out of the pile of people, and helped Lita to her feet, letting the others tend to there wounds.
"Chad baby?" Raye looked concerned as she stood up and found him holding his head in pain. "What happened?!"
"You kicked me!" Raye turned bright red and looked at the Darien who held Serena gingerly as she cried into his shoulder.
"Anyway, while where here Chad.. Why did you guys come screaming around that corner?" Ken rubbed his stiff neck as he looked at the couple with interest.
"Well ... we ... were looking for looking for the person.... And we found him.. or her.. we couldn't 'make out' who it was.. and they almost killed me, but hit the.. bed instead of Raye and me."
"Oh yeah it sounds like you were looking REAL hard for our killer!" Serena giggled as Raye turned bright red with embarrassment.
"Are you OK?" Mina walked up to Raye and placed a hand on her back.
"Yeah, I'll be fine...." Raye smiled weakly and looked at all her friends noticing that people were missing.. "Uhhh..... where did Liz and Andrew go?"
"We have no clue, and Greg snd Amy are still know shows..." Darien massaged his temples to help stop the throbbing pain in his head.
"SOMEONE HELP ME PLEASE!!!!" Amy wailed as she stumbled into Serena's arms Amy's body socked with pool water, rain and tears streaming from her eyes.
"AMY!" Serena screamed and held her friend tight. "Wh- what's wrong?!"
"The killer... The killers got Greg.." Amy collapsed very weak but was able to talk. "He-They killed him!"
"Oh my God Amy, I.. Oh Amy.." Serena held Amy tight and rocked her back and forth so she would calm down.
"Oh, God.. We're gonna die, I know it! We're gonna die!" Raye slide down on a wall her hand over her face.
"No we're not, we'll get out of here, we can make it out alive." Darien walked down the hallway a little bit and looked around the corner making sure know one was there.
"Do you mind, I've been trying to sleep for hours and haven't been able to get an ounce of sleep!" The front desk guy appeared in Darien face and he yelled at the top of his lungs running at top speeds to the group of people who screamed even louder. "My word! Do you have to be so loud?! God your acting as if there's a prowler in the building!" Darien breathed heavily holding his chest again hoping that he wouldn't collapse over dead.
"Uhhh... it's more like two killers, not a prowler...." Lita said, her nerves reaching there braking point.
"Ha ha, very funny like I would actually believe that there are two mass murders in the building hunting down people for pure pleasure!" The man shook his head and turned around only to have a knife be jabbed into his gut.
"Oppss, that was supposed to go into your back... Oh well you'll die anyway!" Liz smiled and Serena went stark white in fear.
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" They all screamed and ran down the stairs, Darien holding Serena's hand and Amy's tired body.
"Outside we might all have a chance, it's raining really hard and the wind is REALLY nasty but if we make it to the jungle path area we can hide!" Ken yelled and they Darien agreed they all followed Ken and Darien into the dark, rain drenched, shadowy woods like area.
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"Thanks sis, we've got them right where we want them!" Andrew smiled placing an arm around his sister and together they walked silently into the shadows of the storm.
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~*~ A mild cliff hanger! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Anyway.. Working on chapter 6 and I figure that there might be a chapter 7 and a 100% chance of an epilogue! ~*~
~*~ Thanks to John for not killing me when I showed him the description of: John the pool boy, and thanks to all my friends at TMS! This 100% includes JD, who also has THE BEST STORIES ON FANFICTION.NET!!! A MUST to read peoples! Her author name is :::Amberprincessa::: ~*~
~*~ Oh, and for a quick update, in school we're doing this thing where we have to write a story about the Titanic, and what do you know I get a story idea! I'll have to add this one to my summer list! I'll be writing my story idea for school, and that way it well keep the idea fresh in my mind and I wont fall asleep in class! Heh heh... I HATE ENGLISH! Only when we get free writes is it cool. Anyway sorry for the boring dribble I just had to get out of my mind! R&R, or E-mail me at: DuckQueen2150@aol.com ~*~
