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Chapter Four
Return to Me



"Look into my eyes," she ordered playfully. "You're-going-to-like-me... You're-going-to-like-me..." A love spell? Does that make you a witch, I thought, fondly. "Did it work?"
My face went even redder than it already was, "...I can't dance." I said shyly.
She placed her hands on her hips, "I don't care. Come on, you can always learn!" With that, this strange, yet beautiful girl grabbed both of my hands and dragged me out onto the dance floor as the upbeat of the 'Waltz for the Moon' began.
She took my left hand and placed it on her slender waist and clasped my other with her own. Once again, my face went red as we stumbled on the dancefloor. Ah man... I was really trying to dance, but I couldn't seem to do it. Sure, it was required, but I couldn't dance to save my life. I felt like I was trying to save my life, though... Heck, the only reason I passed that class was because I had used a reflect spell on myself, reflecting a guy in my class who could actually dance.
Without any warning, she spun out of my grip and tried to spin back, but that resulted in disaster. I crashed right into her, making us both look like fools. Ah man... I turned around and walked away.This is so embarrassing... I may have become a SeeD, but how on earth did I ever get away with that reflect thing? I was sure that Instructor Trepe saw through that when I did it... But she still passed me. I wonder why?
I sighed, no matter. I was a total klutz! Now I'll never get her name. I'll never see her again and--huh? I felt someone's hand grab mine, it was her...
"You didn't get into SeeD by giving up so easily. Come on." She proceeded to teach me the next part of the dance, but I had no idea what I was doing. We melted back into the basic steps and she let me lead for awhile. The whole time I kept my eyes on my feet. "I'm up here, you know." she commented.
I looked up, meeting her eyes. Wow...She's beautiful. My face went red, dammit, why do I always have to blush like this...? "S-Sorry... I just...ah..." I totally lost it then. I couldn't speak, I couldn't dance, I could barely stand without melting... Just wonderful. My thoughts were interrupted as we crashed into another couple who actual knew what they were doing.
"Hey-If ya don't know what you're doing, get off the floor!" yelled the guy.
The girl in my arms stuck out her tongue, "Jerk!" They immediately backed off. She turned back to me, "Don't you worry about them. That guy's just jealous I wouldn't dance with him. You're doing great." She smile sweetly; I took her hand and led the dance again.
Suddenly, I knew what I was actually doing. I don't know why! I led it perfectly, performing each step to her enjoyment. With every step we took, it went in perfect corresspondance. In the back of my mind, I kept on asking myself how I was doing this. How could I learn to be such a great dancer in a second or so? Hah-maybe she used her magic.
I led the final step which was another spin and back into the beginning position, where you were supposed to begin again and the music repeated. But she and I stopped, gazing into each other's eyes. I felt different as I slowly moved closer to her and she blushed slightly. She triggered something inside me. I felt her hand slide from my shoulder to my neck as I slipped both of my hands around her waist, filling the microscopic distance between our mouths...



I flashed my eyes open and breathed hard, sweating from the humidity in the hut. I sat up from the wicker chair I was sleeping in, I must have dozed off... I looked down to my left, Rinoa was still resting. At least her skin was beginning to regain color...
I rubbed my forehead, feeling the soft cotton of my bandage. What a dream... But it was no dream, just a memory. A wonderful memory that I would keep with me forever. I frowned, damn those fireworks, spoiling a moment like that... Why do I care about that...? I know that I've promised myself to stay as far away from people as possible, but... I can't keep it.
I stood up and paced back and forth; I suddenly became angry, dammit, why'd you leave, sis?!!! What could I have possibly done to make you so mad at me that you would leave me all alone?! I'm sorry! I'm sorry I ever let anyone touch my heart! Especially Rinoa! I pounded my fist into the the wooden floor in rage. I can't leave her now... I'm... I'm in... I'm in too deep... I'm in way too deep...
I sighed in agony; how could I help her? How can I make sure that she'll be alright? Rinoa... Please make it out alright, for me. My head ached and I groaned, falling to my knees next to Rinoa's bed. Aaarrgh... What's...going...on...? I dropped on the floor as everything went black...

...? Where am I? I jumped out of the tiny bed I had slept in and looked at my surroundings. A humble, white desk and matching armiore sat near a window, letting in the sun that shined on the dusty wooden floors. This place seemed scarily familiar... But where was I?
"Uncle Laguna!" I heard the voice of a little girl, younger than Eiri, though. She appeared in the doorway, her short, black hair framing her adorable face. Her dress was sky blue and looked to be hand-sewn. The little girl reminded me quite a lot of my own sister...
"Somethin' wrong, Elle?" I asked. I put a hand on the back of my neck, feeling a huge mass of hair. Huh? I knew I had long hair but not that much. This was way weird...
"Someone's here ta see yoo!" squealed the little girl.
"Me...?" I crossed my arms over my chest, "What's this person look like?"
"He was wearin' funny clothes and he's tawkin' ta Raine right now."
"Was he at the Pub?" I asked, now slighly annoyed. What was going on? I felt totally different and for some reason I had the strangest urge to write this down as a story to send into 'Timber Maniacs.'
She nodded, "Yup! That's why I came to get yo, Uncle Laguna! Am I a good girl?" she asked with her head cocked like Rinoa would.
"No you're not, Ellone!" I shouted, walking over to the toddler. "Being out there all by yourself is really risky! There's all kindsa monsters that'll come and suck all of your blood out!" Elle's eyes widened; why would you tell that to a little kid?
She looked down and fiddled with her dress, "It's only next door... It's okay."
"It's still dangerous." I knelt down to face her, "And since you're such a cute little girl, the monsters will be ESPECIALLY after you. And if someting like that should happen, Uncle Laguna's gonna cry."
"If I get n' trouble, I'll just call yoo, Uncle Laguna! Then yoo'll come n' rescue me, right?" she giggled playfully and scampered down the stairs.
"H-Hey! Ellone!" I called out. I got up to run, but I stopped abrtuptly and looked into the vanity mirror in the hallway, oh my god...
I sure didn't look like myself... This must have been a dream. Instead of my messy brown hair, I now had long, black hair that went down to my shoulders, handsome green eyes, and fair skin. An indigo jean jacket with rolled up sleeves covered up my muscular arms and dog tags hung at my throat. I brushed a few strands of hair out of my face and smiled suavely, "Laguna, my man, you are one good-lookin' guy!" ...? Whatever. "H-Hey! Ellone!" My attention turned back to the little girl and I ran down the stairs, stumbling clumsily. Man... This guy is a total moron.
I saw Ellone standing behind a table and I walked up to her, "I waited!" she shouted. "Am I a good girl?" she asked hopefully.
I patted her on the head as if she were an adorable puppy, messing up her silky strands of black hair, "Yes, a good girl." I abruptly went over to the wooden dresser and looked at a picture. "Dear Ellone's parents," I began a prayer. "Ellone's been a good girl, today." I turned around to face Ellone, "Right?"
"Yup!" She ran out to the front door. I followed and ran next door to the Pub.
"Ellone!" I called. "Now's your chance!"
"Cha-nce!" she repeated and ran hyperly into the pub. I followed her in to see a woman that looked scarily familiar. Her brown hair, the exact color of mine was tied back by a yellow head band that matched her sweater. She wore also a pair of tight blue jeans tucked into her yellow socks and black shoes. Her narrowed sapphire eyes the exact mirror image of my own stared down at Ellone.
"You understand, Ellone? Now go up to your room and play with the others." Others? What others...?
As if on cue, two little boys, that looked to be around eight or so ran down the stairs. "Hi, Dad!" shouted the little boy wearing a blue t-shirt and black hair. Following him wass another little boy with short brown hair and brown eyes. These two were obviously this guy's sons.
"Hey, Zoner! Wattsy!" Both of them jumped up and wrapped their arms around my waist. Zoner...? Wattsy? What kind of names are those? Hah-their names couldn't have been too important to him... What does their mother think about the names? I messed up their hair like I did with Ellone's, "Where's your Mom?" I took notice to the one Ellone must have been talking about. It was.. I knew it. This was the same dream world place I went to about a week ago. The night I had met Rinoa, after the ball, I had dreamt about this same Laguna guy and two other guys named Kiros and Ward.
The first time I had dreamt about going into a Forest and going to Deling City to see a pianist named Julia. She looked strikingly like Rinoa, and that had bothered me for awhile. The second time, and in the same week, I dreamt about going into these weird ruins and getting lost because this Laguna moron had brought along the wrong map. Who would marry this guy and give him the HUGE responsibility of being a father? Hah! This guy wouldn't know responsibility if it bit him.
"It's been a long time, Laguna." said Kiros in an almost grave tone. ...He sounds like the Wiseman from the village. Is it possible that the Kiros in the dream world and the Kiros from the village are the same? ...Does this mean that the people in the dream world are real? I KNEW this was too weird to be a dream! But... What does that make Laguna?
I knelt down to face Ellone, "He's my friend. He dresses a little funny, but he's not a bad guy." Ellone nodded. "What's up Ward? Haven't seen you since the wedding." I said, scratching the back of my head. Wedding, huh?
Kiros nodded, "Yeah, and looks like you've got two boys to show for it. *sigh* Six years is far too long."
"Yeah... But two boys isn't the only thing I've got to show from marriage." Oh? Don't tell me, a divorce, right? Man, this should be good...
As if on cue, a little girl around the age of five ran down and slid down the banister. "Wahoo!" she screamed at the top of her lungs as she flew off the banister and landed on her but, laughing hard. This was DEFINATELY Laguna's daughter. She was crazy, wreckless, and had long black hair just like Laguna's, only hers were in high pigtails. "Hi Daddy!" Yep, I knew it. She looked oddly familiar...
She sprinted up to me and I lifted her up into my arms, "Kiros, these are my sons, Zone," I pointed to the black haired boy, "And Watts." I pointed to the brown haired boy. I held the little girl close, "And this is my daughter, Rinoa."
!!! Rinoa is... Rinoa is Laguna's DAUGHTER?!?!?! How can this be? Does this mean that the Shaman Kiros is the same Kiros as the one in the dream world??? They must all be in the village! This means that the dream world thing is in the past...
I looked down at the adorable little girl in my arms. ...It isn't the same... But... At least Rinoa is here, sorta. She was so cute when she was a little girl. I didn't know that she had two brothers. Then again, I didn't know that she had a sister when we first met. There must be at least a million things I don't know about her... But I can't find out about anymore stuff... Not now.
"What's wrong, Daddy?" Rinoa asked. I looked at her, her eyes hadn't changed at all... Just like I remembered them.
"Nothin' to worry about, Teeny Rinny. I just think that the faeries are here." Teeny Rinny? ...There's one more thing I never knew about her. Oh well... I guess I have plenty of time to find out when she wakes up. IF she wakes up, though... Rinoa... Please return to me.



I flashed my eyes open and looked around, seeing that I was back in the Shaman's hut. I looked down at Rinoa; Eiri's sleeping form was draped on her stomach. I felt a pang of guilt. This is all my fault, I thought. And I knew that I was right because if it hadn't have been for me, then Nariko wouldn't have been so angry as to kill her. Furthermore, I had aided him in it... If I hadn't distracted Rinoa, then she would have been able to block his sword. I felt so horrible. It was like my own emptiness and guilt was eating away at me from the inside out. I didn't want to stop it, I just wanted to die...
"Squall?" I looked down, Eiri had woken up. She looked up at me from sitting on the floor, her lovely green eyes watching every move I made.
"E-Eiri..." I trailed off. What would she think of me if I told her that it was all my fault. ...Who am I kidding? She was there. She knows it's my fault... I let my head drop. "I'm so sorry, Eiri."
I looked up as Eiri took my hand. "Squall," she said. "Will yoo take me to the temple?" she asked.
"Temple...?" I asked. I had never seen any temples here...
She grabbed my wrist and tugged. "Come on." She dragged me over to the corner of the hut, where there were several scrolls of maps. She pointed to a scroll high on a shelf; I got it down and rolled it out; it was a map of Centra.
"See the part of Centra that looks like a big, twisted around arm with the skeleton hand?" I nodded. "That's where we are." That's not very helpful... She then pointed to the Northeasternmost peninsula where a Chocobo forest seemed to be marked. A few spaces southwest of it was a small star with some strange, arabic-looking symbols next to it. "That's the Chocobo forest we go to when we want to get a chocobo. The chocobos take us to the temple."
"Where's the temple?" I asked. She pointed all the way down to the 'shoulder of the arm' on the continent, which looked like it wasn't far from the beach. There was a large equal-armed cross with even more strange symbols on it. That was far! Hundreds of miles away from the Chocobo forest...
"It says 'Temple of Odin," Eiri said. It must be their alphabet.
"Where is Madao Valley?" I asked. She pointed to the small star not far from the Chocobo forest. What?! I can't take her from here all the way to the temple, it would take days.
"Eiri," I said. "It's too far."
Her expression saddened. "Yes yoo can..." she whimpered. "Sis takes me all the time. We went this morning before the terneement. We always go to pray to Odin there; it helps..."
Pray to Odin? Praying is something I do not do. All you're doing is just wishing for something then not doing anything about it. Praying is hopeless, and does nothing. It's just setting yourself up for a big disappointment. when you don't get it. I looked down at Eiri; she looked as if she were going to cry. I guess I could take her... But it was so far away...
"You went there this morning?" I asked. She nodded. "...It's so far..."
"The chocobos are fast. They can get us there and back by morning." I raised an eyebrow in question. I didn't know that chocobos could be that fast. Well, this was an unusual place. After all I've seen here, I shouldn't be surprised that the Centran chocobos were supirior to the ones found in Trabia or Esthar. Best part is, we won't encounter any monsters on a chocobo, and that could get sticky if I didn't have my Gunblade with me... I sighed; this family was persistant. I doubt that Eiri would give up asking I take her. I nodded.
"Okay, let's go to the temple." Eiri smiled. She tugged me out of the hut. "Let's go! Let's go!" she shouted in excitement. I grabbed the map and ran out. Kiros stopped us along the way.
"Whoa," he said. "Hang on, Eiri, what's the big rush?" he asked, mixing some leaves into a paste.
"We're on our way to the Temple of Odin, Uncle Kiros!" Eiri said. "Wanna come?"
He scratched the back of his neck. "I'd love to come, Eiri, but I'd better stay here and take care of your sister and Korekanda. He's been pretty hostile since this afternoon., not that I blame him..." He glanced at me as if to say 'Better stay away from him, he'll be mad at you.' I nodded. "Make sure you bring back that map, alright?" I nodded again.
Eiri and Kiros performed their salute again. "May Odin be with you," Kiros said. Funny, I thought. The Kiros from the dream world didn't seem to be a religious person. I shrugged it off, and we set out for the Chocobo forest.



"Choco-boy!" Eiri called. "Choco-boy, where are you? It's me, Eiri!" From out of the forest, a young boy came, about 12 or 13 years old. He eyed us both carefully. "You need a chocobo?" he asked.
"Why else would we have come?" I asked, annoyed. I just wanted to get this over with.
"Tch. Tou-chy!" he said. "You're not an Akasha, are you?" he asked.
I sighed. "Look, we just need one of your fastest chocobos to get to the Temple of Odin. So, are you gonna give us one or what?"
Choco-boy looked at us both. "We need one to help Sis!" Eiri piped up. The guy seeemd to light up at the mention of Rinoa.
"Rinoa? Where is she? Is she here???" he asked hopefully.
"She's really hurt bad!" Eiri said. "We gotta get to the temple so we can pray for her to get better!" Choco-boy whistled and two large chocobos came out. "Hop on," he said. "To the Temple of Odin!" He must really like Rinoa.
We rode for hours; night had come, and it was probably around midnight. Choco-boy led the way while Eiri rode with me. She was dozing in my arms, waking up every now and again. I looked up to the sky; the stars looked very different from here than back in Balamb. It didn't surprise me once I thought about it; Centra and Balamb are on two different hemespheres of the earth. I tried to see if there were any constellations I could recognize, but they all looked completely different. I couldn't even place where the north star was. Actually, if I'm here, maybe I should be looking for the south star...?
"Hey! We're here!" I looked up. We were at the gates of the Centra ruins; I had read about them in books, though I was surprised to see that it looked brand new. The sky was lit up with glowing orbs floating around, a lake was nearby with water lilies that glowed and seemed to sing; little rings of colored lights seemed to rise out of them with each note they sang. Great trees towered up and twisted to the sky with enormous crystals breaking out of the trunk and the canopy. The trees themselves seemed to be made out of stars and crystals. Stars seemed to line up and point to the temple's entrance. Tonberries walked around with their knives and lanterns as if they were servants. So many vast stairs and columns towering up and twisting around, like I was in a palace to a king. I stared at the entire spectacle in amazement.
"Pyreflies," Choco-boy said. "Those floating things, they're called pyreflies. And those flowers are moon-lilies. The trees are said to be made out of the stars themselves. And watch out for the spark-faeries," he said. "They bite at you if they don't like you."
I looked around, seeing little lines of electricity flying about. Eiri woke up and stared wide-eyed at the whole thing. "I never been here at night, before..." she said. She held out her hand as a tiny spark-faerie landed in her palm. It danced with it's transparent body, I only able to see it because sparks and tiny lightning bolts were inside of it, as if to show where the limbs would be.
"Come on," Choco-boy said. "I'd usually charge per hour, but for Rinoa, it'll be free! Let's just go inside the temple and pray, okay?"
Eiri smiled and jumped out of my lap. We tied the chocobos up and I followed into the temple. It was gorgeous, like I was in the palace of a god. "It only looks like this at night," Choco-boy explained as we walked down the path, passing a few tonberries and giving the 'salute' along the way, only because Choco-boy had told me that if you didn't show proper respect to the tonberries in the temple, you would be killed. "During the day, it seems to be just a normal old temple. It actually looks like the 'Centra ruins' as you guys call it to the ones who don't know of or follow the teachings. I don't, but I like to think that it helps me sometimes. So I can see it in the day, but just barely." Then why can I see it? I'm not a follower of Odin.
"Can anybody see it at night?"
"Only if that 'anybody' is here for a good purpose," he said. I was here for a good purpose, I thought. I was here with Eiri so she could pray to Odin. Wait, isn't Odin a GF?
"You're thinking if Odin is a GF or not, aren't you?" I looked at him, surprised. We made our way to an acending staircase into what looked like--well--a temple. It had more of a church feeling, though... When we got inside, I saw that many people from the village was here, as well as some tonberries and other monsters They were all kneeling at various statues, lighting candles and saying prayers to Odin. There were two acending staircases that each led to a different door. I could hear some singing ringing in the rafters. It sounded like a hymn of some kind...
"To answer your question--" What question? I didn't even ask; geez, was reading minds some kind of 'gift' that this whole area had? "--Odin is NOT a GF. The term GF, as I'm sure you know, means Guardian Force. The truth is, Odin, as well as all other GFs, are gods. Or at least they used to be before the people lost faith in them."
"Gods?" I asked. I harness the power of...gods?
"In the beginning, the universe was nonexistant. It was created by powerful gods. The gods were created out of the dreams that were to come, and they were divided into different elements and spirits. Quetzaquotl of the Thunder, Shiva of the Ice, Ifrit of the Flame, Siren of Melody and Temptation, Diablos of the Underworld, the Brothers of the Earth, Leviathan of the Ocean and Water, Cerberus the Guardian dog of Hell. These are the powers and spirits of the earth that created you and I. You can obtain them by theft or defeat. When I say theft, I mean by drawing its power from another beast."
"How do you know all of this?" I asked before he could continue.
"Rinoa taught me. When I was little, Rinoa would always read to me. I hung out with many of the Madao Valley children growing up, so how could I not learn this? I didn't believe it when I really thought about it, but no other way seemed to compute, ya know? I really like Rinoa; someday, I'm gonna marry her!" he said. Good luck, I thought. Wasn't she already engaged? And what about the GFs being gods? No one can really harness the powers of gods. It just doesn't work like that. I had to know...
"Please tell me, if the GFs are gods, then why can SeeD harness that power?"
"SeeD... SeeD is actually created from an ancient warrior race, said to grow out from the earth. Since they grew from the earth, they and they alone were able to harness the gods' power. SeeDs are not ordinary people, and cannot be 'trained' into one. A true SeeD was actually once the soul of those Earth Warriors that still have the inner desire to fight. All those in your Garden are actually warriors from an ancient race; these warriors were feared in the dark times because they grew so corrupt for money and killed anything that got in their way. Their true purpose was meant to overcome the worlds' evils, but they were wiped out because they were so, well, you get the idea."
I looked down to the floor, a bit shocked. I was the soul of a warrior in the past...? That's impossible! I'm here now and that's the only time I was and ever will be here! There's no such thing as reincarnation or nonsense like that. I sighed. Why do people have to make up such nonsense? They're only fooling themselves... I couldn't have been a warrior in the past; it was just impossible. But, still, it all sounded too interesting to leave alone.
"If the GFs are gods, then why can they just belong to anybody?" I asked, knowing that there were quite a few people who had the GF Ifrit at Garden.
"GFs used to be gods. Ifrit, Shiva, Siren, Leviathan--all of them were patron gods to various tribes like the Akashic tribe. They're one of the last tribes left who believe in the old ways. The faith makes the gods what gods are. That's why it's so hard to obtain the power of great gods like Odin. You have to endure so much to gain his power, as well as the power of his brother, Bahamut. There is also Eden, Doomtrain, Alexander--you have to do much more to gain these ones. But the rewards are great, too. Odin, however, is probably one of the greatest because he sets up such a great number of trials for you to pass before you can finally defeat him."
"...So, the 'gods' are only gods if there is a tribe that believes it?"
Choco-boy nodded. "Hyne sends the gods to protect the people who believe in them. When there are no longer people, the gods go into a rest, a kind of suspended animation, where they wait for Hyne to come and free them from their prison. Until that time, any SeeD can come to free them. In return, they grant them certian powers."
I recalled how I obtained Shiva. It was on a training mission in Trabia. I stumbled into a cave of ice, and went through a labyrinth of tunnels until I found her, encased in a wall of ice. I spent hours chipping away at her to finally free her. She's been my most loyal GF since. I vaguely remembered what she had said to me. 'You remind me most of Hyne himself with your icey eyes. You could very well be my son... Are you an Artician prince?'
"Hey, you alive?" I looked down at Choco-boy. "What are you thinking about?"
"..."
"Oh, c'mon!" he said. "With all I know, I can probably answer it!" I crossed my arms and looked away; I'd leave it at that. Eiri appeared at the top of the stair case that led to the door on the right. She bounded down happily and rushed up to me, her eyes wide with wonderment.
"I saw him," she whispered. "I saw Odin! I chose the right door; he came to me..." She saw Odin? I was even more confused; a god revealed himself to a little girl like her? "He said that Sis would be okay! I'm so happy!" I looked over to the door on the right; it looked no different from the one on the left.
"The doors change," said Choco-boy. "The correct door today may be the wrong door tomorrow. They both lead into a maze, one at the beginning, and one that goes straight to the center. The trick is, you have to trust your intuition with it. If Odin chooses you to come in, he'll whisper what the right door is; if not, you have to endure a great maze to test your spiritual strength. I never went in, though--I've got too many customers."
"Can't you pray just as well out here?" I asked.
He nodded expertly like Zell would. "Yeah, but the Cloyster of Trails is for really important stuff. Usually, only those on a pilgramage can enter. I guess the Maester saw it fit to let Eiri go in." Maester? Oh, yeah, it must be like their 'high priest.'
"Did you pray for Sis, too?" Eiri asked. I didn't know what to say. I didn't want to lie to her, but I didn't believe in Odin. What should I do...?
I knelt down. "Rinoa is fine," I said. "She doesn't need me to pray when she's got you. She's strong enough on her own." She looked slightly disappointed.
"He's right, Eiri," Choco-boy said. "If Odin really came to you, then you saved Rinoa's life all by yourself! You didn't need him to pray too."
"Heeeey--yeah!" Eiri said. "C'mon, let's go back and see Sis! I'll bet she's awake by now!" I sighed and looked up to the grand statue of Odin between the two staircases. For Rinoa's sake, I hope you're right... When we rode back to the valley that night, I found myself saying a silent prayer to the stars. If you brought us together, I thought, then you sure as hell had better make sure we stay together. It was a silly thing to do, wishing upon a star, but I was desperate enough to try anything. I really...hoped that she would be okay. Oh, Rinoa... You don't deserve this... Please, make it out alright, for everyone who loves you. And for your sister, I thought. A sweet little girl shouldn't have to bear what I felt as a child... Make it out okay, for her...



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Well? Not too bad, is it? How did you like it? Too mushy? Too dreamy? Too... Too... Too... I dunno. Too anything? Let me know so I can put some suggestions into the next chapter! If you want to send in some suggestions, review and give a few ideas, or you could send it to me at Twilightmyst88@aol.com. However, I would prefer that you'd put it in the reviews. Don't do the e-mail thing unless you are DESPARATE, got it? If I see it and like it, I might put it in the story I'm writing now, or even write a new story about your idea! I want this to be as interactive as possible! Chapter Five should be up soon! Check ya later!

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