Vegeta: Past and Future Redone

At first I was going to make this about Vegeta's quest to obtain a power level as high as Kakoratto's was when he absorbed the Dragonball's. Soon it turned into a sort of pain drama. I think that I may turn this into a kind of pain and revenge thing. I want to draw it out as long as possible but that depends on you the readers J remember I take advice of any sort. If you think I should add or take away something from the story or if you have input that would add something awesome to the story line then please send. I assure you that I read all email regarding my Fanfic. Also I would like to thank the creator Akira for his awesome creations (even is he does hate on Vegeta).

Remember that you to can be a part of this story if you wish. I am going to branch it off if you want to take the rains of any sub plots such as the Yamcha Witch story. You're a go as long as you point out that it is a sub-plot to this story and you get my approval (just to make sure it fits in with my somewhat wacky timeline).

Pain, torcher, hate, lust!

Let it end… Let me die!

Defiled, destroyed, dishonored!

Leave me alone… Just let me die!

Legendary? Me? No… no honor

Hate…hate…I hate you cold one!

My tail… doesn't…no… Pleasure

Please…don't do it…Pain… Hate

Vegeta looked at the young lady. She drew it all out of him, she was pulling at him that which he didn't wish to feel, Lust. The memories burn back into him, all his honor, his lose of innocence. He fell to his knees trembling like a small child and let out a scream as he tried to destroy his life. He stopped when he felt warm arms circle around him and pull him into soft mounds. His whole body felt her presence and desired it.

Slowly Vegeta looked up into those round blue eyes and he felt safe. He reached up and cupped the side of her face. She slowly descended toward his face and their lips touched. He felt like heaven was shining on him as if some momentous occasion was about to occur between him and this woman who was holding him. Tears burst out of his eyes as a sudden feeling of completeness surrounded his heart. It was perfect, but it didn't last long.

A door opened and someone gasped in horror. A blast hit Vegeta in the back knocking him forward and into the bed that he had just gotten out of. A Ki so large that it nearly left Vegeta in a state of shock billowed from the dark haired man.

"What the hell do you think you were doing freak! Bulma is mine!"

Vegeta looked up at the human male and grunted as he slowly made his way back up onto his feet. Looking over he saw the young woman with a look of shock on her face as if she did something evil and completely unforgivable. Tears rolled down her face falling soundlessly to the floor.

"Ya…Yamcha, I am so sorry. I didn't know… I don't understand why I did it. I love you! Please don't kill him!" Sobbing she dropped to her knees and grabbed Yamcha's leg.

Yamcha looked down with utter disgust. "I can't believe you did this to me Bulma. You know how hard I work to be faithful to you."

"Please, I won't let it happen again. Just don't kill him."

Something in Yamcha's head snapped. He knew this was coming, he knew because that witch told him. He knew that she would betray him again if he let her back in. So he kicked her across the room with a smirk.

"Do I look stupid to you Bulma?" Yamcha smiled as the mask of madness slowly descended over his eyes. "I was told about you from a witch. I didn't believe her then but I do now. She told me if I let you live that all the Saiya-jins would live through out all these battles."

Vegeta was slowly pulling power into his body trying to match the level that Yamcha was currently at, but he knew that that was pointless so he would just try and save the girl so he could know what real love making was like. He never felt like this unless someone was stroking his tail. It was driving him crazy, almost to the point that he nearly slipped into a daydream right in the middle of powering up.

Yamcha smirked at Vegeta's miniscule power level and through a explosive ball toward Vegeta with the intent to kill him. Instead the energy bomb stopped in mid-air and dissipated. Yamcha looked around to see what had caused his powers to disappear like that. He looked at Bulma who had a weird rifle in her hand that looked like it was from two or three hundred years in the future.

Bulma looked down at her little weapon with pride and then pointed it at Yamcha. "Let's see if you can handle your own power, Yamcha!"

The exact same energy ball blasted out of the weapon and at Yamcha. He threw out his hands to block the blast but it was too much for him and the bomb exploded taking the whole eastern wing that the lab occupied with it.

I think I need someone to help me with this story! If your interested in helping me write this please E-Mail me at rand@gibralter.net or danieloflorien@charter.net or daniellawson@hotmail.com

I need someone who is familiar with DBZ and a little about DBGT. I want to take this story in two directions and it is hard when I am at such a high Op Tempo..(meaning that most of my unit is going to fly to Cali for about two months…fortunately I am not going to that stupid shit…so I'll try and write some more. Any help you wish to give would be apreaciated!!!