Ok well like someone said in their review, the reader has no idea what is
going on. Well I meant it to be like that. It is called suspence. I will
tell what is going on in a later chapter. It all has to do with my story.
Will someone please tell me what a Mary sue is and why does everyone refer to it when there is a new character?
WHAT IS BEHIND THE MASK
CHAPTER 2
Jade walked through the hall, keeping an eye on the map so she wouldn't get lost. This was a very large school. She made her way to the dunguns. When she got there she bent down and spoke to the door-knob. (yes the door knob) "Excuse me, could you please open. I need something that is inside what you hold."
The door opened and Jade walked in. There were many things in jars that lined the walls. She walked slowly around untill she stoped at one jar. 'Jujubees' She took out three of what was in the jar. She swallowed one and put the other two in her pocket.
She walked out the door and bent down and spoke to the door-knob again. "lock so nobody can get in." a click was heard and the door locked.
Jade looked down at the map in her hands. She saw the dot that was her and another dot that looked about 20 feet from her. Jade walked about 10 feet and noticed the dot, Draco Malfoy, slowly follow.
She used another 'family trick' and became invisable. Slowly Draco Malfoy exited the shadows and looked around. Jade snuck up behind him and became visable again. She tapped his shoulder. Draco quickly turned around but it was Jade who spoke. "Don't follow me."
"What are you talking about girl?"
"I'm talking about, hmm, I see,. so that's why you were following me."
Draco's eyes opened wide. "I.I.don't know what you are talking about."
"Do I interest you?"
"No, what are you talking about you stupid, little, mudblood!"
Suddenly Jade's eyes turned fiery red and the silver streaks in her hair also turned red. "DON'T MAKE ME MAD!"
Draco stayed calm. "Why not you stupid mudblood, what are you going to do? Bitch slap me?"
"YOU'D BE SURPRISED!"
Suddenly Draco was pinned to the wall. Not being held by human hands. Jade walked up and spoke in a much calmer voice.
"I'm going to give you one warning Draco. Don't get on my bad side and don't lie. I know more about you than you think."
"I'm not afraid of you.'
"Your not? Well are you afrid of your father?"
Jade quickly turned into Lucius Malfoy. Draco began to tremble and Jade turned back. "As you can see, I can do more damage than you think. By the wa, I'm reluctunt to hurt such a cute face." Draco dropped off the wall and Jade walked away leaving him to stare after her.
She checked the map. Filch and Mrs Noris were patrolling the halls. She tapped the paper with her wand and said "Mischeif mannaged" She rolled up the now blank map and put it in her pocket. She slowly walked up to the Gryfindor common room checking around for teachers along the way.
"Harry! Here thanks it helped a lot."
"Err, your welcome, I think."
"What?"
"Your hair."
"Oh" Her hair turned back to silver and her eyes turned Royal blue.
Harry watched Jade go up to bed then he did the same.
~HarryPotterCC1~
So what do you think. I don't want you to know what is up with this girl just yet. You'll have to wait till the next chapter. Can you guess who the romance is between. If you haven't guessed yet I'll give you one hint.
There is a fine line between love and hate.
Please review. Give me your truthful opinion. If you don't like it fine I don't care but please tell me why. If you do like it tell me why you like it.
I also want to tell you that the character Jade is My character. I did not take her from another story. She is a reflection of me. My Attitude and my cool calmness in handleing it.. Like Jade would say. "Don't get on my bad side, you don't want me as an enemy."
Will someone please tell me what a Mary sue is and why does everyone refer to it when there is a new character?
WHAT IS BEHIND THE MASK
CHAPTER 2
Jade walked through the hall, keeping an eye on the map so she wouldn't get lost. This was a very large school. She made her way to the dunguns. When she got there she bent down and spoke to the door-knob. (yes the door knob) "Excuse me, could you please open. I need something that is inside what you hold."
The door opened and Jade walked in. There were many things in jars that lined the walls. She walked slowly around untill she stoped at one jar. 'Jujubees' She took out three of what was in the jar. She swallowed one and put the other two in her pocket.
She walked out the door and bent down and spoke to the door-knob again. "lock so nobody can get in." a click was heard and the door locked.
Jade looked down at the map in her hands. She saw the dot that was her and another dot that looked about 20 feet from her. Jade walked about 10 feet and noticed the dot, Draco Malfoy, slowly follow.
She used another 'family trick' and became invisable. Slowly Draco Malfoy exited the shadows and looked around. Jade snuck up behind him and became visable again. She tapped his shoulder. Draco quickly turned around but it was Jade who spoke. "Don't follow me."
"What are you talking about girl?"
"I'm talking about, hmm, I see,. so that's why you were following me."
Draco's eyes opened wide. "I.I.don't know what you are talking about."
"Do I interest you?"
"No, what are you talking about you stupid, little, mudblood!"
Suddenly Jade's eyes turned fiery red and the silver streaks in her hair also turned red. "DON'T MAKE ME MAD!"
Draco stayed calm. "Why not you stupid mudblood, what are you going to do? Bitch slap me?"
"YOU'D BE SURPRISED!"
Suddenly Draco was pinned to the wall. Not being held by human hands. Jade walked up and spoke in a much calmer voice.
"I'm going to give you one warning Draco. Don't get on my bad side and don't lie. I know more about you than you think."
"I'm not afraid of you.'
"Your not? Well are you afrid of your father?"
Jade quickly turned into Lucius Malfoy. Draco began to tremble and Jade turned back. "As you can see, I can do more damage than you think. By the wa, I'm reluctunt to hurt such a cute face." Draco dropped off the wall and Jade walked away leaving him to stare after her.
She checked the map. Filch and Mrs Noris were patrolling the halls. She tapped the paper with her wand and said "Mischeif mannaged" She rolled up the now blank map and put it in her pocket. She slowly walked up to the Gryfindor common room checking around for teachers along the way.
"Harry! Here thanks it helped a lot."
"Err, your welcome, I think."
"What?"
"Your hair."
"Oh" Her hair turned back to silver and her eyes turned Royal blue.
Harry watched Jade go up to bed then he did the same.
~HarryPotterCC1~
So what do you think. I don't want you to know what is up with this girl just yet. You'll have to wait till the next chapter. Can you guess who the romance is between. If you haven't guessed yet I'll give you one hint.
There is a fine line between love and hate.
Please review. Give me your truthful opinion. If you don't like it fine I don't care but please tell me why. If you do like it tell me why you like it.
I also want to tell you that the character Jade is My character. I did not take her from another story. She is a reflection of me. My Attitude and my cool calmness in handleing it.. Like Jade would say. "Don't get on my bad side, you don't want me as an enemy."
