1 …Shines The Light…
Disclaimer: We don't own DBZ and we never will…damn.
SSJ here. Was making a bet with Kisha. The bet said that I was a better writer than her. So I need all of the reviewers to read (or look back on) Goten's Revenge and …Shines the Light… and vote for who is the best on this chapter. I need to know.
Anyways, back to maturity. I'm going to give one good idea, a thanks, and then we'll begin.
Good Idea: (* means very good) (+ means good)
+ Song Parodies For The Teenage Soul-SSJ Tokya (No real rating) (Humor/Parody) (Please read and review it, we only got one review. You can request songs you want on there and we'll make a parody for it…if we've heard of it.)
Lily: Thank you for adding my story two if by sea to your favorites. You're the first person to do that (that I know of). You made me so happy. Thank you. Now, I truly feel loved.
Sporty! Anyway, let's begin.
Chapter 12: Danger
Part 25: 2nd Blood
(THIS IS A SHORT PART!)
(Random Cave: 11:50 p.m.)
Gohan landed in front of the cave.
'The note says, I'll find what I'm going for in here.' Gohan went into the cave. He looked in horror as blood drip from the walls of the cave. There lying in a lake of blood were his friends Chaotzu, Tien, Oolong, and Master Roshi. Gohan turned away. He looked at the cave wall. There was a message written in blood.
"Time of death: 11:40 p.m." read Gohan. He gasped and ran out of the cave.
'Damn who ever did this. I swear I'll find them and kill them.' He screamed in his head as he flew away. He didn't get far when he say a figure sprawled out on the ground. The figure had black hair was wearing a kimono.
"MOTHER!" cried Gohan. He flew down to where she was. Gohan landed beside her. Chi Chi's face had taken a beating. Her mouth was bleeding and she looked unconscious. Gohan slowly picked her up. He checked for her pulse and soon enough he found it. He then checked her breathing. She was breathing lightly and it started to fade. Gohan flew into the air.
'I've got to find a hospital.'
Part 26: The Guard
(THIS PART IS PRETTY SHORT)
(Asylum: 11: 47 p.m.)
Marron screamed again. Her scream filled the air, again. The guard swang at her again. This time she caught his fist and kicked him between the legs. He screamed and grabbed his…um…area (ouch). Marron tried to run away but he grabbed her shirt and pulled her back. He tried to kick her but she dodge.
"BIG BANG ATTACK!" the energy flew past Marron and at the guard, it pushed him back into the wall and dug into this body. The guard scream and cried in pain as the ball of energy dug deeper into him. It dug and dug and dug, until it ripped him apart. Blood and body parts flew everywhere. Someone pulled Marron away and flew her away from the scene.
Marron looked at her rescuer.
"Thanx Trunks." She said sweetly.
"No probably." He landed beside Goten and let her go.
"Marron, why are you here?" asked Goten. Marron smiled.
"Um…I guess you can say I followed you." She said.
"But, how? We flew here…" a large roar interrupted Trunks. The roar grew louder and louder. The two Saiyans covered their sensitive ears. Trunks, Goten, and Marron watched as the lights flicked and eventually went out.
I'm sorry these chapters are so short. Chapters 13 and 14 will definitely be long! (I hope.) Anyways, I'm going to start on chapter 13. Out!
I just read my reviews before I posted this. Thanx for reviewing Burned.
Burned: I'm sorry they are so short, I can't help it. Hey, yours are short, too.
Disclaimer: We don't own DBZ and we never will…damn.
SSJ here. Was making a bet with Kisha. The bet said that I was a better writer than her. So I need all of the reviewers to read (or look back on) Goten's Revenge and …Shines the Light… and vote for who is the best on this chapter. I need to know.
Anyways, back to maturity. I'm going to give one good idea, a thanks, and then we'll begin.
Good Idea: (* means very good) (+ means good)
+ Song Parodies For The Teenage Soul-SSJ Tokya (No real rating) (Humor/Parody) (Please read and review it, we only got one review. You can request songs you want on there and we'll make a parody for it…if we've heard of it.)
Lily: Thank you for adding my story two if by sea to your favorites. You're the first person to do that (that I know of). You made me so happy. Thank you. Now, I truly feel loved.
Sporty! Anyway, let's begin.
Chapter 12: Danger
Part 25: 2nd Blood
(THIS IS A SHORT PART!)
(Random Cave: 11:50 p.m.)
Gohan landed in front of the cave.
'The note says, I'll find what I'm going for in here.' Gohan went into the cave. He looked in horror as blood drip from the walls of the cave. There lying in a lake of blood were his friends Chaotzu, Tien, Oolong, and Master Roshi. Gohan turned away. He looked at the cave wall. There was a message written in blood.
"Time of death: 11:40 p.m." read Gohan. He gasped and ran out of the cave.
'Damn who ever did this. I swear I'll find them and kill them.' He screamed in his head as he flew away. He didn't get far when he say a figure sprawled out on the ground. The figure had black hair was wearing a kimono.
"MOTHER!" cried Gohan. He flew down to where she was. Gohan landed beside her. Chi Chi's face had taken a beating. Her mouth was bleeding and she looked unconscious. Gohan slowly picked her up. He checked for her pulse and soon enough he found it. He then checked her breathing. She was breathing lightly and it started to fade. Gohan flew into the air.
'I've got to find a hospital.'
Part 26: The Guard
(THIS PART IS PRETTY SHORT)
(Asylum: 11: 47 p.m.)
Marron screamed again. Her scream filled the air, again. The guard swang at her again. This time she caught his fist and kicked him between the legs. He screamed and grabbed his…um…area (ouch). Marron tried to run away but he grabbed her shirt and pulled her back. He tried to kick her but she dodge.
"BIG BANG ATTACK!" the energy flew past Marron and at the guard, it pushed him back into the wall and dug into this body. The guard scream and cried in pain as the ball of energy dug deeper into him. It dug and dug and dug, until it ripped him apart. Blood and body parts flew everywhere. Someone pulled Marron away and flew her away from the scene.
Marron looked at her rescuer.
"Thanx Trunks." She said sweetly.
"No probably." He landed beside Goten and let her go.
"Marron, why are you here?" asked Goten. Marron smiled.
"Um…I guess you can say I followed you." She said.
"But, how? We flew here…" a large roar interrupted Trunks. The roar grew louder and louder. The two Saiyans covered their sensitive ears. Trunks, Goten, and Marron watched as the lights flicked and eventually went out.
I'm sorry these chapters are so short. Chapters 13 and 14 will definitely be long! (I hope.) Anyways, I'm going to start on chapter 13. Out!
I just read my reviews before I posted this. Thanx for reviewing Burned.
Burned: I'm sorry they are so short, I can't help it. Hey, yours are short, too.