Vegeta's Sister
Konichiwa! ^_^ This is Chapter 2 of my story. I didn't get that many reviews last time, so please R&R! If you don't like it don't be afraid to say. I dunno if I'm any good at this and I don't wanna waste such a precious thing as time. ^_^ Aragatou. n e ways, time and POV (point of view) change, it's six years later. The mood picks up too!
-Hiyoko
Disclaimer: I own. my computer??? ^_^;
Okibi was running home from school and worrying about being in trouble with his mom. His attention was fixed upon the road as he ran his little heart out. ("Man! Late again! Mom's gonna be soooo mad!!!") He pictured his mom yelling at him, holding a frying pan over her head in a menacing fashion. He suddenly put on a burst of speed at this thought. He was almost just at the path turning in to his house when the sky began to light up. This made him stop dead. A flare of bright light travelling through the increasingly darkening sky was heading straight towards the road he was standing on.
" No way!" He yelled. The flare of light drew nearer and nearer to the dumbfounded boy. He just stood there until the very last moment. Awakening from his stupor, he did a tuck-and-roll jump, just barely dodging the giant fireball. He landed hard on the dirt path and remained in a sore, curled, little ball. When he finally got up the courage to open his eyes, he sprung to his feet in surprise, on the side of the road was a smoking giant ball of shiny silver. "OH MY GOD! I FOUND A SPASESHIP!" He yelled loudly. He then sat back down on the dirt, which was a comforting familiar thing. He tried to calm down, it wasn't easy but then he decided to investigate. His childish curiosity got the better of him. "Man! My friends at school would be jealous! I bet I'll be rich!!!" These ideas gave him a jolt of inspiration and he decided to at least give it a good looking at. He stood up and took a hesitant step towards the still smouldering metal. He regained his composure when he realized it wasn't going to attack him and he swallowed all of his fear. This took a real brave kid to deal with and he was no wimp! He reached out a finger slowly, to touch the large, shiny, object. It hissed and he decided that it wouldn't be a very good idea. He peered closely at the designs on the side. One was a strait line down, then curving back up to make a lid looking thing. Mom would kill him for being late, but this was worth it! The side of it suddenly flung open, sending poor Okibi sprawling. Not for long though! He jumped up and ran for dear life across the small road and hid behind a rock. As a curved door swung open vertically and lifted up automatically to the roof of the small capsule, a light turned on inside, pouring rays of gold onto the now dark road. Something was inside, illuminated by the light, Okibi braved a glance and gasped, "AAAAHHH!! Alien monster!" He shouted, then slapped a hand over his too loud mouth. The 'thing' roared in anger and rose, then fell and just lay there. Okibi was in shock. He realized he had just wet himself and didn't really care. He couldn't move, except for the shaking, which he couldn't control. His mouth hung open and he screamed again. "Its gonna get meeeee!!!!!!!" He whimpered, and then fainted.
I'm sorry this chapter isn't long, I don't think many people are reading so.. If you liked it tell me! Poor little Okibi! (By the way, he's another character I made up! ^_^) I will only write more if you PROVE somebody cares so please review! I like writing! Its fun! I GTG and do homework now. blah! Thanx for reading!!!!! ^_^ Bai Bai!
-Hiyoko
Konichiwa! ^_^ This is Chapter 2 of my story. I didn't get that many reviews last time, so please R&R! If you don't like it don't be afraid to say. I dunno if I'm any good at this and I don't wanna waste such a precious thing as time. ^_^ Aragatou. n e ways, time and POV (point of view) change, it's six years later. The mood picks up too!
-Hiyoko
Disclaimer: I own. my computer??? ^_^;
Okibi was running home from school and worrying about being in trouble with his mom. His attention was fixed upon the road as he ran his little heart out. ("Man! Late again! Mom's gonna be soooo mad!!!") He pictured his mom yelling at him, holding a frying pan over her head in a menacing fashion. He suddenly put on a burst of speed at this thought. He was almost just at the path turning in to his house when the sky began to light up. This made him stop dead. A flare of bright light travelling through the increasingly darkening sky was heading straight towards the road he was standing on.
" No way!" He yelled. The flare of light drew nearer and nearer to the dumbfounded boy. He just stood there until the very last moment. Awakening from his stupor, he did a tuck-and-roll jump, just barely dodging the giant fireball. He landed hard on the dirt path and remained in a sore, curled, little ball. When he finally got up the courage to open his eyes, he sprung to his feet in surprise, on the side of the road was a smoking giant ball of shiny silver. "OH MY GOD! I FOUND A SPASESHIP!" He yelled loudly. He then sat back down on the dirt, which was a comforting familiar thing. He tried to calm down, it wasn't easy but then he decided to investigate. His childish curiosity got the better of him. "Man! My friends at school would be jealous! I bet I'll be rich!!!" These ideas gave him a jolt of inspiration and he decided to at least give it a good looking at. He stood up and took a hesitant step towards the still smouldering metal. He regained his composure when he realized it wasn't going to attack him and he swallowed all of his fear. This took a real brave kid to deal with and he was no wimp! He reached out a finger slowly, to touch the large, shiny, object. It hissed and he decided that it wouldn't be a very good idea. He peered closely at the designs on the side. One was a strait line down, then curving back up to make a lid looking thing. Mom would kill him for being late, but this was worth it! The side of it suddenly flung open, sending poor Okibi sprawling. Not for long though! He jumped up and ran for dear life across the small road and hid behind a rock. As a curved door swung open vertically and lifted up automatically to the roof of the small capsule, a light turned on inside, pouring rays of gold onto the now dark road. Something was inside, illuminated by the light, Okibi braved a glance and gasped, "AAAAHHH!! Alien monster!" He shouted, then slapped a hand over his too loud mouth. The 'thing' roared in anger and rose, then fell and just lay there. Okibi was in shock. He realized he had just wet himself and didn't really care. He couldn't move, except for the shaking, which he couldn't control. His mouth hung open and he screamed again. "Its gonna get meeeee!!!!!!!" He whimpered, and then fainted.
I'm sorry this chapter isn't long, I don't think many people are reading so.. If you liked it tell me! Poor little Okibi! (By the way, he's another character I made up! ^_^) I will only write more if you PROVE somebody cares so please review! I like writing! Its fun! I GTG and do homework now. blah! Thanx for reading!!!!! ^_^ Bai Bai!
-Hiyoko
