I'm very new to writing, and I'm not really going by the book or the movie. Oh yeah any one like my kirbys (") (")

(") Chapter 1 (")

A scream was heard, as a blonde girl was grabbed by a monster (orc). The creature

Started to walk towards a portal in the air, the portal was blue with silver threads in the

Middle. As the monster started to walk towards the portal a red rose streaked towards him

Slashing its face, when the creature looked it saw a man in a tuxedo, but remembering what its master wanted it ran towards the portal making sure, that it closed.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Saruman the white's castle ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

"Why does our master want this girl?" "Because she is supposed to be one of those sailor scouts that have amazing powers." "Which one is she?" "How should I know, from what I heard the blonde ones are Moon, Venus, Uranus."

"Master Saruman wants to see which one you got." The two Orcs walked down the hall until they got to two big black doors that had vines crisscrossing all over them. When they entered the doors the man who was sitting there glanced at her and told the orcs to put her down and leave.

"So you're one of the legendary warriors that I heard about, you don't seem to have grown to your full potential yet, but we have something, that can take care of that."

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ With the fellowship ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

"I'll keep guard first Aragorn." "Are you sure Legolas?" "Yes I'm sure"

(") Later (")

SNAP! "Who's there?!" he didn't get an answer so he loaded his bow, and pointed his it towards where the noise was heard, and slowly walked towards the spot, but before he reached the spot where he heard the noise a Uruk-hai jumped out in front of him trying to hit him. On instinct he took a step back not knowing that there was something behind him, and when he did another Uruk-hai jumped out, and knocked him unconscious.

(") Morning (")

"Where is Legolas?" "I don't know Aragorn, but from the looks of these foot prints I would say that he was kidnapped, by the same creature that killed Boromier." "Well then I guess that we have to try to get to the castle of Saruman quicker so we can rescue Legolas, Gimli."

(") In the castle (")

As I pretend to be unconscious I see Saruman walking by with a girl floating in front of him, he was mumbling something about how much energy it would take to turn her evil, and all the dark purposes she could be used for, with a power level like hers.

"Master what do you want me to do with him."

(")end(")

What do you think of it.