Muggle Movies
Ron: Trevor. You shouldn't be here.
Neville: (appearing from chair) Neither should you. You're going out again, aren't you?
MALFOY: Stupid toad. Where am I now?
HERMIONE: You won't be in it 'til the end now.
MALFOY: (sadly) Oh. (perking up) Will you be in it?
HERMIONE: Yes, of course. My moment to shine is coming up. During the Devil's Snare and Potions chamber.
MALFOY: (confused, obviously has no idea what she is talking about) Oh. Okay.
Neville:.....I'll fight you.
MALFOY: (snickering) Haha. Yeah right. Longbottom stop the Almighty Potter trio.
Hermione: I'm really sorry about this, Neville. Pertrificus Totalus.
Neville goes stiff as a board and falls down.
MALFOY: Ouch.
Ron: You're really scary, you know that? Brilliant, but scary.
MALFOY: How very true, Weasley.
HERMIONE: (blushing) Thank you.
MALFOY: Don't mention it.
Ron: It's for your own good, you know.
RON: I don't think I said that.
HARRY: Shhhhh.
MALFOY: It IS for his own good.
HARRY: Shhhhh.
Hermione: (walking with H & R in invisibility cloak) Ouch! That's my foot!
MALFOY: Weasley! Get off her foot!
RON: (shaking head and giving him odd look) I'm not on her foot.
Hermione: Alohomora.
MALFOY: Can you teach me that, Granger?
HERMIONE: (surprised) Sure.
Three of them step into Fluffy's 'chamber'. Harp is playing, Fluffy is fast asleep.
Someone (don't remember who): He's snoring.
Invisibility cloack is thrown off them with burst of Fluffy's snore. Trio are now fully visible.
Hermione: Snape must have put a spell on the harp.
SNAPE: I did no such thing!
HERMIONE: It wasn't even a harp! Well, it was, but the harp was on the ground. It wasn't playing. Harry had to play the flute to get him to sleep.
Harry: We've got to move his paw.
MALFOY: (sarcastically) Good one, Potter.
Ron, Harry and Hermione move Fluffy's paw from the trap door. Then pull it open.
The three of them peer down it but see nothing because it is very dark.
MALFOY: It's really quiet. All of a sudden.
Fluffy's eye opens and it looks around.
MALFOY: Oh no! Jump, Granger! Jump!
HERMIONE: I'm going to! Quiet down!
They all jump, just in time. Ron is last to land. On the Devil's Snare.
Ron: Lucky this plant thing's here, really.
MALFOY: Lucky!? Ha!
HARRY: The Devil's Snare didn't really look like that.
HERMIONE: It did...mostly.
Devil's Snare starts to coil around them. Harry and Ron are fighting it....well trying to anyway.
Hermione: I know what this is! It's Devil's Snare!
HERMOINE: Yes, me! Now conjure some fire and get outta there!
Ron is now jumping up and down in his seat again. He is looking anxious.
HERMIONE: But there's no wood!
RON: Are you a witch or not!?
HERMIONE: Oh right!
MALFOY: Be quiet! You're not even saying that.
RON: WHAT? But that's my best line! They cut it?!
Hermione gives them a sorrowfull look and disappears, going downward.
Ron: HERMIONE!
MALFOY: (quietly) Oh no.
Harry stops moving and he too is dropped down below.
Ron: HARRY! (Devil's Snare coils around his mouth. His shouts are muffled)
Hermione: (to Harry, down below Ron) He's not relaxing is he?
HERMIONE: (baffled) Relaxing? What?
Harry: Apparantly not.
Hermione: I remember reading about this in Herbology! Devil's Snare...Devil's Snare is not so much fun....but it crumbles in the sun! (I know this line is wrong, but I can't remember it word for word) Devil's Snare hates sun light! (some spell I can't remember)
Ron falls down and lands beside Harry.
HERMIONE: (livid) I didn't say anything about it not liking sun! It doesn't like FIRE! FIRE!!
Ron: Lucky we didn't panic.
MALFOY: AHAHAHAHAHAHA! You did panic, Weasley!
HARRY: It's meant to be an ironic statement, Malfoy.
Harry: Lucky Hermione pays attention in Herbology.
MALFOY: What's next?
HARRY: A bit keen, aren't you?
MALFOY: You're not? Don't you think Granger's hot?
HARRY: Screen Hermione or real Hermione.
MALFOY: (looks back and forth between screen and Hermione) Both.
HARRY: No comment.
RON: I agree with Malfoy. (blushes very red)
McGONAGALL & SNAPE: What?
MALFOY: (nonchalantly) He said he agreed with me.
SNAPE: Are you all right, Weasley?
RON: (surprised he's asking) Yes, I'm fine.
Flying Key Chamber. Keys are buzzing all around.
Hermione: Funny, I've never seen birds like these before. (Birds, to me, sounds like bugs -when she says it- but I'm pretty sure it's birds.)
Harry: Those aren't birds. They're keys.
MALFOY: Try Alohomora on the door, Granger!
Ron tries Alohomora on the door.
MALFOY: (angrily, to real Ron) I said Granger!
RON: (puts his hands in the air) I'm sorry! It wasn't me! It was that Rupert fellow!
HERMIONE: (off handedly) Grint. Rupert Grint.
HARRY: Bond. James Bond
Hermoine and Harry laugh quietly. Dumbledore chuckles.
MALFOY: What?
DUMBLEDORE: Maybe Miss Granger's right. Maybe you should all take Muggle Studies.
SNAPE: (to Dumbledore) That joke is getting very old. (to Harry) Your's too.
Harry: (running hand along broom) It's too easy.
MALFOY: It DOES look rather easy.
HARRY: That's not how it happened. We all got brooms and we took off after a brass one...not a rusted one.
Keys begin to attack Harry as he gets on broom.
HARRY: Those things are attacking me! They didn't do that!
DUMBLEDORE: You better add that to your essay, Harry.
HARRY: (to Hermione) Can I borrow a piece of parchment?
HERMIONE: (clutching onto her notebook like a lifeline) No.
(A/N: I realize that the Hogwarts crew do not have notebooks, but for the purpose of this, they do.)
Harry goes back to the movie, but not before catching a glimpse of the cover of Hermione's notebook. It was filled with black ink on every inch. It says things like 'HG + SB' and 'HG + DM'.
Harry taps Malfoy on the shoulder. Malfoy turns to look at him as screen Harry throws Hermione the key.
HARRY: I think you were right about her, Malfoy. She's got the hots for you.
MALFOY: (grinning) Excellent.
HERMOINE: (hasn't been listening to them) What happened the troll?
MALFOY: You got him a while ago.
HERMOINE: No, the troll in the chamber. That was already knocked out.
HARRY: Must have cut it.
HERMIONE: (shrugs) Oh.
RON: SHHHHHH! The chess scene! My scene!
Ron: ....I'll be a knight.
MALFOY: (sounding like a girl) Oh, a brave knight!
RON: Shut up, Malfoy. This is MY moment. You had your's.
MALFOY: When?
RON: Oh I don't know. Just stuff it.
Hermione: You don't think this will be like real wizard's chess. Do you?
Ron sends a chess piece to a square where it is beaten to a pulp. (A/N: I am not a chess player, so I don't pretend to know any of these chess terms, lol)
Ron: Yes, Hermione. I think it'll be exactly like Wizard's chess.
RON: It was too. Very scary.
MALFOY: (excited) Are you going to pee your pants?
RON: No.
MALFOY: Too bad. (looking around at the pieces) Those things are scary looking.
HARRY: Very.
A bunch of pieces get killed and pretty soon Harry is left looking around and coming to his senses.
Harry: No!
Ron: You understand, Harry, that when I make MY move, the Queen will take me.
Hermione: What's going on?
Harry: He's going to sacrifice himself.
Hermione: No, you can't!
Ron: Do you want to stop Snape getting the stone or not? It's you that has to go on, Harry. Not me, not Hermione....YOU. When I make my move, it'll leave you free to check the king.
(says Knight to E5 or something like that)
HERMIONE: I wish they'd have changed this. I don't want to see Ron get killed.
MALFOY: (getting excited at the prospect of a death) He gets killed?
HERMOINE: Well....no.
MALFOY: (sadly) Oh.
Hermione buries her head in Harry's shoulder as Ron bravely moves himself forward on the screen.
MALFOY: Granger....(hisses) Granger!
HERMOINE: (peeking up from Harry's shirt) What?
MALFOY: (grinning) You can come sit in my lap. I'll comfort you.
HERMOINE: (Thinks about this.) No thanks. Some other time. (buries head in Harry's shirt again.)
Whatever that chess piece is, charges it's thing (sword maybe) at Ron's knight and Ron falls.
Hermione screams and tries to move towards him.
Harry: No! Stay where you are! Remember, we're still playing.
Hermione nodds and gets back in her place.
HARRY: Was I that mean to you?
HERMIONE: I really don't remember. (looks back at screen.)
RON: Did it look that bad? I look like I'm dead.
HERMIONE: It was worse.
RON: Well, at least I was brave. (puffs out his chest pompously) I'm proud of myself.
MALFOY: Oh, put a cork in it, Weasley.
HERMOINE: (anxiously) Here comes my greatest scene!
SNAPE: And my greatest logic problem ever!
Harry: You stay here and help Ron. Then you two go up to the owlery and send an owl to Dumbledore. Ron's right. I have to go ahead, alone.
HERMIONE: What are you talking about? We haven't done the Potions!
Hermione: You'll be fine. You're a great wizard, Harry.
HERMIONE: What am I saying?! This is too early! Go into the next chamber!
Harry: Not as good as you.
Hermione: (laughs a little) Me? Books and cleverness. There are more important things. Like friendship and bravery.
HERMIONE: (slowly and quietly) We don't say that stuff 'til after the Potions.
HARRY: (getting worried) Yeah.....
Hermione: And Harry? Just be careful.
HERMOINE: NO ME! Get up and go into the next chamber! It's time to show how clever you really are! Go defeat Snape's logic problem!
Harry is walking slowly into the next chamber. Weird music begins to play. Whispers can be heard.
HERMOINE: (getting really angry) Whoa, whoa, whoa!! Where is my scene! They cut my scene!
SNAPE: (sitting up taller) They cut my logic!!! They cut my logic!!!!
HERMIONE: (looking at Snape) I'm leaving! I'm not standing for this! They just can't CUT MY SCENE! That was my BEST WORK!
SNAPE: Well, how do you think I feel? That showed how really logical I am! No one will know, now!
HERMOINE: No one will know how clever I was in that scene. I did wonderfully! (getting angrier) Those---those-----
MALFOY: Hermione? (notice he called her by her name) Calm down....
HERMIONE: CALM DOWN! THEY DIDN'T CUT YOUR SCENE!
Hermione's face is really red. She stands up and goes into the isle. No one is paying attention to what's going on. They are all watching the screen. Rest of the audience included.
HERMIONE: I'm writing to this....this...FILM!
Suddenly Hermione's face gets really white. She falls to the ground in a crumpled heap. Malfoy rushes to her, picks her up and carries her out of the theater.
RON: Is she all right?
HARRY: Yeah, she's fine. She'll be back.
RON: Well, what happened to her?
HARRY: (shrugging) I don't know. Passed out from all the anger I suppose.
Harry: You.
Quirrell: Yes, me.
Harry: But---Snape---
Quirrell: Yes, he does seem the type, doesn't he?
Harry: He was trying to kill me....
Quirrell: No, dear boy, I tried to kill you! And I would have succeeded it he hadn't been muttering his counter curse!
RON: He's scary.
HARRY: You're telling me?
RON: (shrugs) Nevermind.
Voldemort's Voice: Use the boy!
Quirrell: Come here, POTTER!
Harry steps forward looking on the verge of passing out.
Quirrell: What do you see?
Harry is watching himself in the mirror. Harry's mirror self winks at him as the stone drops into his pocket.
Harry: I see me....I've won the Quidditch Cup.
Voldemort's Voice: He lies!
Quirrell: Tell the truth!
Voldemort's Voice: Let me speak to him.
Quirrell: No, Master! You are not strong enough!
Voldemort: I have enough strength...for this.
Quirrell begins to unravel his turban. Harry is looking around, scared.
DUMBLEDORE: Hang in there, Mr. Weasley.
Ron has gone rather green and is sitting very low in his seat.
Volemort's face protrudes from Quirrell's head.
RON: (scared and surprised) Voldemort!
Ron sinks down into his seat, onto the floor. He has passed out.
Dumbledore, keen to see the rest of the movie, conjures a nice comfy pillow for Ron's head to rest on. Ron has enough room to lay because the people who HAD been sitting next to him, moved to the other side of the theater way back at the Quidditch match. Harry seems undisturbed by Ron being on the ground. Snape, Pansy and McGonagall have not witnessed anything. They are giving all their attention to the movie.
Voldemort: Harry...Potter.
Harry: (disbelieving) Voldemort?
Voldemort: (hissing type voice) Yes.
Malfoy and Hermione return. She is holding onto his hand and muttering something under her breath.
HERMIONE: My scene...cut....my scene, my greatest scene cut......
Malfoy sits in Hermione's vacated seat, careful to tread only a little on Ron's face as he sits. Hermoine sits in his lap, her head on his shoulder.
PANSY: (noticing they're back.) Hermione! It's Sean!
Hermione's head snaps up.
HERMOINE: (seeing screen.) Voldemort!?
PANSY: Draco, what is she doing on your lap!?
MALFOY: (shrugs, puts arm around Hermione.) She might pass out again.
PANSY: So let her!
MALFOY: Can't. The Weasle is on the floor. (to Harry) Did he pass out?
HARRY: (looken very shaken) Yes, when Voldemort's head came out of Quirrell.
MALFOY: (shocked) What?
HERMIONE: Just watch, Drac!
Harry's parents's faces vanish from the Mirror of Erised.
SNAPE: (quietly, to himself) No, let me see more. I want to see her again...just once....(sees that Harry is trying to hear him. He stops muttering and stares at the screen with an icey expression on his face.
Harry: Liar!!!
DUMBLEDORE: Well chosen words, Harry.
HARRY: I don't even remember him offering to help me get my parents back.
HERMIONE: I don't think he did.
HARRY: (to Hermione) Are you all right now?
HERMIONE: (looks at Draco.) Yes.
HARRY: (gives her odd look and turns back to screen.) Oookayyy.
Harry is being choked by Quirrell. He is reaching for the stone.
McGONAGALL: Get the stone, Potter! Reach!
Harry puts hand on Quirrell's hand, hoping to pry him off. Quirrell backs away, in shock, holding his hand. It begins to crumble.
Quirrell: What is this magic?
HARRY: (shaking head) He never said that. His face didn't crumble like that either. He got red boils. I think. I passed out so I can't remember correctly.
DUMBLEDORE: (in a fatherly voice.) Understandable.
Harry springs up and puts his hands on Quirrell's face. Quirrell's face crumbles before their eyes.
HERMIONE: Ewwww! (buries head in Malfoy's shoulder.)
MALFOY: (grinning) I'll tell you when it's over.
Harry picks up stone. Voldemort raises from Quirrell's ashes.
HARRY: (eyes very wide with shock) Oh my God, that never happenened. Or maybe it did. I WAS passed out by then I think.
Harry: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
Voldemort's 'wispy' self goes through Harry. Harry falls, the stone still in his bloody hand.
HERMIONE: That was a really good scream. Good acting, Daniel.
MALFOY: Any old git can scream.
Hermione ignores him. She seems to be coming back to her senses.
Harry wakes up in hospital wing and puts his glasses on, smiling.
MALFOY: (being Harry) I'm alive! And I've got sweets!!!!! Wooo!!! I should kill Voldemort more often!
HARRY: (glares) You're just jealous.
Ron stirs and awakes, slipping into his seat looking very embarrassed.
RON: You're alive! (hugs Harry) I'm so glad!
DUMBLEDORE: Are you all right, Mr. Weasley?
RON: (blushing) Yes, thanks.
Dumbledore: What happened between you and Professor Quirrell in the dungeons is a complete secret...so natrually the whole school knows.
MALFOY: (chuckling) That was a good line, sir.
DUMBLEDORE: Thank you.
HERMIONE: What happened to Quirrell?
HARRY: You know, I told you and you're read the books.
HERMIONE: But what happened in the MOVIE?
HARRY: (sighing) Quirrell's face got all crumbly when I touched him and he died...going into ashes. Then Voldemort rose from the ashes----
RON: (hissing) Don't say the name!
MALFOY: Shut up, Weasley. I want to hear this.
HARRY: ---and he charged me as a whispy sort of smoke thing. I screamed and fell and he disappeared. Then I woke up.
MALFOY: It was a dream?
HARRY: No, I was unconscious and then I woke up in the hospital wing.
MALFOY: (sadly) Oh.
HERMIONE: Was my scene ever on?
HARRY: Er----no. Sorry.
HERMIONE: (shrugging and standing up) That's okay. Malfoy, get up and go back to your seat.
MALFOY: (looking at her with a pained expression on his face.) But I thought you liked me?
HERMIONE: (blushing) No, move.
MALFOY: (angrily, turning back to his old self) Granger!
HERMIONE: MOVE.
SNAPE: Move, Malfoy.
Dumbledore: (at end of year feast) Yes, well done, Slytherin. Well done Slytherin.
MALFOY: Old coot. (sits in seat sulkilly. Pansy wraps her arms around him.)
Dumbledore: However. I have some last minute points to award.
MALFOY: I HATE this part.
RON: SHHHHHHHH!
Dumbledore: To Miss Hermione Granger for cleverness while under pressure. I award 50 points to Gryffindor.(A/N: I don't remember this part exactly so most of it is wrong, but I don't care.)
Hermoine smiles happily.
MALFOY: You are hot, Granger.
HERMIONE: (sighing) Oh all right! You are too! You happy?
MALFOY: (grinning) Very.
PANSY: There's Sean!!!
HERMIONE: WHERE?
PANSY: THERE!
HERMOINE: MISSED HIM!
PANSY: Too bad!
Dumbledore: To Mr. Ronald Weasley for the best played game of Chess Hogwarts has seen in many years. 50 points.
Ron: (mouthing) Me?
Harry: (mouthing back) You!
MALFOY: Geeks.
Dumbledore: And to Mr. Harry Potter.....
MALFOY: Here it comes.
HERMIONE: Be quiet, Drac! You're going to be on in a second!
MALFOY: I am! Woo!
Dumbledore: I award Gryffindor House 60 points.
Hermione: (whispering) We're tied with Slytherin!
Fred and George look very surprised.
MALFOY: Not much for math, your brothers, eh, Weasley?
RON: Oh, sod off.
Dumbledore: Finally, to Mr. Neville Longbottom for it takes a lot of courage to stand up to your enemies, but even more to stand up to your friends. I award Gryffindor House 10 points.
Neville is speechless with joy.
MALFOY: You know, he doesn't look much like Longbottom.
HERMIONE: No, not really.
Dumbledore: So, we need a change of decoration.
He claps his hands and green and silver Slytherin flags change to red and gold Gryffindor flags.
Malfoy throws down his hat as the rest of the students (minus rest of Slytherins) throw their's into the air.
RON: Poor little Malfoy. He lost...too, too bad.
HARRY: We never threw our hats.
HERMIONE: It doesn't matter. We won!
MALFOY: (sighing) What was the point of us reliving the horrible memory of loosing?
DUMBLEDORE: (wisely) You seem to have made some friends out of it, Mr. Malfoy. (he glances at Hermione who blushes)
Hagrid: Thought you'd get away without saying goodbye, eh?
Reaches into pocket and extracts large photo album. Hands it to Harry. Harry opens it and sees a picture of his parents and him as a baby. It is snowing and his parents are smiling. He is smiling too.
Snape, in spite of himself, smiles happily at the image of Lily on the screen. She looks so happy. Tears well up in his eyes again but he does not let them fall. He wonders who this actress is that plays her. They look so much alike it's scary.
Harry: (with sort of tears in his eyes) Thanks, Hagrid.
MALFOY: Oh no, Potter! Don't cry!
Harry and Hagrid hug. Harry makes his way back to Ron and Hermione.
Hermione: It seems odd to be going home, doesn't it?
Harry: I'm not going home. Not really.
Harry gets on the train, shutting door behind him.
Hagrid waves goodbye to him. Harry waves from window.
MALFOY: (pretending to cry) How sweet! (wipes pretend tears from eyes) You were wonderful, Potter!
Lights in theater go up and people start to leave. The Hogwarts crew stays put.
DUMBLEDORE: Well?
RON: It was great! I was wonderful! (reminicent) The chess scene was wicked!
HARRY: (nodding) It was good. There were only a few things I would have changed.
HERMIONE: LIKE MY SCENE!
MALFOY: Just write to them and complain. Or send a Howler. That'll get their attention.
SNAPE: I liked it.
McGONAGALL: (clearly shocked) You did?
SNAPE: I was rather good and it was nice to see how Potter's been breaking rules all his life.
DUMBLEDORE: (fondly) Oh, Severus. (chuckles) Minerva?
McGONAGALL: It was good.
DUMBLEDORE: Miss Granger? Apart from your scene being cut, do you think they left anything else out?
HERMIONE: No, not really. It was very good. Most of it.
DUMBLEDORE: Miss Parkinson?
PANSY: I wasn't in it.
HARRY: We didn't have anything to do with you first year.
PANSY: Oh. Well, I liked Draco's parts.
DUMBLEDORE: Mr. Malfoy? What did you think?
MALFOY: (reluctantly) It was okay. I liked Granger's parts. That actron or whatever it's called was good.
HERMIONE: (angrily) If it were really ME up there, you wouldn't have liked it? It's ACTRESS by the way.
MALFOY: (shrugs) I don't know, Granger. I suppose I would have liked it more.
HERMIONE: (blushes and grins) Oh.
Cleaning crew comes in with brooms. The rest of the audience has vacated but not before shooting the HP crew nasty looks as they passed. Malfoy did his wonderful sneer at every single one of them.
MALFOY: (motioning towards a broom nearby which was being held by a girl no older than 18. She was staring at him with great interest.) Let's grab one of those and fly home.
McGONAGALL: Those are Muggle brooms, Mr. Malfoy.
Everyone then stands up and they all follow Dumbledore out of the theater.
RON: (now out on the street and walking toward the portkey that got them there) Do you think they'll do the second year?
HERMIONE: I hope so....but only as long Sean Biggerstaff is in it.
PANSY: Ditto.
MALFOY: What about me?
HERMIONE: Tom Felton. It'll be good with Tom Felton.
PANSY: Ditto.
SNAPE: When should their essays be in, Professor?
DUMBLEDORE: By the end of the week, I'd say.
Ron and Harry roll their eyes at each other. They know Hermione will insist they do their's the second they get back to the common room.
A little girl and her mother pass by them. The mother gives Dumbledore an odd look (eyes lingering on his long beard) and the little girl squeals with delight.
GIRL: Harry Potter!
MOTHER: No, honey. That can't be Harry Potter. He's fictional.
Malfoy laughs quietly. Harry shoots him a look.
MALFOY: So, Granger....want to discuss this further?
HERMIONE: Discuss what further?
MALFOY: What we were talking about in the bathroom after you passed out and I threw water on you.
HERMIONE: Oh....(blushes)...that.
MALFOY: (falls behind rest of group and stops Hermione) Yes....that.
HERMIONE: (shrugs) We'll see.
RON: (to Harry) What're they talking about?
HARRY: I don't know Ron.
DUMBLEDORE: Hurry up, children!
They are now in an alley. Dumbledore had his forefinger on a battered looking grocery bag. Snape, McGonagall and Pansy were crowded around it as well.
HARRY: (looking at his watch) 3 seconds.
Harry, Ron, Hermione and Malfoy all put one finger on the bag and suddenly they vanish from the street. They land, rather roughly, in Dumbledore's office seconds later.
DUMBLEDORE: Well, that was fun. Everyone off to bed. You can tell your class mates about the movie in the morning. Off you go, now.
Hermione, Harry, Ron, Pansy and Malfoy exit.
SNAPE: (calling after them) Hand your essays into me by MONDAY! No later, Potter!!! Just because you're now known in the Muggle world, does not mean you are exempt from homework!!!
HARRY: (sighing) Nothing ever changes does it.
RON: (looking at Hermione and Malfoy who are talking in low voices) Some things do.
The End.
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Did you like it? Hate it? Let me know! If I've left a scene out that you really would like to see, email me or review and tell me. I'll do my best to add it in.
Please don't flame me for not telling you what went on between Hermione and Malfoy in the bathroom. I've left it up to your imagination! But, just in case you're going to curse me or something, I'll put up two different senarios by next week as a last chapter to this. You can choose which one you like better :)
Thanks to the Reviewers:
Miriam - Thanks for all your comments! The students didn't bring parchment with them, just Hermione did. I should have said that probably, but I didn't. I actually didn't think about there being on one Quidditch game, but I'm going to add that in another chapter. The 'post movie' chapter later. Thanks for outlining the chess pieces. Snape said that the way he did because I wanted him to OOC in that particular part. I was going for the adolescent need to prove himself actually. Thanks about Harry getting 60 points, I thought he got 50. I agree completely about your Hermione/Draco thing. JKR will not get anyone into a big romance until 7th year at least. I know they can't apparate to Hogwarts. I think I actually said that in the first chapter. I sort of did that just because I thought it would be funny. I imagined, and I should have said, that they arranged Dumbledore's office to be a place of apparation for just that little bit.
Ali, summersun, iamtheanonymous, Beth the Fox, and Harriet Weasley. Thanks for your reviews, guys!
ender - I'm so glad you think that about my portraying Ron correctly. I was kind of afraid that they were all really out of character, but that was how I saw him too, reacting to the movie. Thanks for the review!
Elizabeth - You're going a fifth! I'm jealous! I don't have a Snape addiction, I have an Oliver Wood addiction but I love everyone really lol. Thanks for the review!
Asteria - Thanks for the suggestion. I may do that in the future.
evvy - I don't drool over Draco either, but I just thought it would add a nice touch to this story, lol. I did comment on that scene, I just had to after you mentioned it because that is one of the best lines in the book! I was upset they cut the Potions scene too and so was Hermione in this fic. Thanks for the review!
Constantine1453 - Thank you! I hope JKR would be proud!
just1digigirl - Thanks! That's a HUGE compliment and I appreciate it! I'm glad this fic made your mood better!
Lynx - Can you send me the address to your friend's site? I'd love to see it! I love the accent too, lol. :)
Stefanie - That sounds just like what happened to me. I didn't whoop at Sean's name, but I quietly did so when he came on screen for the first time. And when he talked for the first time. The people I went with (different people each time I saw) pretended not to know me but I didn't care. Anyway, thanks for the review!
Juliana Black - Thanks for the suggestions! I would have loved to make Harry and Draco friends but it's too OOC for Draco, so they're not. The kissing between Hr and D may end up here though.
