I got a new form on this story now! It's gonna be block style!

(This means the character is mumbling).

This writing means that I'm explaining things. This means that the character is thinking.

There we go. I'm hoping now I'll get good reviews!

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          Max wore a black long sleeve shirt, green pants, Combat boots, Shoulder pads with spikes, and a sheath for his sword. He had gray eyes, gray pointy hair, and loved to battle.

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          Max walked away quickly and headed up the trees roots.

Vivi- What's he talking about Zidane?

Zidane- Nobody knows…

Freya- Let's catch up with him, because Quina looks like she's going to eat me.

Quina- Me soooooo hungry!!!!!!!

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Max- Maybe I should just tell them what happened…but they wouldn't understand me. Poor Aeris…now she's dead.

Just then Max got into a fight with a sand golem.

Max- Why do these things get in my way? They are no match for me.

Max leapt in the air and sliced down on the jewel in the center of it. Then it melted away.

Max- Like I said, no match.

Max arrived at Cleyra's town and went to the inn.

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Zidane-GOD?! WHY ARE THESE THINGS SO HARD?!

Then Sand Golem punched him doing lots of damage.

Then Quina used one of her abilities to cure Zidane.

Quina- White Wind!

Vivi- Fire!

Ohhh boy…That was tough, said Zidane as it melted away.

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Max- Where are those faggots? I've been waitin' in this damn hotel for 15 minutes! God Damnit!

Zidane, Vivi, Quina, and Freya walked in to the inn(HAHA! I made a funny!)

Zidane- Sorry we took so long. We had a fight with one of those sand monsters.

Max- (What a freakin' moron…damn he's weak!).

Zidane- What Max?

Max- sigh…Nuthin.

Freya- I have to see their head council.

Vivi- Have fun!!

In a moments time, she was gone.

Quina- Me go find yummy-yummies.

In a moments time, she too was gone.

Vivi- I'm going to look around too. Cya!

Zidane- Me too.

Max- And I'm not important?

Zidane- Nope. Cya!

I know that was short, but I have writers block disease. Tell me what you think about the story so far! Oh yeah, tell me what type of style I should use too. This one or the last one. Thanx!