1 Past Reviews of the Demo Chapter
|Katherine aka Star |Date: |Ch: 1 |Anonymou| |(StarFire29@aol.com) |2002-01-01 | |s | |This was short, but good. I look forward to seeing this fic | |updated. Don't let people get to you about being 15 and liking | |Harry Potter, I'm 22 and I like it, along with many other things, | |wrestling, pokemon, yes pokemon. Dragon Ball, Dragon BallZ, | |Vampirer Hunter D, Wicked City, Batman Beyond, Lord of the rings | |and Star Wars. Just remember fanfic writers like you who post your | |work rule. | |Dalaina () |Date: |Ch: 1 |Anonymou| | |2002-01-01 | |s | |WOOOHOOO BACON ROCKS!!! YAH!!!! |
Thank you for these kind words, as this will motivate me to write more.
Past Strikes The Present
Malfoy quietly twiddled his thumbs as he reached the train station.
'Malfoy, I expect you to win the House Cup, also trash that brat Potter to pieces. I will not accept failure, understood?' spoke his father.
'Yes father.' Malfoy quietly responded. He remembered this from last year when Malfoy failed to beat Harry. As they reached the Train Station, he exited the car without a simple goodbye. He looked as he heard Crabbe and Goyle.
'Shit.' he chanted. He didn't like his old friends any longer, since he doesn't like to cause pain and sorrow. He quickly ran to hide and headed for 9 and three quarters.
'Malfoy!!! Where Are You?' Goyle Shouted. Malfoy quickly grabbed his trunk and loaded it and sneaked his wand in his pocket for emergency uses. He boarded the train and saw his ex (His Perspective) nemesis.
'Hello Potter'. Malfoy started.
'Hello Malfoy'. He Replied. The only thing peculiar about this room, that Ron wasn't with them, when. SMACK!!!!
Malfoy held his damaged cheek as Harry and Hermoine held Ron back.
'Ron, control yourself!' As Harry desperately tried to extinguish his anger.
Malfoy held up his wand, Harry slowly backed away while Malfoy muttered 'Sumirius'. A glowing light surrounded Malfoy in a few seconds. Then the light disappeared without trace, exactly like his bruise on he had a few moments ago. Malfoy slowly turned to Ron and clearly said.
'I'm sorry for what I did to you.'
Ron stared; his rage immediately disappeared and had a confused look on his face. Malfoy offered a hand pointed to Ron's chest. Ron looked at Malfoy, then looked at his offered hand, then quickly turned to Malfoy again. Harry and Hermoine were stunned; Malfoy had no evil face, only a serious face that only revealed a frown, not a smile. Ron cautiously raised his hand and accepted the offer.
'What the fuck's going on?' Ron said.
'I've changed Weasley, I simply changed.' Malfoy replied.
To Be Continued.
Please Review!!!!
|Katherine aka Star |Date: |Ch: 1 |Anonymou| |(StarFire29@aol.com) |2002-01-01 | |s | |This was short, but good. I look forward to seeing this fic | |updated. Don't let people get to you about being 15 and liking | |Harry Potter, I'm 22 and I like it, along with many other things, | |wrestling, pokemon, yes pokemon. Dragon Ball, Dragon BallZ, | |Vampirer Hunter D, Wicked City, Batman Beyond, Lord of the rings | |and Star Wars. Just remember fanfic writers like you who post your | |work rule. | |Dalaina () |Date: |Ch: 1 |Anonymou| | |2002-01-01 | |s | |WOOOHOOO BACON ROCKS!!! YAH!!!! |
Thank you for these kind words, as this will motivate me to write more.
Past Strikes The Present
Malfoy quietly twiddled his thumbs as he reached the train station.
'Malfoy, I expect you to win the House Cup, also trash that brat Potter to pieces. I will not accept failure, understood?' spoke his father.
'Yes father.' Malfoy quietly responded. He remembered this from last year when Malfoy failed to beat Harry. As they reached the Train Station, he exited the car without a simple goodbye. He looked as he heard Crabbe and Goyle.
'Shit.' he chanted. He didn't like his old friends any longer, since he doesn't like to cause pain and sorrow. He quickly ran to hide and headed for 9 and three quarters.
'Malfoy!!! Where Are You?' Goyle Shouted. Malfoy quickly grabbed his trunk and loaded it and sneaked his wand in his pocket for emergency uses. He boarded the train and saw his ex (His Perspective) nemesis.
'Hello Potter'. Malfoy started.
'Hello Malfoy'. He Replied. The only thing peculiar about this room, that Ron wasn't with them, when. SMACK!!!!
Malfoy held his damaged cheek as Harry and Hermoine held Ron back.
'Ron, control yourself!' As Harry desperately tried to extinguish his anger.
Malfoy held up his wand, Harry slowly backed away while Malfoy muttered 'Sumirius'. A glowing light surrounded Malfoy in a few seconds. Then the light disappeared without trace, exactly like his bruise on he had a few moments ago. Malfoy slowly turned to Ron and clearly said.
'I'm sorry for what I did to you.'
Ron stared; his rage immediately disappeared and had a confused look on his face. Malfoy offered a hand pointed to Ron's chest. Ron looked at Malfoy, then looked at his offered hand, then quickly turned to Malfoy again. Harry and Hermoine were stunned; Malfoy had no evil face, only a serious face that only revealed a frown, not a smile. Ron cautiously raised his hand and accepted the offer.
'What the fuck's going on?' Ron said.
'I've changed Weasley, I simply changed.' Malfoy replied.
To Be Continued.
Please Review!!!!
