Author's Note: I'm one of those people that rereads their stories to see how they've improved or not. I was reading this story and I realized the ending sucked! I didn't want it to end like that, so here is more. I hope you like… Oh, let me know if you think it should really be done…
Part Fifteen:
Nicollette kissed Dom like she'd never see him again, despite the fact he'd just
said he was never letting her go. They'd exchanged the appropriate 'I love yous' and
were now happy.
Brian slowed down to a stop behind Dom's car, the orange supra he'd owed him. He'd had a hunch that Nicollette would be near here. He just hadn't suspected Dom to be, too. He glanced at Mia, who grinned. They were standing on the sidewalk, a few blocks from the park where he'd picked them up earlier. They were kissing. They looked as if they were going to go at it right in the street.
Slowly, they got out of the car and walked toward their siblings.
"I love you," Dom was s
