SORRY GUYS I COULDN'T WRITE MORE CHAPTERS THAN THIS IN THE PAST FEW DAYS,
CAUSE I WAS WAY TOO SICK TO MOVE AND ALSO MY COMPUTER CRASHED, SO NOW THAT
I CAN AT LEAST WRITE AND MOVE IM WRITING THIS CHAPTER AND MAY GO ON TO THE
NEXT SOON (I JUST STARTED A NEW SEMESTER AND SEEM TO HAVE TWO CLASSES THAT
WILL KEEP ME BUSY) AND I MAY BNOT GO ON TO THE NEXT SOON IT DEPENDS ON
WETHER OR NOT I HAVE TIME........................
jess jam and the two fathers, (mr Potter and mr Halloway)
hint for all that will notice me! Lily has a different mother (she is after all pureblood) and will meet her later on in the story!!
Authors note , these are my characters up to date that you may not recognize :
- Jessica Halloway 11 years old
- Mr.Halloway(John halloway)
-Thomas Halloway 16 years old (tanya's bf)
-Tanya Potter 16 years old (thomas' gf)
-Mr.Potter(Harold Potter)
if i forget to mention peoples and you need a little bit of help to know who they are then just ask in your review, and by the way if you ask me to review your story then i will!!!!! And i thank all my reviewers, flames and all reviews are welcome, but be nice enough if not i will delete your review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!helpful hints are always needed and ideas are also, if you have any ideas email them to me, but when you have the subject of email write ff.net!!!!! okay thats it
Disclaimer : look at previous chapters!!!!!!Basically wats mine is mine and whats JKR is JKR's.
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DIAGON ALLEY
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Lily and her father stumbled down the steps of what Lily was assuming was London.Mr.Evans had told Lily to wait there since he was going to go to Gringotts, the wizarding worlds bank. Lily waited and waited, when 20 minutes passed by she decided to look for Gringotts.Then out of nowhere a guy which Lily figured was about a couple of years older appeared out of nowhere with what Lily assumed was his younger sister, then Lily saw 2 men appear out of nowhere and came to the conclusion that they were friends, and they had come with their fathers. Lily knew straight away that they were wizards, just the way that they seemed to appear near a fireplace. Lily went up to the people and asked them if they knew were Gringotts, was! The boy that seemed older with unruly black hair and a pair of round glasses, he kind of reminded Lily of her dear friend Sirius, Lily had just met Sirius since he had moved in to the house next to hers. The older boy (James)answered to her that he knew where to go.He told his father and the other girls father where he was going and they said "oh okay thats nice Jam. Jess you go with him."
"Fine" replied a rather sourly girl.
Lily's guides looked like so :
Boy : unruly black hair, chocolate brown eyes, muscular,nice tan, looked sportif, looked intelligent.
Girl : Straight beautiful black hair, nice tan , looked girly yet sportif. Lily thought if she goes to the same wizarding school as i do maybe we'll be friends.
Then the boy later on called Jam, spoke "Hi my name is James Potter! And that's my best friend Jessica Halloway!" he pointed to the girl. "We've been best friends since we were toddlers. And were both Eleven. And on the first of september were going to Hogwarts! How about you?" he asked proudly kind of tilting his head.
Lily couldn't believe it. He was 11 years old and he looked like a god. He looked like he was 14 if not older. And yet the girl looked like Lily alot, she seemed to have the same attitude.... the only thing that Lily didnt have the same as the girl was the colour of hair. Finally coming out of her gaze Lily replied James.
"Oh, sorry, my names Lily Evans, and im half blood. I'm going to Hogwarts also. Do you guys know how to get on platform 9 and ¾?" Lily replied a bit nervous. swishing her beautiful hair as she turned to face James. James saw the cute gesture and liked it. She wasnt beeing snotty about her swishing her hair. James doubted she even noticed she did it herself. Anyways "Oh here's Gringott's" said Jess.
Then Lily saw her dad coming out.
"Hi dad!!! Im over here!!!" Lily cried to her father.
"Oh hi sweety, oh my you do make friends fast don't you? Will they be going to Hogwarts??" asked a rather curious Mr.Evans.
"Yes dad, they will be going to Hogwarts with me! Won't your fathers get worried James and Jessica??" said Lily happy to have made some sort of aquaintance with someone who was going to the same school at her.
"There they are, maybe after the shopping we could meet up at the Leaky Cauldron to have a butterbeer! " replied a anxious Jessica, pointing at her father and Mr.Potter. She could already see that for the next week James would be talking about Lily. She would be his next crush. Jess, loved her friend deeply so she wished that Lily wouldn't have the same feelings, that her dearest friend Jam had already found feelings for a girl he wouldn't know until his adventure at Hogwarts!!!!(sorry that was perplexing)
"Jam!!!!!!!!Jess!!!!!!!!!! There you are!! Oh hello Sir and Lily isn't it? We were thinking of letting you two go do the shopping and us going to the Leaky Cauldron! Is that alright! Hey aren't you part of the Ministry of Magic, Sir?" asked a curious Mr.Potter.
"Why yes, I am a Fugde man tried to take my spot, but im not about to give up my job, even if i could of retired some years ago!" Mr.Evans said to the two men he barely knew then gave his attention to Lily and said "Lily! Would you like to go shopping with your friends if you dont mind, and maybe i will also go to the Leak Cauldron!!!!".
"That's fine Daddy i will go and shop with my aquaintances, at least if that's okay with you guys!" she said pointing at James and Jessica!
"Sure that would be great!! I was going to invite you, but hey this is even better!!!" said James very happily tilting slightly his head once more!!
"Sure, why not!" replied Jess a little sourly but still with a hint of niceness to it!!
"Okay you three go off and get your supply's i want you back at the Leaky Cauldron in about 4hours! That should give you all enough time to find things!!!" said sternly yet nicely, Mr.Halloway.
"Okay let's go!" said James motioning to his two friends!!!
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1hour and a half later
Olivander's Wand shop!!!!!!!!!!
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The three, were walking, they had so far everything except for there wands and they're animal!! All they needed to do was find the wand shop. Then Lily spotted it, before beeing clobbered by the many salesmans, still trying to get James to buy some weird candy!!! Lily was hungry but when the man started saying he candy consisted of chocolate frogs (Lily knew they didnt exist!!) and tons of other stupid things of the sort, such as Newt's Lols (newt flavoured lollipops) (Lily knew they didn't exist also) so they just kept looking for the wand shop they still hadn't found! Well anyways, when Lily finally found the shop theyre was a small sign you practically had to be eye to eye to it it read Ollivanders: Maker of Fine Wands since 382 BC.Lily, James and Jess all walked in. The place was a little weird and Lily could see a wand on a pillow, it seemed pretty old since it was full of ages of dust litterally compared to most of the other wands then all of a sudden, they heard a *pop* and a man came in to the room. The man was short and looked fragile and handy.
The man made a brief introduction!
"Hello dear students, My name is Ollivander, fine maker of wands, here we make our fine wands out of unicorn hairs, phoenix tail feathers, heartstrings of dragons...... We have a variety of wood used and also, no two of Ollivanders wands are the same. Well then off to the measuring, how many wands is it now? 2???3???" said exitedly Mr.Ollivander!
"Oh hello Sir, Im James, That's Jessica" he pointed at Jess "And that over there is Lily!" he pointed to Lily "And that will be 3 wands today sir! We all start at Hogwarts the frist of september!!!" replied a rather proud James
"Oh you three will have much fun at Hogwarts! Are you all first years, cause you do seem older James!No offence girls!!!!"
"No sir we're all the same age! We're all eleven!" replied Lily sweetly
"Oh okay! Well then i would like to go with you first,Jessica isn't? he said pointing at Jessica
Jess advanced, the first wand she tried was the right one, it was 7 and a half inches long, pliable, beechwood, dragon heart string and one maple feather! an unusual match, yet in general fine for almost every subject.James took a while to find but he finally found his match (after all it isn't the owner that picks the wand! its the wand that picks the owner). James had a mahogany wand , eleven inches, pliable, a little more power and excellent for transfigurations. Lily was the one that took forever. After what seemed like an eternity her wand picked her and Lily got ten and a quarter inches long, swishy, made of willow. Nice wand for charm work. Jessica paid, 6 galleons for her wand, James 12 galleons and Lily 12 galleons and 2 sickles.
They left the store with just about 45 minutes to spare, luckily, the pet store was easy to find. They entered the pet stored and found alot of unusual pets, they saw everything, from cats, to owls,to dogs....... Lily was allowed to have a dog and also an owl!!!! When she first walked in she saw a magnificient golden retriever! She instantly fell in love with the dog and bought it! She also bought his necessity's. She found a dog food bag that refiled itself automaticly..... Then almost like Harry's Lily found a snow white owl! The owl was different cause it had spots on its belly and had some how a sort of black eye (black spot covering the eye). she also bought the owl and its necessity's. James needed a little bit of money to buy his owl so Jess and Lily helped him. Jess bought a nice cat and was almost taunted to buy an owl but had James and Lily's promise to be able to use their owls, since cats and owls don't really mix as best of friends!!! They left the pet store with about 20 minutes to spare and decided to have some ice cream! Lily and James had the same (which Lily paid for) ice cream it was chocolate, with chocolate chips! and Jess had some weird looking stuff she called good! They made it back with everything, and still about 2 minutes to spare. The fathers said their goodbyes and they all went home happy. During the next weeks, (before the 1st of september) James and Jess barely saw each other since James had visited alot at Lily's house. Jess had been invited but hadn't wanted to go!! James became friendlier and friendlier with Lily, he met Sirius a few times and thought he would get along well with the guy. James and Lily even had plans to go to the station together. Lily was to come over and sleep over at James' house for 2 days and they were to head off to the station!!!
END OF THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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thanx to these reviewers
by the way just a hint to reviewers im not english im french so sometimes i make mistakes and i tend not to write people talking on different lines, but ill try and i kinda need a beta reader if your interested please email me with the subject ff.net(you know when you see inbox). anyways thanx
me (aka someone), great weird yet funny reviews, it kinda made me laugh
Sarah Black, thanx for the helpful hints.
NicoleTheNiveter, thanx for beeing real nice!! ill be waiting for your review!
Litteratura Goddess, thanx for the awesome reviews, thanx for the helpful hints (i didnt make it clear why lily was hidden from magic, so you can make up some excuse or use something like her father knew about the growing dark wizard and wanted to protect her to some extent or something , i dunno, please come back to read my other chapters and i will gladly read your story!!
jillychan, i think you reviewed again so thanx again once more!!
and thanx to all my other reviewers thanked last time (they didnt review again, so no new comments), princesscherryblossom, naavi,satanslittleprincess, jillychan,heart2heart, hopefully i will get more reviews soon, anyways thanx for reading!!! and i dont mind constructive reviews it will help me make better storys!!!
AND BY THE WAY ONCE MORE I WOULD LIKE TO ANNOUNCE I NEED A BETA- READER!!!!!!! IF ANYONE WOULD LIKE TO BE MY BETA READER PLEASE EMAIL ME WITH THE SUBJECT FF.NET. THANX AND HAVE A NICE EVENING!!!!!!!!!!LOL
I LOVE ALL YALL
THANX
BYE BYEZ
NATS
ME
NAT
*
jess jam and the two fathers, (mr Potter and mr Halloway)
hint for all that will notice me! Lily has a different mother (she is after all pureblood) and will meet her later on in the story!!
Authors note , these are my characters up to date that you may not recognize :
- Jessica Halloway 11 years old
- Mr.Halloway(John halloway)
-Thomas Halloway 16 years old (tanya's bf)
-Tanya Potter 16 years old (thomas' gf)
-Mr.Potter(Harold Potter)
if i forget to mention peoples and you need a little bit of help to know who they are then just ask in your review, and by the way if you ask me to review your story then i will!!!!! And i thank all my reviewers, flames and all reviews are welcome, but be nice enough if not i will delete your review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!helpful hints are always needed and ideas are also, if you have any ideas email them to me, but when you have the subject of email write ff.net!!!!! okay thats it
Disclaimer : look at previous chapters!!!!!!Basically wats mine is mine and whats JKR is JKR's.
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DIAGON ALLEY
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Lily and her father stumbled down the steps of what Lily was assuming was London.Mr.Evans had told Lily to wait there since he was going to go to Gringotts, the wizarding worlds bank. Lily waited and waited, when 20 minutes passed by she decided to look for Gringotts.Then out of nowhere a guy which Lily figured was about a couple of years older appeared out of nowhere with what Lily assumed was his younger sister, then Lily saw 2 men appear out of nowhere and came to the conclusion that they were friends, and they had come with their fathers. Lily knew straight away that they were wizards, just the way that they seemed to appear near a fireplace. Lily went up to the people and asked them if they knew were Gringotts, was! The boy that seemed older with unruly black hair and a pair of round glasses, he kind of reminded Lily of her dear friend Sirius, Lily had just met Sirius since he had moved in to the house next to hers. The older boy (James)answered to her that he knew where to go.He told his father and the other girls father where he was going and they said "oh okay thats nice Jam. Jess you go with him."
"Fine" replied a rather sourly girl.
Lily's guides looked like so :
Boy : unruly black hair, chocolate brown eyes, muscular,nice tan, looked sportif, looked intelligent.
Girl : Straight beautiful black hair, nice tan , looked girly yet sportif. Lily thought if she goes to the same wizarding school as i do maybe we'll be friends.
Then the boy later on called Jam, spoke "Hi my name is James Potter! And that's my best friend Jessica Halloway!" he pointed to the girl. "We've been best friends since we were toddlers. And were both Eleven. And on the first of september were going to Hogwarts! How about you?" he asked proudly kind of tilting his head.
Lily couldn't believe it. He was 11 years old and he looked like a god. He looked like he was 14 if not older. And yet the girl looked like Lily alot, she seemed to have the same attitude.... the only thing that Lily didnt have the same as the girl was the colour of hair. Finally coming out of her gaze Lily replied James.
"Oh, sorry, my names Lily Evans, and im half blood. I'm going to Hogwarts also. Do you guys know how to get on platform 9 and ¾?" Lily replied a bit nervous. swishing her beautiful hair as she turned to face James. James saw the cute gesture and liked it. She wasnt beeing snotty about her swishing her hair. James doubted she even noticed she did it herself. Anyways "Oh here's Gringott's" said Jess.
Then Lily saw her dad coming out.
"Hi dad!!! Im over here!!!" Lily cried to her father.
"Oh hi sweety, oh my you do make friends fast don't you? Will they be going to Hogwarts??" asked a rather curious Mr.Evans.
"Yes dad, they will be going to Hogwarts with me! Won't your fathers get worried James and Jessica??" said Lily happy to have made some sort of aquaintance with someone who was going to the same school at her.
"There they are, maybe after the shopping we could meet up at the Leaky Cauldron to have a butterbeer! " replied a anxious Jessica, pointing at her father and Mr.Potter. She could already see that for the next week James would be talking about Lily. She would be his next crush. Jess, loved her friend deeply so she wished that Lily wouldn't have the same feelings, that her dearest friend Jam had already found feelings for a girl he wouldn't know until his adventure at Hogwarts!!!!(sorry that was perplexing)
"Jam!!!!!!!!Jess!!!!!!!!!! There you are!! Oh hello Sir and Lily isn't it? We were thinking of letting you two go do the shopping and us going to the Leaky Cauldron! Is that alright! Hey aren't you part of the Ministry of Magic, Sir?" asked a curious Mr.Potter.
"Why yes, I am a Fugde man tried to take my spot, but im not about to give up my job, even if i could of retired some years ago!" Mr.Evans said to the two men he barely knew then gave his attention to Lily and said "Lily! Would you like to go shopping with your friends if you dont mind, and maybe i will also go to the Leak Cauldron!!!!".
"That's fine Daddy i will go and shop with my aquaintances, at least if that's okay with you guys!" she said pointing at James and Jessica!
"Sure that would be great!! I was going to invite you, but hey this is even better!!!" said James very happily tilting slightly his head once more!!
"Sure, why not!" replied Jess a little sourly but still with a hint of niceness to it!!
"Okay you three go off and get your supply's i want you back at the Leaky Cauldron in about 4hours! That should give you all enough time to find things!!!" said sternly yet nicely, Mr.Halloway.
"Okay let's go!" said James motioning to his two friends!!!
***************************************************************
1hour and a half later
Olivander's Wand shop!!!!!!!!!!
***************************************************************
The three, were walking, they had so far everything except for there wands and they're animal!! All they needed to do was find the wand shop. Then Lily spotted it, before beeing clobbered by the many salesmans, still trying to get James to buy some weird candy!!! Lily was hungry but when the man started saying he candy consisted of chocolate frogs (Lily knew they didnt exist!!) and tons of other stupid things of the sort, such as Newt's Lols (newt flavoured lollipops) (Lily knew they didn't exist also) so they just kept looking for the wand shop they still hadn't found! Well anyways, when Lily finally found the shop theyre was a small sign you practically had to be eye to eye to it it read Ollivanders: Maker of Fine Wands since 382 BC.Lily, James and Jess all walked in. The place was a little weird and Lily could see a wand on a pillow, it seemed pretty old since it was full of ages of dust litterally compared to most of the other wands then all of a sudden, they heard a *pop* and a man came in to the room. The man was short and looked fragile and handy.
The man made a brief introduction!
"Hello dear students, My name is Ollivander, fine maker of wands, here we make our fine wands out of unicorn hairs, phoenix tail feathers, heartstrings of dragons...... We have a variety of wood used and also, no two of Ollivanders wands are the same. Well then off to the measuring, how many wands is it now? 2???3???" said exitedly Mr.Ollivander!
"Oh hello Sir, Im James, That's Jessica" he pointed at Jess "And that over there is Lily!" he pointed to Lily "And that will be 3 wands today sir! We all start at Hogwarts the frist of september!!!" replied a rather proud James
"Oh you three will have much fun at Hogwarts! Are you all first years, cause you do seem older James!No offence girls!!!!"
"No sir we're all the same age! We're all eleven!" replied Lily sweetly
"Oh okay! Well then i would like to go with you first,Jessica isn't? he said pointing at Jessica
Jess advanced, the first wand she tried was the right one, it was 7 and a half inches long, pliable, beechwood, dragon heart string and one maple feather! an unusual match, yet in general fine for almost every subject.James took a while to find but he finally found his match (after all it isn't the owner that picks the wand! its the wand that picks the owner). James had a mahogany wand , eleven inches, pliable, a little more power and excellent for transfigurations. Lily was the one that took forever. After what seemed like an eternity her wand picked her and Lily got ten and a quarter inches long, swishy, made of willow. Nice wand for charm work. Jessica paid, 6 galleons for her wand, James 12 galleons and Lily 12 galleons and 2 sickles.
They left the store with just about 45 minutes to spare, luckily, the pet store was easy to find. They entered the pet stored and found alot of unusual pets, they saw everything, from cats, to owls,to dogs....... Lily was allowed to have a dog and also an owl!!!! When she first walked in she saw a magnificient golden retriever! She instantly fell in love with the dog and bought it! She also bought his necessity's. She found a dog food bag that refiled itself automaticly..... Then almost like Harry's Lily found a snow white owl! The owl was different cause it had spots on its belly and had some how a sort of black eye (black spot covering the eye). she also bought the owl and its necessity's. James needed a little bit of money to buy his owl so Jess and Lily helped him. Jess bought a nice cat and was almost taunted to buy an owl but had James and Lily's promise to be able to use their owls, since cats and owls don't really mix as best of friends!!! They left the pet store with about 20 minutes to spare and decided to have some ice cream! Lily and James had the same (which Lily paid for) ice cream it was chocolate, with chocolate chips! and Jess had some weird looking stuff she called good! They made it back with everything, and still about 2 minutes to spare. The fathers said their goodbyes and they all went home happy. During the next weeks, (before the 1st of september) James and Jess barely saw each other since James had visited alot at Lily's house. Jess had been invited but hadn't wanted to go!! James became friendlier and friendlier with Lily, he met Sirius a few times and thought he would get along well with the guy. James and Lily even had plans to go to the station together. Lily was to come over and sleep over at James' house for 2 days and they were to head off to the station!!!
END OF THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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thanx to these reviewers
by the way just a hint to reviewers im not english im french so sometimes i make mistakes and i tend not to write people talking on different lines, but ill try and i kinda need a beta reader if your interested please email me with the subject ff.net(you know when you see inbox). anyways thanx
me (aka someone), great weird yet funny reviews, it kinda made me laugh
Sarah Black, thanx for the helpful hints.
NicoleTheNiveter, thanx for beeing real nice!! ill be waiting for your review!
Litteratura Goddess, thanx for the awesome reviews, thanx for the helpful hints (i didnt make it clear why lily was hidden from magic, so you can make up some excuse or use something like her father knew about the growing dark wizard and wanted to protect her to some extent or something , i dunno, please come back to read my other chapters and i will gladly read your story!!
jillychan, i think you reviewed again so thanx again once more!!
and thanx to all my other reviewers thanked last time (they didnt review again, so no new comments), princesscherryblossom, naavi,satanslittleprincess, jillychan,heart2heart, hopefully i will get more reviews soon, anyways thanx for reading!!! and i dont mind constructive reviews it will help me make better storys!!!
AND BY THE WAY ONCE MORE I WOULD LIKE TO ANNOUNCE I NEED A BETA- READER!!!!!!! IF ANYONE WOULD LIKE TO BE MY BETA READER PLEASE EMAIL ME WITH THE SUBJECT FF.NET. THANX AND HAVE A NICE EVENING!!!!!!!!!!LOL
I LOVE ALL YALL
THANX
BYE BYEZ
NATS
ME
NAT
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