~~~Disclaimer~~~ I do not own DBZ! Don't sue me!
~~~Authors Note~~~ This is based on the movie 10 Things I Hate About You.
Ok here it is.Goten lives with Gohan and his family. Gohan says that Goten
can't date until Pan does. WOW! Big suprise! Pan just happens to be the
school bitch. So Goten talks Trunks into takeing Pan out. So that Goten
can go out with Marron, but Bra has a crush on Goten. Pan has a crush on
Trunks, but she also has a reputation for being the hardest girl to get
in the whole school. My mind works in mysterious ways. And just a little
note Goten will be OOC for awhile.
The ages are as follows:
Pan = 16
Bra = 17
Goten = 18
Trunks = 18
Marron = 17
Everyone else = Who cares!
If you have a problem with these ages tell someone who cares. This is
my fic therefore I can do whatever I want. Oh and this is my first story
on Fanfiction so please I'm begging here, say it with me, REVIEW. Well on
with the story!
Title: Something so right.
AUTHOR Tsumeya Pataki
Chapter 1
THE SON HOME
WEDNESDAY NIGHT
"I'm going out!" Goten yells.
"You're WHAT!?" asks a very angry Gohan.
"Oh come on bro. I'm 18! Can't I date?" pleads Goten.
"No"
"I'm the only person who doesn't."
"That's not true. Pan doesn't date"
At the mention of her name Pan looks up from her place on the couch, where
she had been reading Pride and Prejudice. (Hey what can I say it's my
favorite.)"I don't what?" Pan asks calmly.
"Date." Gohan answers not looking away from Goten.
"Oh of course I don't" Pan says "Why would I?"
Goten stares at Pan in shock. He knew that she was weird but couldn't she
be just a little human. Then Goten says "Because it's normal" trying to
knock some sense into her even though he knows it's pointless.
"Says who?" Pan asks geting anoyed.
"Says me!" Goten says getting angry.
Videl had been calmly listening to the conversation, if you could call it
that, and decided that she might as well say something.
"Come now, Gohan, why won't you let Goten date? I can see no reason why he
shouldn't, can you?" she says trying to help Goten.
Gohan looks at Videl. Then Goten. Then back to his wife."FINE!" Gohan says,
"Goten can date..."
Goten cuts Gohan off."YES! Finally! Thank you so much Gohan!"
"I wasn't finshed." Gohan says.
Goten looks at his older brother,"You weren't?"
Gohan smiles,"No I wasn't. What I was going to say was that you can date,
Goten, when Pan does."
Goten stares horrified at Gohan. Then screams,"But my neice is a freak!
She'll never date!"
"Then you'll never date." Gohan smiles.
Goten turns to Pan,"Why can't you be normal?"
"Don't get me wrong Uncle Goten, I love you and all, but if I was normal
I wouldn't be able to make your life hell, now would I?" Pan questioned
with a smirk that looked way to much like Vegeta.
"You are all impossible, do you know that?" Goten yells as he storms up to
his room and slams the door.
Gohan walks across the living room and sits down next to his daughter."So
how was school today, sweetie?" he inquires.
"About as sitmulateing as a cardboard box." Pan answers.
"Well did you learn anything?",Videl asks her daughter sweetly.
"Yes. Every single one of my teachers reinforced the idea that they know
as much about teaching as they know about going SSJ.", Pan says before
she begins reading her book again.
"So basically it was a normal day." Gohan states.
"Basically." Pan smiles.
"Did you hurt anyone?" asks Videl.
"Phiscally or mentally?" Pan inquires.
"Either." Her mother answers.
"Well a guy did grab my ass at lunch..." Pan starts.
"A guy did WHAT?!" yells Gohan.
"Let me finish Daddy. After he did that I kicked him in the balls. I think
the nurse said the he'll have to have a testical retrival, but I can't be
sure." Pan says happily.
"That's my girl" Gohan says beaming.
"I'm going to bed now." Pan states getting up off the couch.
"Goodnight!" her parents say in unison.
Smileing Pan says goodnight to her parents and then climbs up the stairs to
her room, where she is confronted by Goten. "What do you want now?" she asks
becoming irritated.
"Did you kick Matt in the nuts?" he questions.
"Let me see," she says leaning against her door,"I did that so many times
today. What does he look like?"
"You know damn well what he looks like!", Goten says,"Now did you or didn't
you?"
"Why do you care?" Pan asks just to see Goten's reaction.
"Because people are going to ask questions. And their going to be asking me."
he says about to scream.
"Why do you even care what other people think? It's not like they'll play
apart in your life after you get out of this hell hole that they call
highschool." Pan states.
"Just answer me!" Goten yells.
"If I do will you go away?" she questions.
"YES!" he growls.
"In that case, yes I did kick him." she says before dissappearing into her
room and closeing the door on his face.
From her spot on her bed she could hear her uncle ranting and raving in the
hall about the fact that his niece is crazy and that she will never be
normal."How right you are uncle. How right you are." she wispers to herself
before falling asleep.
~~~Authors Note~~~ So what ya think? I know it was short. Was it any good?
Please send me any reviews even flames. I need the help. And lots of it.
~~~Authors Note~~~ This is based on the movie 10 Things I Hate About You.
Ok here it is.Goten lives with Gohan and his family. Gohan says that Goten
can't date until Pan does. WOW! Big suprise! Pan just happens to be the
school bitch. So Goten talks Trunks into takeing Pan out. So that Goten
can go out with Marron, but Bra has a crush on Goten. Pan has a crush on
Trunks, but she also has a reputation for being the hardest girl to get
in the whole school. My mind works in mysterious ways. And just a little
note Goten will be OOC for awhile.
The ages are as follows:
Pan = 16
Bra = 17
Goten = 18
Trunks = 18
Marron = 17
Everyone else = Who cares!
If you have a problem with these ages tell someone who cares. This is
my fic therefore I can do whatever I want. Oh and this is my first story
on Fanfiction so please I'm begging here, say it with me, REVIEW. Well on
with the story!
Title: Something so right.
AUTHOR Tsumeya Pataki
Chapter 1
THE SON HOME
WEDNESDAY NIGHT
"I'm going out!" Goten yells.
"You're WHAT!?" asks a very angry Gohan.
"Oh come on bro. I'm 18! Can't I date?" pleads Goten.
"No"
"I'm the only person who doesn't."
"That's not true. Pan doesn't date"
At the mention of her name Pan looks up from her place on the couch, where
she had been reading Pride and Prejudice. (Hey what can I say it's my
favorite.)"I don't what?" Pan asks calmly.
"Date." Gohan answers not looking away from Goten.
"Oh of course I don't" Pan says "Why would I?"
Goten stares at Pan in shock. He knew that she was weird but couldn't she
be just a little human. Then Goten says "Because it's normal" trying to
knock some sense into her even though he knows it's pointless.
"Says who?" Pan asks geting anoyed.
"Says me!" Goten says getting angry.
Videl had been calmly listening to the conversation, if you could call it
that, and decided that she might as well say something.
"Come now, Gohan, why won't you let Goten date? I can see no reason why he
shouldn't, can you?" she says trying to help Goten.
Gohan looks at Videl. Then Goten. Then back to his wife."FINE!" Gohan says,
"Goten can date..."
Goten cuts Gohan off."YES! Finally! Thank you so much Gohan!"
"I wasn't finshed." Gohan says.
Goten looks at his older brother,"You weren't?"
Gohan smiles,"No I wasn't. What I was going to say was that you can date,
Goten, when Pan does."
Goten stares horrified at Gohan. Then screams,"But my neice is a freak!
She'll never date!"
"Then you'll never date." Gohan smiles.
Goten turns to Pan,"Why can't you be normal?"
"Don't get me wrong Uncle Goten, I love you and all, but if I was normal
I wouldn't be able to make your life hell, now would I?" Pan questioned
with a smirk that looked way to much like Vegeta.
"You are all impossible, do you know that?" Goten yells as he storms up to
his room and slams the door.
Gohan walks across the living room and sits down next to his daughter."So
how was school today, sweetie?" he inquires.
"About as sitmulateing as a cardboard box." Pan answers.
"Well did you learn anything?",Videl asks her daughter sweetly.
"Yes. Every single one of my teachers reinforced the idea that they know
as much about teaching as they know about going SSJ.", Pan says before
she begins reading her book again.
"So basically it was a normal day." Gohan states.
"Basically." Pan smiles.
"Did you hurt anyone?" asks Videl.
"Phiscally or mentally?" Pan inquires.
"Either." Her mother answers.
"Well a guy did grab my ass at lunch..." Pan starts.
"A guy did WHAT?!" yells Gohan.
"Let me finish Daddy. After he did that I kicked him in the balls. I think
the nurse said the he'll have to have a testical retrival, but I can't be
sure." Pan says happily.
"That's my girl" Gohan says beaming.
"I'm going to bed now." Pan states getting up off the couch.
"Goodnight!" her parents say in unison.
Smileing Pan says goodnight to her parents and then climbs up the stairs to
her room, where she is confronted by Goten. "What do you want now?" she asks
becoming irritated.
"Did you kick Matt in the nuts?" he questions.
"Let me see," she says leaning against her door,"I did that so many times
today. What does he look like?"
"You know damn well what he looks like!", Goten says,"Now did you or didn't
you?"
"Why do you care?" Pan asks just to see Goten's reaction.
"Because people are going to ask questions. And their going to be asking me."
he says about to scream.
"Why do you even care what other people think? It's not like they'll play
apart in your life after you get out of this hell hole that they call
highschool." Pan states.
"Just answer me!" Goten yells.
"If I do will you go away?" she questions.
"YES!" he growls.
"In that case, yes I did kick him." she says before dissappearing into her
room and closeing the door on his face.
From her spot on her bed she could hear her uncle ranting and raving in the
hall about the fact that his niece is crazy and that she will never be
normal."How right you are uncle. How right you are." she wispers to herself
before falling asleep.
~~~Authors Note~~~ So what ya think? I know it was short. Was it any good?
Please send me any reviews even flames. I need the help. And lots of it.
