Love... Square?

OK, CLARY"S BIG MISTAKE
I just finished the first chapter and I relize that I didn't use SM names! DARN!! (I would swear but i dont think it is
proper). So lets just say that:
Charlette= Serena
Lizy= Ray
Martin= Andrew
Joeseph= Darien
For the next chapter I'll get it into my memorie to use SM names!!

Chapter 1
Charlette and her boyfriend Joeseph where a perfectly happy couple with quite a few good freinds. They were both good people,
not rich and snobish like half of my characters are usually. That was until Charlette ran into some wad of luck and won the
lottery. She had won the big 5million jackpot and after she had given alot away, donations to the poor, to friends and family
, she had .5million for herself. she bought her own very nice condo scince she was going to have to move out soon either, it
was an oldish condo with the need to be fixed up. She fixed it up with the help of her family and Joeseph. she furnished it
too, but she wanted her roo to be specialized, by a specialized furnisher (you know one of those people that come to your
house and tell you what kind of funiture will go nicely, and perfectly in it). She phoned the company that does that and a
girl that was new was free and could do her room, her name was Lizy.
Later that week on wednessday the 13th Lizy came over to look at Charlette's room. Charlette's brother was there today
because he was hoping to get his share of his sister's grub. "Yo Martin! Pass me that checkbook!" Charlette told her brother
to get his eyes off Lizy who he seemed to like. She was very pretty with a fair figure wearing a suit with her shoulder
lenghth brown hair brushed a hundred times so it semmed, that it shone like spun gold. Martin quickly withdrew his gase
and went for the check book. A week or two passed and Lizy and Charlette had becom friends because Charlette had given her
twice what her deserved pay was because she did such a good job, and Lizy came back with the 'mistake' They began to know
each other and Charlette was desperatly trying to become closer friends so that she could set her brother up with her. The
relationship between she and her brother was a good one and she felt sorry for him because he had not had a long term
relationship ever. Weeks came and passed and Charlette succeded in becoming friends with Lizy. Charlette had invited her
to go out to dinner with her, Joeseph, and Martin, her treat.
After they had had their meal, Charlette and Joeseph went to pay and 'otherwise in a more private area' while purposely leaving
Martin and Lizy alone together. Martin didn't know this but Charlette had asked Lizy to be his girlfriend, she had said yes
while afterwards admiting that she had liked him all along as well, Love @ 1st sight.
"So..." Martin said trying to make conversation, he was very shy and not good at this sort of thing.
"You have a very nice sister, and not just because she is VERY generous", Lizy said, she was better at the 'conversation thing'
"Why do you say that?" answered Martin, in confution.
"She set us up, can't you tell?"
"WHAT?? You know that I..." He broke off.
"Ya i know that you ___, and I ___ you too." She said, blushing.
"What???? You like me too????"
"Yes, from the very first glance" That part Charlette had put in for her to say.
"WOW, I do have a nice sister. And all that she had to do to set us up and make you andher friends."
"Mind you she did get a friend in return, and nothing is more rewording than a smile! Thatz my companie's modo,"
"Hey, well you wanna go to the movies sometime?"
"Sure, anytime, for you"
"Friday night, the scariest playing movie playing presently at that time?"
"Your on, and the one that looks the less frightend when we walk out has to pay for the other person's ticket!"
"Gotcha, only i was only joking"
"Well, you expect too little in a girl"
"No bebe, I find it all in you"
Smiling the new couple went up to meet the other two at the car.
-END OF CHAPTER 1-
So watcha think?? TEL ME WAT U THINK!!!