Authors Note:
12-25-2001—Chapter 2
Merry x-mas, get a new chapter and lose an' old favorite, nice gift huh?
Ok well I was having a lot of "plot" issue's that I had to work out before the second chapter could be written, and also with the original copies of it I was having trouble writing out the content in it, I started over I think three times, so, sorry about the long wait. Actually Susan when I read your review I was inspired "Alright Mac, time to get your act together" so I sat down and wrote it. Thanks a lot to Yasai-chan for reading the painfully horrid original copies of the second chapter, and for all the tips she gave me on the best way to write certain things out. [oh and also for letting me put up the author's notes the way she does ^.^]
Oh for those of you who aren't sure who's who in the Oniwaban group, Shiro is
the guy with spiked wavy hair, Kuro is the bigger guy, Okon has the long flat
hair, and Omasu is the .. "other" female in the group. [don't ask me why but I
always wanted to put two of them together] I'm gonna try to get the next
chapter out a lot faster then this one since I now have a lot better idea of
what I'm doing.
12-31-2001 [for only a couple more hours ^,^] Chapter.. uh.. 4.. I think
Ok sorry for the loonnggg wait!! I've been, and am at Yasai-chan's house so I didn't get a chance to finish that chapter until today, hehe thanks for letting me use your computer ^.^ [hrm, seems kinda silly to write that seeing how I can just tell that to her… shrugs]
I'm likely to go a lot more for comedy now, as you can probably tell with the little Yahiko bit ^^ [I had so much fun writing that part of the story ^^] Oh, and I tried to make Kaoru really happy, but I just couldn't, them two together.. eh… [ah, sorry Susan, pleeasse keep reading my ficcie ^^`] Ok, well sorry if I sound whiney, but please review, I can't gloat to Yasai-chan unless I somehow get more then her…. And plus she refuses to review until I get 30 o' them y,y [oh thanks susan an' firuze for your reviews ^.^]
I doubt Yasai-chan will let me type on the computer again [I take awhile an' get easily distracted so its understandable ^^``] so I likely won't have another update until Saturday/Sunday, but I promise to get one out then ^.^
