Hey, this is my first story, it's a poem type thing. It isn't exactly LotR related, but I wrote it with Sam and Frodo in mind. This would be in Morder. Please R/R, but be constructive in your criticism aka no flames please. Oh, Middle Earth belongs to JRR Tolkien so please don't sue me!
When I look into your eyes I wonder where the you of old has gone.
When I look into your eyes I used to see joy and love of life.
Now, I only see despair, pain. You are older than when we set out on this quest.
Do you know that I would gladly take your pain upon myself? Your burden on my shoulders?
I would go through an eternity of darkness if it would help you to see light.
I would die a thousand deaths to free you from your pain.
But I cannot, and it hurts me to see you this way.
When I look into your eyes, I see a foggy day, and I can only hope that the sun will break through to thaw your shattered soul
when I look at you.
When I look into your eyes I wonder where the you of old has gone.
When I look into your eyes I used to see joy and love of life.
Now, I only see despair, pain. You are older than when we set out on this quest.
Do you know that I would gladly take your pain upon myself? Your burden on my shoulders?
I would go through an eternity of darkness if it would help you to see light.
I would die a thousand deaths to free you from your pain.
But I cannot, and it hurts me to see you this way.
When I look into your eyes, I see a foggy day, and I can only hope that the sun will break through to thaw your shattered soul
when I look at you.